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Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2011 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Bella Continued
Mike DID redeem himself!!...poor guy!
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 38 - The Beginning
this is such a great story. It's good to read a story that's so well detailed..:)
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
yay I loved the end this story rocked. your awesome
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Cynthia's Novel
hmmm Edward has to "attack" Bella, that will deffanatley be difficult. loved this chapter
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Grey Goose Loose
I liked the way this chapter was writen. very origonal
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 11 - An Interesting Conversation
like the story thus far. its deep and dramatic, and I love how real it is. jaspers accent is cute :) I dont think I would have minded it being deeper.
Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2011 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
i just ignored several updated story notices to read your story all the way through. most excellent! i am glad for how the trial ended and that edward's mother has another chance at happiness.
i would like to know what rosalie's idea for edward is for when he can practice law again!
i am also curious about the lawsuit that never seemed to be initiated against edward for breach of confidentiality. i am not sure that his malpractice insurance would cover him because he admitted that it was an intentional act and insurance does not cover intentional acts. i write professional liability insurance, but not for lawyers, so it *could* be different, but the principle of insurance are to guard against accidents, not intentional acts.
lastly, your note at the end was incredibly lovely and completely unexpected. thank you! i am inspired to go work on one of my stories now!
best regards, kayariley
Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 7 - The Call
i have to tell you how glad i am that edward came to the realization that 180 proof blood is not going to make him relationship material
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 32 - Surprise
awwwww!!!!! now i'm sad!!!!!! i loved it, but still!!!!!! D:
luvz u always, bri
~GODBLESS~
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 10:11 PM · On: Prologue
lol, sounds really good. i don't normally read NC-17 stories, but my mom and sister reccomended it 2 me becuz of my story that i'm writing. so far i really like it.
luvz u always, Bri
~GODBLESS~
Reviewer: rere2423 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 05:50 AM · On: Prologue
GREAT Story!!!!! I really enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to write it. Also I really like all the story recs I have now started reading some of them :)
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
Um, wow. I loved this story so much! Cynthia was so freaking awesome... probably one if the best OC's ever written. Great job!!
Reviewer: apl (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
yay, thanks for the story. glad bella could heal with edwards help. good ending too:)
Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
Not a thing to worry about with THIS ending...
Well done!!!
And thank you!
Kathie
Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
LOVELY STORY,THANKS.abk
Reviewer: sam604 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
great story, really enjoyed reading it. thanks for writing it.
Reviewer: SpookyKat (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
This was an outstanding story. You managed to write such horrifying subject matter in a sensitive way that was not too gory, but still got the point across. You are a very good writer.
Reviewer: j0125 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
First Edward & Bella without lemons that I really like! :-) Very entertaining and well written!
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 50 - The Verdict
Awww... what a sweet ending. Thanks for sticking with it, loved it all :)
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 49 - In Closing
So now here it is... The decision!!! I wish we could see in the jury... interesting... maybe we could get it in an outtake when the story is done?
Another great chapter, thanks for writing :)
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 48 - Tactical Maneuvers
da da da dunnn.... what's next???
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 47 - Defending James
Uh oh... here we go. Shoulda seen that one coming... Why wasn't he on the witness list?
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 46 - Bella Continued
Aww.. poor Mike. Poor everyone in a situation like that. I'm glad Edward is bein reasonable about it.
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 45 - Bella Begins
What a tool. Just saying. Should really be getting to bed...like now...so may or may not read next chapter yet. we'll see :)'
Thanks for another great chapter!
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 44 - Preparing to Wait
Its so late... and I should be going to sleep... but I'm totally not going to and am going to stay and read this instead. real life fail. :)
Another great chapter :)
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