Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 24 - Change of Venue
Awww... cute chapter. Thanks for writing ;)
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 39 - Surprise!
ok so "they" are trying to take out all of the team!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is getting bad!!!!!!!! and Jake....... really!!!!!???????
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 36 - Sweet Dreams
damn it Bella and her prophetic dreams!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please let Edward be alright!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 35 - Future
please don't let eddie get hurt........ there has been so much pain already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 34 - Discipline
I don't think he will be disbarred........he is too much of an asset to the law community!!!!!!!!! Rosalie is probably taking him into the DA's office.....I mean just think about having a former defense lawyer with that kind of mind........seeing every way that the defense can turn the info....Rose is a genius!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 33 - Approval
I love Charlie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Surprise
Edward just fell from the pedestal!!!!!!!!!!! they should have found someone else to do it !!!!!!!!!!!! this is not fair to Edward, he is the one that was supposed comfort her after this!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 21 - What Now?
Yikes. Wonder how she'll take it...
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Recovering
Interesting... poor Bella, she must be a wreck. He better talk to her soon.
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Grey Goose Loose
He couldn't look at himself... makes perfect sense. Poor guy.
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 17 – Miss Bliss
Yikes. I kinda thought that was where this was going. Unfortunate... poor bella. Poor edward... lots of guilt...
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Attack of the Pixie
Awww... cute date. Wonder when either Edward or Jasper are going to get to figure out what's happening... and wondering what craziness Emmett is up to.
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Safety
Aww... so cute. Of course she's going to ambush him. When is she going to tell him for real?
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 14 - After Dark
Hmm... interesting. Wonder when she'll tell him more... another good chapter :)
I kinda want Jasper to know too... to be able to help, since Alice is so involved...
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 13 – Sunshiny Day
Aww... another cute time. I wonder how talking will go... I hope they make it alright...
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Ms Jones
Aww... just cute. I loved this chapter. I hope Alice doesn't actually kill him when she finds out what he did.
Had to cover my mouth to not actually laugh and alert my sister to the fact that I'm being a dork hiding in my room reading :)
best part of the chapter:
“I ain’t missed a thing. This one,” he points to Edward, “smiles at that one,” he points to me, “and she gets all mushy on the inside. She’ll give you anythin’ you want for that smile. Like I said, you could teach me a thing or two.”
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 11 - An Interesting Conversation
Aww... so cute. I like protective Jasper. He's a sweetie.
:)
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 10 – Round Two
Aww... cute :) Still waiting for the threatened heaviness... but I'm enjoying the wait :)
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 31 - Memories
ok Edward Sr. is an ass....can Carlisle just adopt him?????????
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Dinner
Aww... he's so sweet. And Alice is... so Alice. I love that she's worried about clashing with the car, it's pretty fabulous.
:)
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Call
Aww... how cute... I'm glad they're getting along so well.. another good chapter :)
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Definitely NOT Gay
Aww... well, she answered, at least :)
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Cynthia's Novel
ok so Carlisle is probably going to either crap his pants or help out!!!!!!! I can't tell yet....but if he is thinks that Edward is doing the right thing because Edward Sr. will be upset I think he will help Edward all he can!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 5 - They Speak
She is pretty wonderful. I liked this chapter too... so cute together...
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 4 - Day Five
Aww... they're both so cute and nervous... how silly of them :)
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