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Reviewer: ash0507 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

Im both sad and happy. Sad about Charlie but happy about everyone back together! The song is perfect with this chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I thought the song was fitting as well. It's a wide range of emotions going on right now. I think we are all feeling like Bella right about now.

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

*Sob.  I can’t believe Charlie’s gone.  It’s so heartbreaking.  I love that all the Cullens and rest of the clan have huddled together to help Bella.  Lending the car, the house, Edward’s room.  And then when he was there when she woke up!  Perfect. 

I just have to say, I love Em.  He’s always one to make light of a situation and help everyone to not feel so awkward. 

I knew Carlisle would understand and not blame Bella.  That it was the situation she was reacting to, not him.  No ill feelings to Carlisle either.  He did what he had to do.  He took a big enough risk with Charlie and the ventilator. 

EM AND ROSE ARE ENGAGED?!  How awesome.  Glad someone could bring a little happiness in the mix. 

Perfect chapter…enough happiness to mix with the sad.  Very well done. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! You've just said everything I felt while I wrote this chapter.

Reviewer: Sweet Melissa (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

I don't think it was wrong necessarily.  It was either betray Charlie's trust or tell Bella...had to make a choice to either way. 

I think Emmett & Rose moving back & getting engaged will add fuel to the fire for everyone else to follow suit. 

Also, Jake coming for the services I think would be pretty uncomfortable...can't wait to find out what happens!!!



Author's Response:

thank you! Carlisle was in a tough spot but he had to do what he had to do. Bella understood after the inital shock wore off. Jacob... we haven't seen the last of him yet!

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

I'm so glad Edward is back, but poor Charlie. My question now is how is Jacob gonna take this? Is Jerkob gonna show up or is he going to bow out gracefully?

Author's Response:

How is Jacob going to take this? Hmmm... well I'd like to think neither him or Edward are stupid men. I guess, just keep reading. I don't want to give too much away.

Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

I'm so glad Edward is back, but poor Charlie. My question now is how is Jacob gonna take this? Is Jerkob gonna show up or is he going to bow out gracefully?

Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

Love that they are all together again!  It was Charlie's mistake not telling Bella about his health issues, not Carlisle's.  My heart breaks for her that she's lost her dad, but so glad that she is surrounded by those who love her.  Look forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you! My heart broke for her as well but you're right, she's surrounded by so many people that love her and that she loves back. She'll pull through... with a little help from her friends (lol)

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

another wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

Ah, the reunion! Carlisle couldn't tell Bella anything, especially against Charlie's wishes. :( Doctors and nurses have their obligations to the patient first, and at least Carlisle tried to tell Charlie to talk to Bella.  *sigh*

Bella is so lucky to have the Cullens, and I am so happy that she realizes that. :)

Yay for a wedding! :) I hope we get to see it! On the other hand funerals are hard to write; I know that I'd be crying the entire freaking time. :( Good luck with that!

I think that Charlie would be happy knowing that Bella was in such good hands, and he definitely would be happy that she's smiling and laughing.  She's not being disrespectful to his memory at all.

Great chapter! Glad I had my tissues. ;)

 



Author's Response:

Yes, charlie should have been a little more honest with Bella. I think he knew that she would have all the Cullen's rallying around her to make it better. And yes, a wedding is in the future!! good times do lie ahead for the six. And keep the tissue's handy, we still have the funeral.

Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

great part!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: LittleMissSwan (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

No it was Charlies decision to keep Bella in the dark and it wasnt Carlisle place to go against his wishes and tell Bella!!!

Great chapter....cant wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

I feel for all of them. I liked the statement made to Alice. About packing enough to move back in...hmm. I hope its not short lived, them all being together, but part of me knows that even if they do go their seperate ways they'll end up together in the end.



Author's Response:

About the Alice comment, hmmm.... only time will tell (lol)

Reviewer: quartz54 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

lol mad this chapter had me crying and laughing excellent



Author's Response:

Thank you! I've got everyone all over the place!

Reviewer: Sylvia Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

Poor Bella!! I hope I'm never in that situation to see a parent die. Sooo the 6 are back!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

I know, but she'll pull through. She has amazing friends!!!

Reviewer: quartz54 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 10- I Run to You

wow mad i was crying well done

 

Reviewer: teya211087 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

So sad that it had to be Charlie.. I wonder how Bella will explain Edward to Jacob if he turns up for the funeral



Author's Response:

Let me ask you this, what if Bella doesn't explain who jacob is if he shows up?

Don't worry, all will be revealed at some point but Edward's not a stupid man. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

I think Carlisle was right to do it, even though I feel so sorry for Bella not knowing. He did his job. Also I cannot wait until Jacob and Edward meet. I keep thinking something bad is going to happen when they are all together! This chap was great, I love that they're all together again, even if it was still so sad!



Author's Response:

Are you sure you can't wait for Jacob & Edward to meet? J/k remember though, we are only seeing things from bella's pov. but all will be explained, eventually!

Reviewer: sara1985 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

i love your story, it is by far one of the better ones out there at the moment, and definitly one of the most well written.

While I understand that for the Twilight stories and it seems that most tend to go this was with Carlisle breaking patient/doctor confidentuality and it is just a story and for that I can accept, but in the real world of people and doctors, it isnt a practice that should be tolerated.

I hope that they do manage to stay together all six and definitly Bella and Edward, I predict that they will have to seperate again to sort out their lifes in their different cities but that they will in the near future all end up back in at least Washington state if not all in Forks, but i cant see them all manageing to find jobs in such a small location given the type of work that they are all in.

Again I love your story and wish you well in the continutation, and hope to that it is updated soon.

Sara



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I have to ask though, which ones are you reading? Because I could steer you to some pretty damn great ones that are far better than mine, but thank you! It's really great to hear someone say that when there are so many fantastic stories out there!

Have a little faith in our six. I think you'd be surprised what they could do, if they all stayed in Forks.

Reviewer: domenica (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

Please please don't have Tanya showing up to claim she's Edward's girl.  I don't know if I can take it!  I really love this story - keep up the great work!  Thank you for writing and posting - I love anyone that keeps me reading!  :)



Author's Response:

I will clear this up for you, Tanya will not show up to the funeral. We still have yet to really see her and we will, in due time, but Forks is not the place for her. Nor will it ever be.

Thank you so much it's all of you that really keep me going!

Reviewer: GreenPuma (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

Reunited, and it feels so good...

:)



Author's Response:

Just so you know, after I read ths, I had that damn song in my head!!! Thank you!

Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

I haven't been reviewing because I just stared this story and read it all the way through to here. I love it! It is so sweet and sad and true to life. I moved away from home after high school and life is never quite the same after. I never moved back and often think back to my best friends. We are all spread out across the US now. It's hard to keep people together and, unfortunately, deaths and weddings seem to be the only events that draw everyone back together.

I don't know where the story will end up, but I'm looking forward to finding out. I don't know if I want them all to move back to Forks, but I would at least like the couples to be together whereever they do end up. I think I would be okay with Bella in New York or Edward in New Orleans. Same with Alice and Jasper.

Anyway, thanks for sharing this story. I look forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, one for finding my story and two for enjoying it. I like you, often catch a story midway through and don't review until I'm done. It's sad but I get so caught up I can't stop and review. But thank you again! Keep with me and all will be revealed about the six. We have so much to look forward to!!!

Reviewer: pillowbiteraml (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

I love how honest and outgoing Bella is with her feelings for Edward! I couldn't help but say "awww" when she kissed him!

I'm happy she has realized the difference between her feelings for Jacob and her feelings for Edward!

I am excited to see the sov6 together again! The entire time I was reading about their reunion I had a smile plastered on my face!

It would seem that Bella is choosing to ignore her fathers death. I think this is how Bella is coping with the loss at the moment and I'm sure there will be hard times to come. I'm sure if I were in her position I probably would have reacted the same way. :-(          (I'll keep the tissues handy)

I think Carlisle was right to keep Dr/patient confidentiality. Although, again, I'm sure I would have reacted just like Bella.

Again, Great Chapter Holls!! I am hoping you are just trying to scare us with the comment about the sov6 reunion being short lived....I know you wouldn't do that to us! ;-)

XOXO



Author's Response:

Hay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chica!!!

Okay, you are the first to point out Bella and her grieving process. There are seven steps (obviously) and right now she is in a sort of denial. And not to mention we saw a touch of anger towards Carlisle. There is more anger to come. But she's kind of in a place where her emotions are all over the place. She sad for her loss, happy for her reunion and just kind of blah. There will a chapter in which she fully comes to terms with what has happened and I have yet to write it but I have the song picked out and I can't wait to get there. This is only chapter 11 and I've gotten 22 written so far, so as you can see, her grieving process will take up a good part of the story. She'll be so back and forth you may be whiplash! Lol.

Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

Yay! There back together again.
But poor Charlie. =(



Author's Response:

I know, and thanks for the reivew!

Reviewer: hidinginyoureyes (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

I love it :)
I most certainly hope that everyone does 'grow a pair' and just stay at Forks with each other.
Please, update soon. (:

Author's Response:

Nice turn play on the author's words!!! Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

Ahh Holly you are killing me three more?

I don't think Carlisle was wrong for not telling Bella.  It is what Charlie wanted. Knowing how he feels about Bella it must have been very dofficult for him to keep it from her.

He did however do what he thought was right in the long run  and kept Charlie alive long enough for her to see him. 

Honestly he had to choose between two unethical choices.  He chose the one with the least ramifications.

An unconscious Charlie can't complain about his DNR.  But an alive Charlie could be pissed about the Dr/Patient Confidentiality issue.  Not that I think he would of anyway.  I mean it's Charlie.



Author's Response:

Yes, three more but then good times lie ahead, oh and maybe a little more tension!! lol

Carlisle was in a tough spot. He kind of did what was best for both of them in a sense. He didn't break dr/patient conf. but the did keep him on the ventilator until Bella could arrive. he did what he thought was best, thanks for seeing that!!!

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends

Great chapter! I can't wait to see where things are heading with everyone, especially with Bella & Edward. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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