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Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
I think you're doing a great job writing her POV, because everytime I read this I feel as disoriented and confused as her! it must be hell to be Edward, his head has to be a hell of a EMO place! LOL
mmmm, I'm guessing maybe its Jacob's POV, or Alice POV (don't know why, I think maybe she knows something!) anyway, please explain what just happen, why it happen and a little of what can we (your readers) expect for the next chap.
Reviewer: Yram Ellen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
Is it Leah???
Author's Response:
Ding ding ding! New chapter is (finally) on the way!
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
Bella has me completely confused on what choice she's going to make... hummm maybe it will be Leah's POV... update soon
Author's Response: Ding ding ding! New chapter is (finally) on the way!
Reviewer: Ladyrose (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
I am so glad you are posting again. I love this twisted little fic. I am still unsure who i want Bella with. I say she doesnt choose and has both! Im going to guess the next POV is Carlisle!
Now sneak peek me woman!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
I think Leah has fallen in love with Jake and Your new POV will be hers. I'm looking forward to next chapter. Your Bella is kinda fickle but atleast she's having her way with these beautiful men. YUM
Author's Response:
Ding ding ding! New chapter is (finally) on the way! Let me know what you think!
Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
GGAAAAAHHHH! you're KILLING me here, franny! and the ironic thing is, i totally understand the absolute mess they're all in. at the same time i want to slap the shit out of all of them!
Author's Response: New chapter is finally on the way! Can't wait to see what you think of the new tangle in this mess!
Reviewer: toothpick (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
I love Lee's story too! This was a great chapter I'm lovin the fact that Bella and Jake got to reconnect here. I think that Bella has a tough decision on her hand but I'm hardcore Team Jacobe so you know who I'm pullin for to get the girl. Please update again soon!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
Loved Edward's reaction, no matter how dramatic.
Keep up the great work!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: mfoxee (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
very good chapter.
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
I'm actually removing your story from my favorites today and I'll tell you why. This back and forth crap is too much. Once or twice, I can see that happening. But in real life, it wouldn't happen like this - it's too far fetched and just too darn frustrating. She looks like such a spinelss and indecisive woman who doesn't know her own mind. I can't stand it any more! Sorry...
Author's Response: I'm sorry to have frustrated you so much, but I also thing that's a good thing, to cause that reaction. I will also only defend myself by saying that this isn't real life, and the books it is based on aren't real life either. This is a fantasy of a fantasy, and that's how I like it.
I just submitted a new chapter, which is a definite departure from Bella's mess. I'm not sure you'll like it, but I do hope you'll come back and try it.
Thanks for your feedback! :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
Great chapter...lemons are always excellent. However, this chapter has me rooting for Edward. Usually I leaned toward the man you choose to do a lemon with in the current chapter, but even though the lemon was with Jake this chapter, I'm rooting for Edward this time. So confusing...great stuff! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Confusing?! Wait til you read the chapter I just submitted! Can't wait to see what you think!
Reviewer: Lizzie 74 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
Yay, thanks for updating! gee Bella is a mess, she doesn't know what she's doing. Or maybe she really does want to be with Jake, he sems to do a good job at convincing her, Better than Edward. ...........I have no idea where this is heading but I love it & I'm so pleased you're still writing it.
Maybe an its going to be a Leah pov, I was going to say Alice but then Leah seems to have some issues with Bella so ?????
Will be waiting for the next update
Author's Response: Ding Ding Ding! You got it! New chapter is finally on the way! Can't wait to see what you think!
Reviewer: redhead_tn (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
Bella is quite the ... whore in this story... and beyond selfish. I started reading this thinking it would eventually redeem her character ... but ... chapter by chapter she just gets more selfish and more whorish.
Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
that freezing, blazing night in the tent - ung.
avid reader. teacher. bilingual. no other words for that particular phrase.
ironically enough i wrote the above before i read the following:
Conversing with vampires sometimes felt like being in a foreign country where you knew the language but had never spoken it with the natives before; you knew the words but had no time to process them or rearrange them into an appropriate response, and your tongue could never form them quickly enough.
so you knocked me speechless and impressed me with your insight. wow. can i have a sneak peek now? please?
Author's Response: new chapter is (finally) submitted! hope you like it!
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
I have to ask, "What the heck is Bella doing?!" She is going to the extreme lengths to hurt Edward. She needs to fish or cut bait.
Author's Response: Let's just forget about Bella for a minute! New chapter just submitted! Can't wait to see what you think!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 11: Thrown to the Wolves
awesome
Author's Response: new chapter (finally) on the way!
Reviewer: cullenquilts (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 10: Far Apart, So Close
Still with you and hoping for an update soon. You are writing this out beautifully---staying true to their characters yet taking them down a very inventive twisty road. Love it!
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 10: Far Apart, So Close
At this point I would like to see some action or resolution. I'm still with you with the story but need more to happen other than just angst.
Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts Still Beat
Is she really breaking up with both of them? She seems to be keeping quite busy with both of them. I do not see her being able to make any kind of definitive choice in the near future.
Reviewer: RavenRansom (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: Far Apart, So Close
I love this story but I can't stand ping-pong Bella anymore! Please, please, she has to pick one!
Author's Response: Thank you! Please be patient - things might get crazier before they get better, but there will be a resolution, I swear. thanks for sticking with me so far.
Reviewer: StillWaters (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 10: Far Apart, So Close
Okay, I just read this story straight through. I am utterly enthralled. I think you understand these characters better than S.M. I can totally see this whole circumstance play out just as you have written it. I am greedy for more, so please continue. Your writing is beautiful. You truly capture the essense of the myriad of feelings driving E, and B and J. I have always been a Team Jacob girl, but for the first time I like Edward. Finally, some humanity. I love your Jake as well. And Bella is turning into a more interesting woman. Anyone who has been torn between two loves can relate to the situation Bella is in. I am anxious awaiting a new chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it. I'm working on the new chapter, but since I don't have it all mapped out ahead of time, sometimes it takes me a while to figure things out. Please keep the feedback coming - there is no better motivator than knowing someone out there gets it and wants more. xo. Franny.
Reviewer: karen4honor (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 10: Far Apart, So Close
ggaaaahhh! you evil tease you! i still really reaaly want this to be a b/e hea but a e/b/j hea would work too-grins!
Reviewer: mrsblackandlautner (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 10: Far Apart, So Close
Please make bella choose Jake!!! Update!
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 7: Broken Hearts Still Beat
I like that they are doing what they want to do. Although Bella holds back with Jake. Anxious to see when that changes.
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: Echoes
Don't you love that? Not knowing what will happen In Your own story? Sometimes it seems they write themselves. And this one's good.
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