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Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 18- In Your Eyes
ha ha, he is scared of jane love it!
Author's Response: who isn't? lol, thank you!!!
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
another wonderful chapter.... glad we got that out of the way....
Author's Response: Thanks!! If you're into reading ahead, chapter 19 is already posted on ff.net! and by the way, I'd like to mention that you totally rock for reviewing every single chapter!!!!
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 15- Breathe
very good chapter....and Jacob really was a jerk about it....I take it rose broke someones heart to be with emmett too.....
Author's Response: thank you! no, Rose didn't break anyone's heart. She's about the only person I won't really divulge into with this story. I don't know why. Maybe it's because in the original books I really didn't relate to her. She's just harder for me to write.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
very good chapter...i had tears when they gave bella the badge....
Author's Response: I know, and I promise, the tears should be over now. good times are ahead
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 13- Ever the Same
ooo Lemonade......a jacob one shot...that should be interesting... Truthfully, if Jake hasn't gotten the message that "she's just not that into you" He needs to see the movie "He's just not that into".....
Author's Response: lol, so true!
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 12- Hallelujah
oooo I didn't read this one shot....gues I need to.... Very well written
Author's Response: thank you!! Yes there is one from Edward's POV and one from Jacob's. I'll just tell you up front, both boys are chatty cathy's!
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends
its good they are all together...I thinking inviting Jack would be a not so great idea...whats up with edward at the end????? mmmmmm Alice is so in her element....
Author's Response: just so you know, there are some extra POV's under my ff.net account. It's holly_1980 What's up with Eddie? hmmmm....
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 10- I Run to You
ya know it is easier to except charlie being killed by vampires then dying of natural causes....i already got my tissues....
Author's Response: lol, you'll need them for the next few chapters. Glad you're enjoying it so far.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 9- Somewhere Over the Rainbow
Emmett is so much like me...just make a decision and move on it...never helps to sit and sort thru things...
Author's Response: exactly. He's a straight forward kind of guy.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 8- They all asked for you
I think bella needs to tell jacob...otherwise she's just gonna carrying on, carrying...nothing really matters...(that was Queen!) I so love Emmett..
Author's Response: I love Queen!!! keep reading....
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 7- Hey Love
I love the fact that Emmett cares so much about bella and Edward that he's playing matchmaker....not that he really needs too...Still love your bella.
Author's Response: I know!! And thank you. She has her faults but she tries.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 6- Keep on Loving You
I loved this chapter....I think Bella is amazing and I'm in love with Emmett....
Author's Response: this was one of my more favorite chapters. And yes, I love Emmett as well!
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 5- Extra Ordinary
Emmett is an amazing Big bro....and he cares so much about his family. I really love Emmett and your Bella is amazing...i'm excited to read more...
Author's Response: that is exactly how I wanted him to be seen.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 4- Who Dat?
I love the relationship that Bella and Emmett share...so time to party
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 3- Feeling Good
I really enjoyed this chapter....I'm really curious at what edward does for a living....great story...
Author's Response: thank you!!! Keep reading. IMO, it gets better, but I could partial. Edward's living will be revealed in the next few chapters.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 2- This Time of Year
pretty good....like everyones personalities....so off to the future.
Reviewer: tnlentz1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1- Juicy
different....shall we continue.....
Reviewer: bella93 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
loved it!!! as usual :D
Reviewer: tinywit3 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
awwwww, great chapter...lol
that's right edward not let bella put all the blame on you!!! lol 8D you tell her...lol
cant wait for next update
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
Great update. They had a good conversation and were able to get everything out in the open. I hope they spens some time with Bella's friends. It will be an adjustment for Edward not to be the one who knows her best now... also, I hope you intend to include the moving from NY. I would love to read a Tanya/Edward/Bella interaction scene where Bella got to see he wouldbe "other woman". Love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! For right now this trip to NOLA will mainly include just packing, a little bit of sight seeing, and the GALA- which Edward will get to meet a few of Bella's friends. Now I do have another trip planned back to the big easy for the whole gang. I just finished writing it and I find it rather funny. New York you will def see. And the whole Tanya business will be uncovered there!!! Oh good times ahead!
Reviewer: Krys18 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
Great chapter Holly. I loved every minute of it :)
Author's Response: awe!! Thank you!!!
Reviewer: pillowbiteraml (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
I was glad to see these two hash things out! A lot needed to be said and if they are going to move on they both needed to take responsibility for their actions.
Now, they need to get to know the older, mature Bella and Edward. I'm sure there will be obstacles but I'm excited to see them build their new relationship!
Great Chapter Holly!
XOXO
Author's Response: thank you so much!!! it was very needed. Now we can move these two forward onto happier times!!!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
just loving it! did i miss her being on BC, because that morning in his bed there was no meantion of protection
Author's Response: thank you!! You haven't missed anything. It hasn't been brought up yet. It will in the next chapter or so.
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
i'm glad they had it out sooner rather than later... very good job!
Author's Response: thank you!!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
i'm proud of thenm for getting it all out there! at least they didn't let it brew for too much longer where it would destroy them...
Author's Response: thank you! I needed for it to be out of the way so we can move on with happier times!
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