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Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 2: Fallout
Poor Edward. Bella's hormones are just playing all kinds of games with his head. Still. Great sex is its own reward. And OH, what great sex it was! Yum. :)
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
My god alive, that was incredibly, profoundly, amazingly, and wonderfully hot. I am not a B/J fan, but this... This was totally worth it. :)
Reviewer: TwilightFiction (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 2: Fallout
Excellent! I've been tossing around an idea about this kind of scenario, too. I can't believe more people don't write about this chapter of the book- it's by far my favorite part in ALL the books. SM really could have made things even more interesting. But I'm glad you did!
BTW, your chapters are out of order :P
Reviewer: EllaB (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
Wow, this story is so incredibly hot! Who knew something so wrong could be so good?
Reviewer: EllieCullen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
umm, didn't really enjoy that.
i'm sure you had your own point of view on Edward's total acceptance and actually enjoying that, but he would never let that happen! And he would never watch like that.
Jacob's thoughts don't act like Jasper's.
Bella is a whore for wanting that.
I've never written an awful review like this but it's my opinion, i'm sorry. Don't be angry. I guess the good thing about that is that my heart was going crazy when i was reading that, and i still feel weird. Which is a different feeling but any writing that provokes any feeling in me is good.
Ellie
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
Wow! Who would have thought Edward could have allowed that to happen in front of his face. Even if he was living through Jake's eyes.
Reviewer: justjo (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
Brilliant idea! You knid of got there before me... hmm.
Reviewer: BrownEyedGrl978 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
Incredible, I liked how you described the emotions so vigorously, just an amazing chapter.
Reviewer: Lobo (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
This is sick...beautifully written...but sick...sorry...
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
Whoa -- completely OOC but definately HOT!!! You have quite an imagination there, young lady!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Fire and Ice
HOT!
Fantastic work. Keep up the fabulous writing!
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