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Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ah so sweet! I like how you describe both of their mindsets, so hesitant and wary when they woke up. Young love J
Reviewer: haippa (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
pls continue
Reviewer: haippa (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 2
plz dont u ever stop dis story or i;ll sue..........................i'm not kidding
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter! Hopefully Emmett won't kill him.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
Ummmmmm I want to wake you to sexward too
When its ready get my chapter 6
Reviewer: zaiche (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 4
Yey, I was so happy when I saw a new chapter of this story!!! Great as usual! I can't wait for more:)
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 4
I admit that I would love to see Eddie-boy run away from an angry scary overprotective Emmet! Actually i picture it like this:Emmet chases Edward around the kitchen table and Bella runs to the cabs so that he will NOT take a knife in his hands!!!! (Hilarious isnt it?) Anyway I think it is too soon. I will be better off if Edward said he has company... ;)
Reviewer: Cullenator (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 4
SO fucking good. Dunno what else to say :)
Reviewer: filltheframe (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 4
I love you!!!! One of the best fics I've ever read. There's not too much background, the dialog flows naturally, and the scenes are HOT!
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
Holly shit!! This was hot!!
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 4
Awesome
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great chapter!
Yay! Edward and Bella are a couple!
I think that Bella will be able to protect Edward from Emmett.
Emmett is going to flip when he finds out....I can't wait to see that!
Please update soon?
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Check your mailbox for readergoof your banner has arrived
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
OMG!!! I need some dry panties.
Hi sorry, but I am the one who promised a banner and ended up so very backlogged. realLife happens. Sorry!
But I just read the oneshot and these three chapters and am so inspired I really don't think its going to take much time at all to get a banner to you. Please don't give up the story to is frickin' awesome.
Becca aka readergoof
Author's Response: No problem ... the next part is waiting on validation ... so take your time and I'll look forward to seeing what type of banner it inspires. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 3
i hope by that you plan to go on been watching this space been a while since you posted waiting for chapter 4
Reviewer: Alotalittle (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 3
F*ckhawt lemony goodness. Whew. I love this premise, it's such a cool idea for Bella to have this alter ego and Edward to figure it out. Hope there's more to this story! Love it!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
we are waiting patiently for you give us more love your story line
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 2
Mmmm. I can't wait until everyone finds out BELLA is Antonia Marie. :D
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
Mmmmm. Yummm. A CLIFF!!! And DAMN thats hott!
Reviewer: zaiche (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 3
ooooh this was sooo hot...I loved how they couldn't even make it to his place
you are a genius...I can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 3
Once again a very hot chapter!
Reviewer: TwilightAddict_NYC (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
More, more, more! Loving this story!
Another chapter please! :-)
Reviewer: Elizabeth Masen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 2
If this turns out to be more than just hot, sexy, smut; I can't help but wonder if Chuck was envisioning Bella.
Reviewer: Elizabeth Masen (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, that was hot. I'm about ready to call my hubby at work and have some phone sex of our own!!!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 3
My oh my......that was f*ckin' hot and juicy! Can't wait till they get to his place and have absolutely no time or space restrictions...
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