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Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Preparing to Wait
agh !! i was so hoping for Bella's testimony to begin ... can't wait for the next chapter :) this is making me to anxious !!! i think i need a drink
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Preparing to Wait
Belly is a lot braver than me! Thanks for the chapter. :) nancy
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 44 - Preparing to Wait
great chapter
Reviewer: crazymoma123 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
Your story is fabulous! I can't imagine the mental stress of going through this process step by step. I'm truly in "awe". Hang in there and keep up the great work.
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
i think that he was crueler to maggie. there really wasn't anything that they could say to charlotte that would make her story unbelievable! i wonder what hes going to do to bella? i think that hes going to do the worst to her! im sure its going to hurt her and be really ugly! i hope that alice gives it to them!
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
Oh, he;s definitely saving his worst for Bella, by far. That I can bet on. He did what he could to Charlotte but she didn't give him anything to work with, so I think Maggie got it a bit worse.
Reviewer: longtobeme (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
I can't wait to read the next chapter! You've written a great adventure for EandB and I hope that B gets the chance to face her demons in court.
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
Of course he's gonna be worse to Bella. They are aiming for her more than any of the others. She's the one who got this ball rolling. I really hope that she holds up though. And I'm interested to see what Mike has to say. We haven't really heard FROM him as of yet... Just about him. I want to see how Edward handles him as well. Hope the next update is soon. I can't wait to read it.
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
I'm so relieved that Charlotte & Embry's testimony went so well! That only means that Bella's won't go so well... :(:(:( I can't wait for that chapter... Thanks for updating, and update soon! :)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
I would say Aro was tougher on Charlotte. Trying to pull her past when she was drunk on picking up men. But six years ago doesn't equate to 1 1/2 years ago and being raped. Also implying that she had enemies and would accuse anyone. When she discovered her BOYFRIEND was a married man it made her very upset. She had only started AA recently when it occurred. After the rape she had over 3 1/2 years of strength and courage behind her to cope with the drinking. She had Embry as sponsor plus she was seeing a therapist twice a week. With the extra support she had help from them to remain sober. Adored when she gave Yes/No answers for most of the questions. When Aro started prying for information regarding Maria she had no idea where he was heading at the time. Until her name was mentioned she was totally confused where he was heading. She included Aro as one of the UNATTRACTIVE men in the courtroom along with James. With Embry's testimony with explanation Charlotte didn't realize her boyfriend was married until his wife showed up at her apartment. Embry only confirmed Charlotte's testimony. How could Aro imply it was with her consent when she was brutalized, bruised, torn, and bleeding? Even rough sex wouldn't have been tearing or bleeding -- easier with arousal. Adored when he admitted he had a boyfriend for over 15 years. Talk about embarrassing Aro in the courtroom. If he had done his homework, he would have know that Embry's relationship with Charlotte was friends and not intimate. Heterosexual chauvinistic pile of garbage. The following day being Bella, Alice, and Mike regarding her own attack. It will be harder than the others since he did try to kill her with his knife. Also that she had been living with Mike and she had noticed him at the bar. Implying that Bella met him willingly. Interesting chapter to come. Hopefully Edward will be able to keep himself composed while Bella is on the stand and being badgered by Aro and his implications.
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
Oh hell yes Aro will try to crucify Bella if only to rile up Edward. This was a good chapter, I think Charlotte was awesome!
Reviewer: Azlady (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
i think he was meaner on maggie, all he proved with charlotte is she had no reason to lie about the rape because she had no boyfriend and therefor if it was consentual then why hide it. I think Aro is saving up for Bella. I think he is going to be a little bit meaner on Bella then maggie but his questioning will be similar. Please update soon.
Reviewer: MaliaMog (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
BRAVO BRAVO!!! ENCORE!!!!!
no really, another chapter, por favor.
Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
I am scared that Bella is going to get the brunt ofAro's bullshit, I hope she doesn't let it affect her too badly, I know she will probably cry, but I really hope something like the Embry being gay will happen with Bella, not anything about gay but something that makes Aro speechless and not know what to say. I hope Bella and Edward are ok, I also think there should be something in Bella's questioning mentioning that she has only ever willingly slept with 2 men, and before the rape only her fiance Mike and after her rape only her fiance Edward. So that Aro can shut the fuck up about the victims being whores' and wanting his descusting pervert of a criminal. James descusts me, and Maggie's story made me cry, as well as bellas test hearing. I really hope the hearing for Bells isn't too bad but Aro is cruel. More soon please, great writing.
Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
He's going to go harder on Bella than on anyone else, methinks... but I'm sooo proud of the other women. They're doing so amazingly. Anyone want to join me in a group ass-kicking of James, followed by shoving a large, spiky pole up his ass? Not normally violent, but... some people deserve pain.
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
good chapter. i think bella will get the worst of it, however.
Reviewer: if only (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
Good to have you back. Great chapter.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
Great chapter. Glad Maggie and Charlotte have testified. I think Aro was a little worse with Charlotte than he was with Maggie but he's going to get worse with Bella. She's the reason this case was reopened. Can't wait to see how things pan out. Please update soon.
Reviewer: EdwardCullenlovely (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
Omg great chapter!!!! I loved it! I cant wait to see how things with Bella! Thanks so much for the update! :) Looking forward to the next one!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
great chapter
Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
i guess so. I just hope Edward will be able to keep his cool when Aro is badgering Bella.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
Can't wait for Bella's portion! It's going to get real interesting.
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
I think he will try to destroy Bella as it is his last chance to de-credit one of the victims. I'm sure the jury will love her, Alice and Charlie.
Charlotte is a very strong woman considering all the adversity that her illness and the rape have brought to her life. She did a great job. And I loved Embry's bomb!
Reviewer: bluiqt (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
I'm scared for Bella... But have faith that she can do this!
Reviewer: msclark2008 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Charlotte
I think Charlotte did good. I think he is gonna go hard on Bella.
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