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Reviews For Turn to Stone
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Oh bloody hell, well, now he knows exactly what happened.  The hard part is, will he be able to forgive himself for getting James free, and will he be able to tell you the truth. 

I understand the needing a breather, we'll be here when you come back.

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

O my. So now he knows what he did. I just find it sad he left Bella the way he did. That had to hurt her very badly.

Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Is it sick of me to be excited that we finally got to this part? I don't mean to feel this way, but I have been waited for us to get to the part where Bella and Emmett come to his apartment to rescue him from himself. It sucks that he left Bella alone after that bombshell though, but knowing Bella, she'll overcome it and be there for him.



Author's Response:

Bella doesn't find him.  She doesn't know where his townhouse is.  He's never taken her there.

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

I've been waiting for this shoe to drop, and now it has.

I'm sure it'll all turn out in the end though.

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Oh man. Oh no. Here we go... Oh crap! OH CRAP!!!

Man I don't know who to feel worse for! Oh man!

They have both come SO FAR! But the bad part of that is they didn't even NEED to, if Edward had let "The Beast" go to jail! Wow

Reviewer: blade24 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

im sure this chapter was really hard to write but thanks for the quick update anyways!

 

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

well...there is not much for me to say..great chapter.the best I've ever read.

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Nikki 

 

I know how hard this was for you...take the breather YOU NEED and come back strong.  I can't wait to see this journey!!!!

Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

I appreciate how hard that was for you to write.  It was a well thought out chapter.  It makes me sad that Bella is going to think that Edward does not want her because she was raped.  You have done a great job of character development.  I love them all.  Hope you don't take too long and thats for purely selfish reasons.  I want to find out what happens next. 

Reviewer: djjajacool (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

damn......i was wondering when the connection was going to be made..........that is crazy.........awwww now it is going to get sad.........im excited though....i like how quick you have been updating

Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Wow! Amazing chapter....I am desperate to know where the next chapter takes us. 

 

Reviewer: I Punch Werewolves 4 Fun (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

and the shti has hit the fan........ damn that was tough!

Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

I don't know what to say.  I know what's to come, and I'm devestated already, and it's not even posted!  I can imagine how hard it is for you to write this, especially now that we're getting into the thick of things.  I'm with you though, Nikki, you know we all are.  We can always petition Rob again if you need us too...

~Ash

Reviewer: ugagirl120 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

this story is really good and touching... i know the next few chapters are going to be tough and hope they come through on the other side together

Reviewer: trulyedwardly (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

omg, that is horrible

Reviewer: SpydrMnky26 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Oh sh*t! Here we go! 

Love this!

Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

I am proud of myself - and you; this was awesome- because I knew as soon as Cynthia said she wouldn't be in town that something bad was going to happen or that it would be the 'reveal'.

WOW. I wouldn't be able to handle being Edwrad now either. Poor Bella, too. I know she is probably having a panic attack by now. I think I know how Alice will react when all this really comes to fruition, but I wonder how Jasper will?

Until next time...

Reviewer: bemily (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Yikes!! I don't know who I feel worse for!

Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Oh my and the angst begins. I'm sure I'll have to have a drink with me for the next chapter...can't wait!

Reviewer: domenica (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Well done.  I've been waiting for that to all come out - and you've done it brilliantly.  I'm very interested to see what comes next!

Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

I'm glad Bella finally told Edward about the rape. I know he is shocked but he needs to realize that he just left Bella alone. She will probably freak out being by herself at night and thinking that Edward doesn't want her any more because of the rape. This was a great chapter but please update asap!

Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

oh no...she's going to think that he ran out on her...she finally tells him and he leaves!! i can understand why you need a breather though...that was probally tough to write. Good job though.

Reviewer: we live for love (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

I so love this story. You caught me off guard here. I really didn't expect him to find out in this chapter. I knew Edward was going to take it hard, but he is being so harsh on himself. I hope he doesn't leave Bella because he thinks it would be better for her. Now she is going to think he doesn't want her because she was raped.  I hope these two are able to talk this out. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

wow..that was intense...update soon please!

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss

Now I see what you are saying about not really wanting Edward to remember. That kinda sucks! I just hope to god he stays sober. I can't believe he just ran out on Bella. I know why he did it, but she doesn't. Now she is going to have abandonment issues all over! Ugh! What a vicious cycle.

Can I just say that I love Emmett and Cynt in this story. For some reason, when I'm reading it, I can hear Wanda Sykes as the voice of Cynt. Don't know why, but it just fits!

I hope your breather is relaxing, but not super long. I want to see how things turn out. My fingers are crossed!!!

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