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Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
Great information. Conspiracy now as well as assult and sexual assult. It is going to bring in a lot of his family this time. The sample was not ran because it wasn't contaminated, but would prove to match James's DNA. Very interesting twist of the plot. Carlisle is supporting Edward as a son now with his mental breakdown, but what will happen when he finds out that Bella is a victim of James and that due to the horric incident in his office after James's case, that Edward will be providing evidence to the DA to help convict James for his crimes? Will he be understanding or treat him as his own father does? Which we all know is terrible, unloving, and unkind. A virtual cold-hearted, hard-ass man. I really feel for his wife to stay with such a demented and frozen man. Glad to see Bella back at work. I love when they steal hand squeezes at the cafe. It's so cute and sweet. Awesome Cynthia gave Edward such a hugh complement of being a brilliant lawyer, even better than Rosalie. With all the legal expertise involved on DA's side, I don't see how James will be getting away with any more crap. Wonderful about Cynthia's husband what a loving heart. To give his time to help Bella. Knowing the entire situation and the fact that Cynthia is crazy about both Bella and Edward. She keeps Edward in line both at work and personal, but loves him to pieces too. Love this story. Excited about seeing James' lose it in court when convicted to show the judge and jury just what a sick puppy he is inside. Shock the whole district. Place shame on the whole Cavanaugh clan and their dirty dealings behind the scenes to corrupt evidence, conceil and hide evidence of a case, interferring with a police investigation in Bella's case. Calling in old college favors for a rotten, evil, twisting, and sick son. Looks like James's sister isn't any better than her brother. Want to find them all doing long time in prison being bitch slapped every day. Or a someone told me, James should be placed in an all wood structure, naked, with member nailed to wall, the structure placed on fire, only solution to getting out alive is to use the axe and chop the member off. Sounds good to me now and first time I heard it. Isolation with only bread and water and forget the bread isn't quite as good, but it's a thought that might cross a victim's mind. Keep up the excellent work and the realist portrayal.
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
updateupdateupdate! soon! I should have seen it coming but I didn't. Now I need, yes need, to know what happens next!
Reviewer: I Punch Werewolves 4 Fun (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
you left it there?????? are you tryin to kill me???? pr make edward kill cynt??? im in shock monster, freakin shock.... WAIT is she married to james or is she his sister???? .... confused and in shock!!
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
love it
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
I knew the DNA was compromised, but I didn't see the Tanya thing coming. You write the best stuff!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
great cliffy
Reviewer: I Love Edward 76 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
That's all we get!!! That's just a mean cliffie!! Update really fast and I'll forgive you.
Reviewer: mom2kandg (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
OMG, didn't see that one coming...Tanya is related to James!!! That was an awesome chappie like always and I really love the relationship between Edward and Cynthia, they are just too hilarous!!! Looking forward to the next chappie to see what everyone says to that little tidbit of info....
Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
keep it coming dieing for more.
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
Excellent chapter. :) Please please update soon. Hope it won't be too long
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
oh my!
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
HOLY SHIT!!!Awsome chapter..You'll need to update fast, I can't wait to see what happens. :D
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
freakin tanya. hahah, this is getting soooo interesting. i can't wait for the next chapter. x
Reviewer: Alyndriel (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
I could almost hear the dramatic chord at the end of the chapter. I'm really loving this story. I always enjoy it when an author brings over some of the central character tendencies of the "real" characters, like Edward's "I suck" (no pun intended, although that is kinda funny) mentality and then does whole new things with them. I also love that Rose is kick-ass, and that there's someone around that can chick-handle Edward. Cynthia cracks me up. Thanks so much for writing- it makes my day when I get an update notice. Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
oooh...cant wait for more!
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 25 - The Storm
Just read the entire story! Great story! I'm very interested in seeing how they "get James"!! I love the added character of Cynthia and Emmett is great, as always!!!
Reviewer: Elizabeth Masen (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
Wow, what away to end!!! This is such a phenomenal story and just keeps getting better.
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
I know I say this repeatedly but I love Cynt. She is just so funny. Great chapter (aren't they all?). I'm glad that Carlisle is there for Edward and hope that he continues to be, cause I'm sure there's trouble ahead.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
Wow, that makes sense. Tanya really does manage to squirm her way in, doesn't she?
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
Ouch...T.C.D. what a slap in the face!
Reviewer: jamie78 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
wow, didn't expect that! this is getting soooo good now!
great chapter!
Reviewer: amg98 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
I love the Emmett and Cynthia are friends. That adds a new form of torcher for Edward. The new twist is great. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
Holy SHIT!!
Reviewer: giggles8 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
Dun dun dun .... love Cynth!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 26 - Mystery Solved
And the plot thickens... It's gettin good now! I can't wait to see what happens next.
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