i love this!

Author's Response:

Well that makes me HAPPY! :D 

 

LOve, sweets

That was hilarious.. I just got home from 3 hours of rush hour traffic and I seriously needed the laughs.  Thank you!  Looking forward to the big reveal!!

Author's Response:

happy that I brought a smile on your face!!! Always makes me smile too!! :) 

 

Thanks for leaving a review!! 

 

Love, Sweets

never laughed so hard in my life!!!

Author's Response:

Really??? WOW! Thanks for the nice review! Makes me so happy if I read that I made my readers laugh!!  :)

 

Thanks for leaving a review :)

Love, Sweets

First I want to say I absolutely love your story. I've never seen this idea done, and I think your story is awesome so far. I can't wait to see how it turns out, and as for this chapter, I thought it was so funny. I love how Rose just went all manic at times. She reminds me a lot of my sister, who acted the same way with her first.

OMG what did you do to Carlisle and Esme. Total 180 from how I usually see them and was hoping to see them here too lol. But I like it. It's funny, and I want to see them get burned so bad now! Love how the manager referred to Esme as a he.

As much as I love kids, I've never wanted to slap one so badly as RA the 2nd, who is prob going to scream at how I've butchered his name. I'm kinda afraid to see how poor Jasper's coping with the devil child...

Absolutely an awesome chapter, and I'm anxiously awaiting the next one.

Author's Response:

Haha I am so happy that you like my story so much!!! Makes me totally blush ;)

 

And to have a sister like Rose.. Man that must be heaven and hell the same time!!! I don´t know if I should envy you or not lol :D 

I love my Carlisle and Esme but I was really afraid that you all will hate them :D happy that you gave me a positive response!! :)

And you know what.. that is wonderful Outtake material--- the jasper; rob 2nd night in :D thanks for the idea!!!! 

 

Thanks for reviewing!!! love, Sweets

Loved the chapter! you made me laugh so much, the dance was priceless. I'm realy happy that you're updating again can't wait to read how their first date goes, is Edward going to tell her? or someone else would let the cat out of the bag?

Usually I don't like it when Esme and Carlisle are the 'bad guys' but I really liked what you've done with the caracters.

Well see you next chapter! in the mean time hope real life smiles at you.

Kisses. R.

Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving this sweet review!! I am happy myself that I could find the time and the inspiration again to write. :) I love it and it gets me in such a good mood myself. I am writing on chapter 11 right now and the date will be a "unique" experience ;) I can tell you that much! 

I am happy that you don´t hate me for making Esme and Carlisle the bad guys, but I just thought it would be good with the story :)

 

Love, sweets

Lol that was fuuny

Author's Response:

Hihi, happy that you liked it!! 

Thanks for leaving a review!! 

 

Love, Sweets

It's about time he asked her out! So excited to read more! Hopefully they will have hot monkey sex lol.

Jamie Perez

Goddess#4272

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Author's Response:

lol yeah I bet especially Edward and Bella can´t wait for the hot monkey sex ;P

Thanks for leaving a review.. Next chapter will be out soon :)

 

love, sweets

i really hope edward tells bella. but dam carlisle and esme are so annoying in this story!

Author's Response:

haha yeah they are pretty annoying but don´t be afraid after the next chapter you won´t see much of them again :D 

 

Thanks for leaving a review!!! Love, sweets

 

" But since he is as good at flirting as he is at milking a cat, "

Love your storyline and wit ... I am ROTF. Hubby thinks I've lost it ...

Author's Response:

haha I can only imagine. Sometimes while I write the chapters and re-read it, I start laughing myself and my roomate always thinks that I am either watching some funny movie or some funny porn LOL 

thanks for leaving a review! 

 

Here is the teaser link for chapter 10: just picture Edward and Bella doing that. ;)

 

 

www(dot)youtube(dot)com/watch?v=aSpnneXeDKY&feature=related

 

Pm me if the link doesn´t work or if you have any questions. :)

 

love, sweets

oh god that was so funny (the whole story) this chapter was great!!!!!! please con't.

Author's Response:

Hey!! thanks for leaving a review and of course I will continue the story :) Chapter 10 is already in work :) 

 

Here is the teaser link for chapter 10: just picture Edward and Bella doing that. ;)

 

 

www(dot)youtube(dot)com/watch?v=aSpnneXeDKY&feature=related

 

Pm me if the link doesn´t work or if you have any questions. :)

 

love, sweets

ur right it was funny

Author's Response:

Always happy to hear that my readers find my story funny!! :) 

Thanks for leaving a review! 

 

love, sweets

haha hundreds of children after him.  He & Bella share the same wild imagination.

Author's Response:

Lol I think all the characters in this fic have an overly wild imagination ;)

Thanks for reviewing!! 

 

love, sweets

New reader here and it looks like ittle be a fun read..

Author's Response:

Well I sure hope you think it will be a fun read! can´t wait to hear what you think about the other chapters and thanks a lot for leaving a review!! 

 

love, sweets