Reviewer: KayleeT (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 1: A Long Long Time Ago... but this is no fairytale.

Great thanks!

Reviewer: robpattinzon (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 8: Temptation is a dangerous thing

Awwh, what a sweet story.  I loved it, lust and ROMANCE!  Not alot of stories I have read have that. 

 

Your an excellent story writer, and you put alot of detail in your work.  Please make more :) 

 

Sincerly, Robpattinzon

Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 1: A Long Long Time Ago... but this is no fairytale.

Very nice! I'm enjoying it so much and can't wait to see what happens next!

Thank you

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 6: Four Significant Things

nice kind of cliff hanger there.

best chapter thus far

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 4: First Kiss

not bad, sad that edward kissed her but it was written really well.

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 2: The Courting Process - Inverted

aww Edward was so sweet to deny the kiss and have such good values.

Reviewer: renee721 (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 8: Temptation is a dangerous thing

That was amazingly sweet! I loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much :D

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 8: Temptation is a dangerous thing

I loved this. What a great angsty (and sexy) twist to their tale!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :D

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 7: I couldn't blame him, and yet I do.

Well, we all know that Edward is so 1900 with the morals and the guilt and such, but for Bella to act like such a shrew about something that happened what at least 50 years ago is sort of over the top. Come on. Of course, if Edward would just once hold her close when he was feeling aroused, then she would be less inclined to question it.

I like the story.

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)

Ummm, well would you blame Bella for feeling inferior/jealous even if it had happened 50 years in the past? Considering how she's only "human" and vampires don't forget things... and well in her defense (and to mine, too HAHA) she tried to downplay her feelings but it didn't work, I guess?

Haha, I don't know. But thanks for reaaadingggg

Reviewer: xoxabby (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 8: Temptation is a dangerous thing

love this idea!

Author's Response:

thanks! :D

Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 7: I couldn't blame him, and yet I do.

She needs to tell him what she feels (she never did that in the books - as a shrink it ticks me off. She makes SO many assumptions...that are wrong,and she would understand this if she asked him)

And...I agree, she is irritating bc she wasn't even born then. And the whole kiss thing, I mean please...

 

But, I have another chapter to read, perhaps redemption is in the cards! Well written description of her!

Author's Response:

Thanks very very much for the comments :] Hope you like the next one~

Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 4: First Kiss

There are no penguins in Alaska. And It seems as though Edward isn't hearing many of her thoughts. I like the story though so far, nice job.

Author's Response:

Oops, sorry! >_< But thanks for reading!