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Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Strategizing

Oh my, that was effing amazing Nikki.  Like I said, you break my heart and leave me begging for more.  No one else can do what you do.  Wow... just... wow.

 

Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Strategizing

Oh my GOD!  How could he just spring that on her?  Poor Bella.  I feel so sorry for her. I feel bad for Edward too but I think he should have handled that a little more tactfully.  Please update soon.  I know they have to be ok. 

Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Strategizing

Ok, that was hard to read. Poor, poor Bella.

 

You are an updating fiend and I need you to keep it up or I might have a panic attack waiting for the next chapter!

 

I love this story even though it is completely heartwrenching right now.

 

Thanks!

Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Strategizing

OMG ... this is such a cliffy! I won't kill ya, don't worry ... lol ... just please, pretty please update soon because I want to know what happens next.

Thank you for posting this today!

Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 22 - Strategizing

ooohhh Bella!!!!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

Very tough topic, you have handled it well. Victims do think like Bella whether they fought, tried to escape, or let it happen due to fear, physical abuse, or by the use of weapons.  

Edward, I feel so horribly for him.  He blames himself for not only Angela's death, but now his beloved Bella.  He did it all for a bloody car.  Drinking that much to numb the body.  Drink more because thinking over and over about it.  He feels he deserves to die for causing so much pain, but he has done so many wonderful things since then.  Now will lose his license for breaking client/attorney privilege, but Bella is definitely worth more than a career.  You can always do something else.  Maybe teach at the University.  He is so gonna freak when they show up at noon.

Bella felt bad since the attack, never worthy of love.  Blaming herself for causing it, when she had nothing to do with it.  She was just in the wrong place at the wrong time. She at least knows Edward didn't totally abandon her because of what she told him.  She's know worried about him and what his issues.  Crypt message from Cynthia, wonder what could cause Edward to feel undeserving of her love.  Really don't know how they will take the information.  It will be a shock for sure.  But he didn't know her then, he was trying to please everyone in winning.  Pleasing his overbearing father, his boss, himself, and his want to succeed and get rewarded with praise as well as funds.  But as he learned the things were never worth letting him back out on the streets to destroy other innocent people. Looking forward to the continuation of this story. 

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

great chapter! its good to know what bella is thinking, even if it is depressing half the time. her dreams are freakishly premonitory (dunno if thats even a word).

i can't wait for the next chapter; i'm looking forward to edward's response to bella's visit and some sort of reunion i hope! i trust you anyways!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

Ok breathe...in...out..in...out...gasp.....

Pleezzzee update quick don't be leavin us hangin!!!

Her dreams -- Wow.

Ooohhhh what's gonna happen?!??!

Breathe...breathe...breathe...

Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

Can't wait for their meeting!

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Call

I love that Edward has been reduced to a blubbering, nervous mess.  Its quite endearing.

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Definitely NOT Gay

I love personification.  "Put that one back and get another one; that one's angry now."  I must have a strange sense of humor because that cracked me up waaaaaaay more than it should have.  Loved this chapter, by the way. 

Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Prologue

I really hope what they plan to do to get James behind bars works - well if Edward is going to lose his license it has to be worth it!

Poor edward and bella - both have been though so much, i hope they come out together stronger!

Great story!!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

EDWARD and BELLA seem to be really connected to each other emotionally they are both dreaming about whats going on with each other its kinda weird in a way but good in another.

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

So the next chapter holds the Edward intervention! I can't wait. I'm sure it will be difficult, but I'm too invested in this story to not want to know. I'm very anxious to read the next update and hope it's soon! :)

Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

This is not in anyway a filler. It's good to understand and get to know Bella's mindset after all that has happen. I am eager to find out how Edward reacts to seeing Bella again .. knowing that she knows what he tried to do with the whole vodka incident. Please update soon!

Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

This is not in anyway a filler. It's good to understand and get to know Bella's mindset after all that has happen. I am eager to find out how Edward reacts to seeing Bella again .. knowing that she knows what he tried to do with the whole vodka incident. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

Loved this chapter!!!!! I know this is EPOV but we need to see dear Bella's as well.  Her voice needs to be told for the entire story to make sense....at least in my mine :)

Reviewer: StoryPainter (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

This is a really good chapter - although still heartbreaking - and I'm glad you posted it.

I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I hope Bella and Edward can move past their pasts...

 

Thanks!

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 20 - Hold It In

Just read this chapter. Not sure how I missed a chapter. I feel bad for Bella. He was a jerk to leave like that.

Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

 I like your way forward with it... good luck with the next chapters

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

Yah! We're getting to the part where Bella knows what the heck is going on. I'm curious as to what her reaction will be. I hope she continues to be the 'conserned more for others' type person she tends to be. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

The dreams are getting more significant!! At least Bella knows what's going on now.  Hopefully Edward won't freak out when he sees her. Please update soon. 

 

Reviewer: avaesyn (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

Hey, good chapter. Hope they will work it out, although I'm curious about Bella's reaction when she finds out about James.

Um do you have the link for Definitions of Love? 'Cause I can't find it. Thanks! Um can u email to avaesyn@live.co.uk

 

 

Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

awsome!Can't wait for the next chapter..I wonder how Bella is going to react to what she finds out. ;D please don't let her get pissed at Edward.

Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?

They really must have a strong connection if they are having dreams like that.  Can't wait to see how the 'lunch date' goes down.

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