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Reviewer: lisamichelle17 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 18- In Your Eyes
The thing I loved about this chapter is how happy Edward and Bella are together. I love that they talk to eachother when doubts to their relationship emerge. I also love how how touchy they are with eachother. It looks like the gala is the next chapter. I am both nervous and excited for Edward and Bella to go to NY. Oh, another thing, I love Angela's friendship with Bella. Her quick approval of Edward is great. I hope that she and Ben wind up in Forks too. I think they would blend in very well with the Soverign Six :-) Your rec's are also awesome. I'm already reading Facebook Friends and LOVE that story. Thank you so much for the update and now I'm off to read the next chapter :-)
Author's Response: Awe- thank you so much!!! Yes, eleven years without one another, I need for them to be happy. And of course, eleven years without one another makes them very touchy feely!! lol Angela oh Angela. Unfortunatly she and Ben won't be moving, but we will see her in a later chapter. thanks again for all the really kind words!!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 9- Somewhere Over the Rainbow
Oh I hate airport goodbyes - always brings a tear.
Love your Emmett
Achilles
Author's Response: thank you! I'm quite partial to my Emmett as well. He only gets funnier by the way!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 8- They all asked for you
Yep Em is right that she defo needs to make a decision and whilst Jake is always hot and sweet I would still go for the bronze haired, broody, velvet voiced one ever single time!
Nice ep
Achilles
Author's Response: no kidding!! Edward will always win hands down!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 7- Hey Love
Blubbing like a baby here. Again ;)
Achilles
Author's Response: sorry- kind of! lol
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 5- Extra Ordinary
Awww so why the hell isn't he with her then - if I'd made that kind of promise there would be no way in hell that I would be kept apart from that person!
Achilles
Author's Response: I know- but you've already read so you now know the answer to that.
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 4- Who Dat?
Aww I lurve the Emmett Big Brother routines - he so sweet and fun!
Funnily enough I know Better than Ezra a little as they had a track on the Empire Records soundtrack!
Achilles
Author's Response: You had me at Empire Records. I LOVE THAT MOVIE!! Sadly- I had no idea they were on the soundtrack. They are a great band!! You could almost say they are my muse.
Reviewer: envy (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 15- Breathe
What about Tanya? Is Edward still with her? I'm asking because you have not mentioned her much besides what Emmett said. Is he still dating her? Did they break up?
Author's Response: Tanya- all will be revealed in New York. Edward explains all of that to Bella. She like you, asks the exact same question.
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 2- This Time of Year
Can't quite see the screen through the tears but hey ho.
Why is flying off such a final thing - don't they go home for the holidays? Then again I suppose I've never had those distances to contend with as England is so small.
Achilles
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 19 Love Song
Great chapter! I'm glad things went well with Jacob at the party. I'm excited to see what happens in New York. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: thank you. Yes, Jacob needs his own HEA- but that doesn't mean we haven't seen the last of him. It's all good though!!!
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 19 Love Song
Great chapter
Author's Response: thank you!!!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1- Juicy
Intriguing. Looking forward to reading more.
Achilles
Reviewer: TwiDi812 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends
Ok feel bad for Jacob but I am so glad that Edward and Bella are back together. I really hope things work out for them and they are able to stay together.
Author's Response: don't feel too bad- he get's his HEA. Bella and Edward are on the path to happiness!!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 19 Love Song
i'm happy for jake that he has leah now.. but great chapter!
Author's Response: thank you!!!!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 19 Love Song
Great chapter. Merry Christmas!!!!
Author's Response: thank you! And Merry Christmas to you too!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 19 Love Song
The gala was good and thank god jacob found his special someone.
Author's Response: lol, I know! We'll see more of them later on!!!
Reviewer: Taylor Lyn (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 18- In Your Eyes
I just wanted to take a second and let you know how much i am lovin this story.... and it makes me laugh that you and i have the smae taste is stories.... both of the stories you said are in my faves...... along with yours..... I love how you brought everyone together... so sweet.....
Author's Response: awe thank you!!! Have you checked out my favorites on my ff page? My author name over there is Holly_1980. Let me know if you see anything that I'm not reading, that I should be!
Reviewer: envy (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 7- Hey Love
I have a question... If edward just designs web pages... why didn't he move closer to be with bella after college?
Author's Response: you are not the only one who has asked this question. Since this is chapter 7 you asked this on, all I can say is keep reading. Bella also proses this question to Edward.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 19 Love Song
can't wait for more
Author's Response: thank you!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 19 Love Song
I'm glad Jake found his HEA also.
Author's Response: he deserved it! They will come back around a little later on!
Reviewer: TwiDi812 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 2- This Time of Year
So sad, got a knot in my throat reading about Bella and Edward's good-bye. Reminded me of telling my HS sweetheart good by as he left for college and I stayed behind to finish HS.
Reviewer: TwiDi812 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 2- This Time of Year
So sad, got a knot in my throat reading about Bella and Edward's good-bye. Reminded me of telling my HS sweetheart good by as he left for college and I stayed behind to finish HS.
Reviewer: TwiDi812 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 2- This Time of Year
So sad, got a knot in my throat reading about Bella and Edward's good-bye. Reminded me of telling my HS sweetheart good by as he left for college and I stayed behind to finish HS.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 18- In Your Eyes
Oh Holly how did I ever miss this chapter?
Keep those two apart for e;even years and they become a couple of rabbits.
So Bella has packed up and ready for the next step.
The gala should be interesting and then it is off to New York.
Before I sign off I wanted to take time to thank you for sharing your story with us and wish you and yours a blessed holiday season.
Sandra
Author's Response: Good question my dear! Yes, eleven years apart and they have LOTS of making up to do. Only one more chapter in the Big Easy and then yes, off to New York for a few. After the return from New York, things pick up with every one. And then it'll be almost over. I've been writing the last chapter for over a week now. I think I'm just not ready to let it go just yet.
And you are too sweet. Thank you so much and you have a great Christmas & New Years as well!!!
Reviewer: pillowbiteraml (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 18- In Your Eyes
I love this chapter! It's so sweet! I'm so excited for these two. I went to the forum and saw your house plans for everyone and they look amazing! I tried to post but for some reason I couldn't so when I can get it to work I will post a comment.
I'm excited to see you Jacob's mystery lady is....hmm I'm really nervous about their trip to NY because I have a feeling things are going to get a little rocky over there.
I can't wait for your next update! I look forward to each and everyone. Even though it took me 12 days to post a comment I read the chapter right away off of my cell phone the minute you posted your chapter while I was working on schoolwork.
Take care Holly! Miss hanging out on the forum XOXO
Reviewer: Twilight_1012 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 18- In Your Eyes
Oh My God! i lovvvveeeeeTHISSSS!! i cant wait for more. this is really good, but i think i went thru like 14 tiisueeess when charlie died. wow...anywayyyss cant wait for more. please please please update soon :)
Author's Response: thank you so much!!! I'm sorry about the tissues (well not really because then that means I did my job) but I promise you won't need any more for a while. I only have one other chapter that might make you reach for the tissue box and we've still got some time before we get there.
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