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Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
Masterfully written but I'm DYING for the big reveal. I trust your timing because you've written a beautiful story, but I'm impatient. :o)
Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
Edward's POVs are so tender and sweet, just like Bella's. Hopefully they'll be able to declare themselves soon. Good job!
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
Cynthia would be so proud!
Reviewer: Cadance_Sparrow (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
Absolutely loved it *happy sigh* 'twas nice to see Edward's POV on this. Bella makes me want to cry because she is so sweet and lovely, and kinda ruined, but she's just trying so hard...
Plus it was groovy to see Cynthia and also EMMETT! :D Love Emmett, even though he's been a bit of a douche so far, it was great to see him being nice, and 'helpful', ha :P
As always, it was absolutely amazing....
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
Great chapter. I'm so glad Bella was able to leave the house and go to dinner with Edward. Edward was so sweet. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: I Punch Werewolves 4 Fun (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
OMG im preparing for the attack of the pixie on crack!!!! nice chap, im proud of bella
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
Yay she did it!!!!
And good job Edward!!
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
It is all kinds of awesome that Bella did it and that Edward was so dilligent in making it happen!
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
What a huge hurdle Edward helped Bella overcome! He's helped her heal so much already. God, I just love your E & B so much, love Cynthia, Jasper and Alice. And even Emmett!
As always great chapter. xoxo
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
Oh Do I love Edward!!!! Loved hearing his POV and getting a glance into the restaurant....
After every chp i'm always hoping more more!
Thanks for the shout out on the one shot...I really appreciate you saying all that!!!! you are far too kind.
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
That was absolutely wonderful. As hard as the time out was on both of them because she was scared, they seemed to have a fairly good time. I'm looking forward to Alice and seeing how she reacts. I know she's escited, but I can just see the bouncing pixie now. :)
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
Wows - YAH!
Reviewer: joladeh (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
lovely chapter; i'm glad that edward is so understanding about things so far and is giving her time to tell him more. also, i love that bella is making progress and that she feels safe with edward!
can't wait for more! i love this story!
Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
i love how understanding edward is.
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
another great chapter, but i was hoping you'd post a link to the forum.
Reviewer: xmouth (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: I Punch Werewolves 4 Fun (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
awww hes trying to help her with whatever she needs, its cute
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
very very sweet!
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
Awesome. She's making progress
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
I loved this chapter. I'm glad she finally told Edward part of what happened. Edward was so sweet that I got all teary. I liked:
“If you have a panic attack I will hold you until you calm down and then I will continue to hold you until you feel safe again. I won’t let you go, Bella. I won’t leave you. I’ll take care of you.”
and:
"I don’t like for you to be in pain. I don’t want you to feel like you have to do this for me. I’m here for as long as you’ll have me. I don’t need to go out with you after dark. I do need you happy.”
I'm glad Bella wants to "win the war". Hope they make it to the restaurant. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
sweet sweet edward. i hope it continues this way...though i know they are in for some bumps ahead. loving it.
Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
Won't Alice be worried? They didn't tell her and Jasper that they were leaving...
I like how sweet Edward is with her and I'm anxious for Ch 15 to find out about this perspective from his friend.
Thanks!
Author's Response: I think that Alice already knew what was going to happen.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
great story love his character in this!!!!!!
wtm
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
I thought Emmett is Edward's best friend?
I'm so proud of Bella and her willingness to trust and take a chance with Edward. This is so good for him as well. He derives a benefit from it as well. It gets him out of his head and our from the pull of a Grey Goose bottle.
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