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Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Holy sh*t! I just read the summary and apparently James is the rapist! Now you have to update sooner!
Author's Response: I'll try. I can only write when they talk to me.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Emmett definitely redeemed himself. Update soon! I really want to see what happens when the truth comes out.
Author's Response: It aint gonna be pretty.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Call
Cynthia totally rocks! As for Bella cooking dinner, is it b/c she doesn't like being out at night?
Author's Response: Bingo! She's afraid to go out at night.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Definitely NOT Gay
eeeeeee!!! I'm so excited!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 5 - They Speak
Cytnhia is a total sweetheart.
Author's Response: Isn't she? She's just the same in real life. I love her.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Day Five
let the fireworks begin!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Bella
I feel so bad that she has to go through it all...it seems that the nightmare never really ends. I'm glad that she is making strides towards taking her life back.
Author's Response: She has a long way to go and Edward's little revelation later will be a huge stumbling block. We'll see if she can overcome it.
Reviewer: roroduff (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
He did just that!
Aww, im glad Edwards a gentleman, other wise Bella would likely freak out!!
Author's Response: Yeah, she'd probably run screaming if he moved too fast. And he's so unsure of himself he can't move any faster.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Edward
I feel so bad for Angela. I can totally understand why she chose to do it in front of Edward. The effect that she was going for definitely worked. As I was reading the part about James, I couldn't help but think that maybe he raped Bella too (after he was aquitted). That would totaly throw a wrench in Bella and Edward's soon-to-be relationship. I'm glad Edward is finally going for the change.
Author's Response: It truly broke my heart that Angela died. Edward will never be the same.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Four Days Ago
Just wanted to tell you that I am very much enjoying your story. It is very different from your other one, but I like it all the same. Thanks for all the warnings about whats to come.
Reviewer: we live for love (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Great chapter. I loved their date night. Edward is so cute and sweet. I can't wait for them to open up to each other. They have been through so much. Edward's dream was really creepy. Even though I don't like defense attorneys - Edward was still doing his job when he defended a rapist he thought was not guilty. It's not going to be good when he finds out the same man raped Bella. Can't wait for your next chapter. By the way I love Cynthia!
Author's Response: Edward didn't think he was defending an innocent man. He knew that James was guilty as hell. It just didn't matter to him then.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Prologue
It does start out really sweet. Just think about all the time they wasted by not being together. If only someone said something...
Author's Response: They are truly made for each other.
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Aw. I heart this chapter so hard!
Edward was awesome. Bella was awesome. Alice was awesome. Emmett was awesome. And Cynthia is the epitome of awesomeness!
I've missed TtS; that wait was so long. I'll have to bribe you to get the next one faster =] Thanks for this one though!
Author's Response: What kind of bribe are we talking about? I can be bought.
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Emmett has redeemed himself a little. He still needs to prove his a reformed man but not being a skank and wanting to drag Edward with him. So when does Edward find out dhe was raped? is it going to be during an outing?
Author's Response: Seriously, the fallout from the reveal of her rape is going to be really bad. If you all knew how bad, I don't think that you all would want me to get there that quicky. It's really, really bad.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Awww i made the chapter notes - THANKS!!!! how sweet :)
I loved this chapter - I love how slow moving you are with this story!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Hey, you earned a mention. I really do appreciate the advertising. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
I love this story.
If Edward freaked over his dream, how is he going to handle the truth of Bella's situation? I bet it will be equally has hard for Bella. Alice will have Edward's head.
Author's Response: You have no idea how bad it's going to be for all of them.
Reviewer: Cadance_Sparrow (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Okay, so I looked at my previous review thingies, and apparently my review for your last chapter didn't save *sobs* my internet is going haywire at the moment though, stupid thing.
BUT ANYWAY.
The last chapter, and this chapter, were both absolutely fantastic, you ARE absolutely awesome, and this fic just keeps getting better and better, and I am really, really excited to see where you take it. I'm especially interested in how Edward and Bella find their link through thingie-ma-jig. I've got a few ideas on how you're going to do it...but truthfully, I actually have no clue as to how you will actually make it happen, so I'm super excited to see more...
So yeah, awesome, again, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I would be very interested to know your ideas. I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Loved the chappie, of course. Frustrating missed opportunities to kiss Bella -- poor Edward. However, I'm guessing maybe it was for the best, as maybe that might be much too far too fast for Bella. I wonder if one of the reasons that she feels so comfortable with him is because he is going very slow; for her, any sort of physical contact or anything that might arouse her might trigger a reaction. I think that you write their uncertainty and vulnerabilty so well... I just absolutley love these characterizations.
I also like the way you've incorporated some of canon Edward into the story with the dreams -- he's not a mind reader, but the dreams represent a sixth sense. I think that's a nice touch. The dream was disturbing though. And the fact that he had to have a drink afterwards?? Good lord, I can't imagine what it's going to be like when he finds out that (a) Bella was raped, and (b) raped by James AFTER the acquittal. I'm worried he might spiral down into raging alcoholism. More and more I'm seeing how much that is going to absolutely devastate him. Just gives me chills. Excellent buildup.
Happy to see that Emmett is beginning to redeem himself (not that I thought he was bad before, but clearly not supportive and an enabler. I just love Emmett.
And last but not least ... this was the best Cynthia chapter so far. She's such a wiseass. Loved the banter with her and her husband. She's great!
Great job **hugs** Thanks for writing, Nikki!!
Author's Response:
You're spot on with how she would react if he moved too fast. And he's so sure that he isn't worthy of her that he's afraid to move any faster.
It was a very disturbing dream. I almost put it on the forum before I posted the chapter, but decided that two dreams on the forum would be too much.
I got a lot of bad comments about Emmett. He really is a nice guy; he's just a little misguided.
Cynt and her husband really talk to each other like that. It's hilarious!
Thank you so much for everything. You'll never know how much I appreciate it.
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Ouch..If he's already having dreams like that then it's going to get really bad when he find out about Bella...Great chapter.. ;D Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: You have no idea how bad he's going to take it when he figures it out.
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
awwww this edward is the sweetest edward! i love him! i'm sorry about his disturbing dreams though-life ain't fair-no wonder he drinks!
i hope things progress well with himself and bella, though do i smell some angsty drama in the works!? uh oh...
keep up the good work; can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Yep--Emmett's better. :o)
I know it's about to hit the fan, but I still want more!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that Emmett has redeemed himself a little. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: little_star (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
I'm really enjoying this. Cynthia, that peerless babe, is unparallelled in fanfic.
Author's Response: I'll tell her you said that. She'll love it! Thank you.
Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 9 - And a Show
Aww, sweet Emmett makes me happy!
Author's Response: See, he's not a bad guy.
Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Dinner
Another awesome chapter!
Can't wait for the next update...
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Dinner
This story is getting stronger as you go; the chapters have a stronger build, the descriptions and internal monologue ever more engaging. Kudos, my dear.
Author's Response: I write what Edward and Bella tell me, so I get a lot of their inner turmoil. I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading and for the review.
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