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Reviewer: kaylamarieswan (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
aww the car in the morning was jacob huh? i'm team edward all the way, but i still feel bad for jake!
Reviewer: BelovedSunshine (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
I just finished reading all the chapters....sniff..sniff..there are no more to read now!
I'm a HUGE fan of The Lost Boys fic and I've seen you and your siggy on the forum there. It's always looked intriguing, but wasn't the right time to read until now. I'm glad I saved it a bit b/c I didn't want to be interrupted until I could read through every chapter. Great Story! Thanks!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh!! The Lost Boys!! She owns me with that one!! We could go on and on about that story. I NEVER saw James as Jacob coming!! And thank you for checking my story out!!! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far! I know what you mean about putting some off. Some of my favorites I've had the luxury to read like 17 chapters in and then of course I'm like, what? Now I have to wait?!
We've got happy times ahead of us. I still have one sad chapter left to write, but it's a little ways down the road.
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
this was rele good! it brought me to tears!
Author's Response: I promise not to make you tear up for a while. Happy times ahead!
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
I'm sorry it took me so long to review. Anyway excellent chapter. I'm so happy that they are together and that Edward was there with her every step of the way at the funeral. It was a nice touch to give Bella, Charlie's badge. I even teared up because my father is a retired cop. So when that time comes in my life I will be like Bella. I can't wait for the next chapter and the talk with Jake. It should be intresting. Great work Holly.
Author's Response: Thanks Penny! And I totally understand. You're due for a chapter up soon, huh?
Reviewer: GxMx (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
Arrghh! Listen up Holls, just because we're facebook friends doesn't mean you can abuse me as a friend! LOL! What's abuse you wonder? Bad cliff hangers such as this. I can't handle not knowing what's going to happen with the talk! :-/ As if my life weren't complicated already now I have a cliffhanger to deal with! :-P
It's so wonderful. I can't tell you how much I love this story, and your emotional support! Seriously girl, idk what I would do without you. Keep up the great work, expect an e-mail soon btw! <3
Author's Response: lol, it wasn't that bad of a cliffhanger. The talk is up next, chill!! I'm submitting it tomorrow. and talk about a cliffhanger, hun I think you're living in one now!!! yeah, I'll be waiting for that email!
awe!!! Your making me gush!!! Thank you for supporting me and my little story. I'm here for you anytime you need me! You know that!!!!
Reviewer: Brie (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 10- I Run to You
AL-IS and J.A.Z.? that is soo cute :)
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
This is the second time you've made me cry! Quit it! :( (no srsly...good chapter though lol)
Author's Response: lol, thank you. I promise no tears for a while! I still have one cry worthy chapter but I haven't even written it yet.
Reviewer: Edward_Loves_Bella_1988 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
Oh, this chapter made me cry. It was good though! I love how Edward is tehre by her side all the time! <3 Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I'm sorry about the tears. I promise to back off for a while.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
well written.
Author's Response: thank you!!
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
It was totally Jake in the car! I can't wait to hear their conversation because it is going to be goooooooooood!!
xoxo
jennie
Author's Response: lol, I hope it's good. I think it is, but I'm a little partial!
Reviewer: awsomrah (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
you didn't lie, we needed tissues. beautifully done. can't wait to see where they go from here.
Author's Response: thank you! your tissue box will get a break for now on! I'll warn you if you need to break them out again.
Reviewer: RuthCullen (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
WHAAAAAH.. this was so freaking good..=D allthough i still don't like it that charlie died.. but there had to be a tragedy..=O
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: missrenee (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
thanks for the tears i am looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: you're welcome, I think. LOL
Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
Love Emmett, hes such a joker but you just can't help but love him!!
So sad though, the funeral was really upsetting.. especially when she was handed the badge :(
Can't wait till the next chapter is up!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! Hopefully things will be a little more light hearted from here on out!
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
That damned badge...that's what did it...now my throat hurts.
I don't have to tell you how good the chapter was...and you made me cry...again...but, I guess you did warn me...
hey, I would really appreciate it if you wouldn't make me cry for a while...thanks :)
of course, as always, looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: lol, yes I will try not to make you cry anymore. No promises because I still have one pretty intense chapter to write that is cry worthy but it's still a ways off. and thank you!!! You are too sweet!!!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
poor Jacob! But yeah for Edward and Bella, I feel like they should be more awkward with eachother after not seeing eachother for so many years, but I guess that is true love.
Author's Response: true love is a strong thing. It holds no bounds. These two are meant to be although slowly they will learn that they are a little different that what they were. But it's a good thing. Just a little growing up.
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
I smiled--I cried. Lovely chapter!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: rachelcullen77 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
Can't wait till next chap. Go Emmett for making her feel better!
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
ok a few tears were shed! love this story so much!
Author's Response: thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: lislar (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
You were right about the tissues!!!
Author's Response: I know. But you can put them away. You won't need them for a while!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
Such a good chapter. I'm glad they are able to move on now. Can't wait til the next update! This story makes me happy! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It makes me happy that it makes you happy!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
*sniff*
Ok, I'm good. Bring on the Jake talk. I wanna read that, like NOW! LOL.
Manda
Author's Response: Thanks Manda!! I know the all important talk with Jake. It's good. I tried to be light hearted with it.
Reviewer: britishangelsoul (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
Very touching. I like the dichotomy between her feelings and how she actually admitted the weird sense of guilt for being happy; it makes her very believable as a character.
Author's Response: thank you. I hope I can keep it up b/c she's going to be all over the place from here on out. One minute she's happy, then she's mad, then sad, but ult happy in the end.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
can't wait for more
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: Emz80m (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
wonderful part!
Author's Response: thank you!
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