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Reviews For Turn to Stone
Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Wow I can't believe its over!!!! What an amazing story, thank you so much for sharing!!

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

So sad that its over it was a great story...I look forward to your next one

Great job

Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Loved it!  A wonderful ending to a wonderful story; sorry I've been MIA forever.

 

Looking forward to reading your next one xoxo



Author's Response:

Welcome back, stranger.  We've missed you.

 

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Wow, what an ending.... Aro actually feeling bad about representing those horrible people.  Loved it.  Can't wait to read your next story.

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Excellent! I looooved this story!

Reviewer: SittingInBiology (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

I read this story in 16 hours. I'm absolutely in love with it. When I saw the words, 'the end' i cried. I cried like i never have before (lie, but i cried pretty hard). I love this story. Will there be an epilogue?

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Oh my God I can't believe it's really over! I've loved every minute of this story and the plot was fantastic. I'll really miss these characters you've created and reading this story. I'm so glad James and Connor were convicted and got what they deserved. Looking forward to reading more from you in the future.

Reviewer: EdwardxJacob (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Yay! Congrats on finishing such an amazing story! I can't wait to see the next.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

That was a great story. I'm sad to see it end. I can't wait for your new one. Your story was so well written and thought out. I was always excited to see it updated :)

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

This was a great ending.  It was fitting.  Edward and Bella have each other and their friends.  They have healed, they have forgiven, they have received justice and retribution and now they move forward. 

Looking forward to your next story!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

oh honey you had NOTHING to fret over.  This ending in my mind was perfect.  I loved the finality of it, but it still felt real like it wasn't this fairytale ending but more how in real life things would work out.  If that makes sense :)

 

I love you, and you are a great writer...never lose sight of that!

Reviewer: readlots (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Fantastic story. Thanks. I appreciate your sensitive handling of sexual assault. Sometimes the word 'survivor' may have been more fitting than 'victim' though. Well done with your story and for being very true in your characters' personalities.

Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Poor Maggie, but at least that sleaze and the rest of that deranged family will be locked up!!!! I am kinda disapointed that we didn't see Bella and Edwards wedding, since it would have been the only time that something was just about the two of them. But all is well I can just make up pictures in my head!! Can't wait to see what you put out next!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Waiting for the jury to finally make a decision must have been nerve racking for them.  I know it was for me just waiting for the next chapter to find out what will happen.  To have to wait all day to have it extend into the following day the tension, fear, worry, etc... all the parties feeling.  From all the family and friends, to the victims, and even the attorneys.  I guessed Rose was pregnant when Emmett kept talking about whatever my baby wants  my baby gets (Pizza.)  It was obvious.  Surprised Edward and Charlie being such smart men couldn't figure that out.  The biggest surprise was Aro.  Edward did notice the remorse the last day of trial with his closing remarks outlandish theories of alternate occurrences.  But for Aro to call Edward to talk to him.  I really thought it was a set up.  Couldn't figure why he would want to meet in secret.  Only to find out that he was appalled, disgusted, remorseful, and even guilty for having defended such an animal.  And to find out that James learned the actions by his father because women don't know what they want so you have to show them and take charge.  At least that was the way I interpretted it based on the testimony of the women.  A man that pleading doesn't even affect is a sick bastard indeed.  I was glad that Charlie went with Edward and that Ted/Cynthia insisted on having additional guards in place in case of trouble.  I can understand why Aro refused to defend Connor.  He had his hands into everything illegal to have his son acquitted.  Connor thought with all his money and power no one would ever touch him or his family.  He could outsmart them by threatening jurors, witnesses, etc...  No one would convict because they were above the law.  With their money and power they owned the law.  Glad they were all taken down a major peg (crash downfall to the basement.)  What I didn't understand was why Maggie's charges were not guilty?  I know her boyfriend and father won't believe it.  They know James was guilty.  Even the jury foreman knew those first two charges should have been guilty and not (not guilty).  Charlotte and Bella's charges James was guilty on all of them.  James having the gall to stand up in court and claim his innocence was doing nothing but proving his guilt and his arrogance.  The plan of Edward and Charlie (mostly) of having Aro get all the names, places, dates of James's interaction with women was a brainstorm.  That way the court has the names of other victims to add to him.  Possibly have the victims contacted or maybe even offered help in their local areas.  Since the letter was sent unknown with all the information, no mistrial could be determined.  Jasper was the only one who kept his cool during the waiting period, where everyone else had doubts of James being convicted.  The very end Bella and Edward having their engagement party.  Everyone beginning to heal even more and making strides for their new lives together.  Even Charlie and Elizabeth dating and dancing.  Absolutely adorable.  Glad James is in for life in prison.  How long was Connor convicted of and sentenced?  Bella and Edward have come so far from the broken defeated people they were in the beginning to the happy couple alive and excited about living their lives together forever.  Both saved the other by pulling them out of their comfort zone, their protective shells, to strive to be the best they could be, function to their fullest capacity, to allow them to be happy, forgive themselves for their mistakes, understand that some things happen without any blame associated with them.  To again face the world, enjoy their friends, new things, and embrace their love for one other to the fullest.

Reviewer: Azlady (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

wonderful and i am glad james went away...its sad they didnt believe maggie got rape, but i guess with the evidence i can see why,.

Reviewer: emgurd3 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Congratulations on your finished story! It was absolutely brilliant and I have loved every single chapter and update! I look forward to reading your next project, and I'm sure it will be just as well written as this was! :]

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Wicked little twist their with Connor also being a serial rapist. I've enjoyed Turn to Stone and loved how Edward healed Bella & Bella healed Edward. Thank you for sharing your talent here. :)

Reviewer: twimomof4 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Really good story, I enjoyed reading it. 

Reviewer: belachia (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Thank you for taking the time and putting in the effort on this story!  It couldn't have ended any better than this!  I'm sorry to see it end, but all good things do!  Keeping an eye out for your next fic!

Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Congrats on finishing! I really enjoyed reading and I hope that your future ventures have the same strong characterizations in them. It's truly the main reason why I enjoyed this so much.

Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing it and your talent.

Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Wonderful!  Love it!  Great story!

Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Wow I liked how you ended it. And I am glad that he was found guilty on at least one of the girls. And I think it is so sweet Edeard's mom and Charile are dating. I hate to see this story end but I like how you did it. Can't wait for the next sory.

Reviewer: EmoryB123 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

Thanks so much for the great new chapter! I can't believe it is over! I have enjoyed it so much!

I found this hard to believe: "Charlie, Jasper, and Liam begin a rock-paper-scissors battle. Maggie is the unofficial judge." ---- That just doesn't sound like something those guys would do! They must have really been bored!

I kept trying to figure out what Jazz was so certain about. He repeatedly said all would be fine, but how did he know? I thought at one point that he planned to kill James so that the "problem" with him was eliminated! I worried about what would happen to him if he did that, though.

I have waited a long while for the verdict! I am not sure why Maggie's charges were not upheld, but at least the others were! James's conviction was the least that jury could do! You just had to give us some more drama, didn't you? When The Good Guys started thinking that James may be found not guilty, I was worried! That attempted murder conviction was my "Favorite" part. Thanks for the conviction!

It was hard for me to understand and believe that James really thought he was not doing something wrong! I hate to think that there are people out there that really believe that! None of us are safe!!

It was kind of weird for Aro to "confess" like that, too. I would never have thought that he would feel any remorse and regret. But I am glad that he is now "redeemed."

I am glad that Bella and Edward each realize how very important the other one is in their lives: "Because of you I didn't turn to stone. I thank God everyday that you found me." "I thank God that you found me. I love you, Bella. I'll love you forever."

I had hoped to see Carlisle again. Oh, well.

This is an excellent chapter. Keep up the good work! I look forward to seeing what you write next!

Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict

I loved it! So sad to see it end but happy to know how it did. :)

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