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Reviewer: twilightcougar (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2013 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 6- Keep on Loving You
Drunk bella so funny;)
Reviewer: timide (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2011 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
Next time? Now is a good time!!!!!!
Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
I must admit, I cried almost like a baby reading this story so far.
Truely love this story. I cant wait till the update. So hopefully you update soon.
Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
I must admit, I cried almost like a baby reading this story so far.
Truely love this story. I cant wait till the update. So hopefully you update soon.
Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
I must admit, I cried almost like a baby reading this story so far.
Truely love this story. I cant wait till the update. So hopefully you update soon.
Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
I must admit, I cried almost like a baby reading this story so far.
Truely love this story. I cant wait till the update. So hopefully you update soon.
Reviewer: MsCullen17 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
I couldn't stop crying =(
Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this! I'm sorry, kind of, for the crying! That means you felt it! The story is complete over on FF if you want to read the last of it over there! Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
So sweet!!
Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm sorry I haven't responded sooner. I had no idea I had reviews over here! The story is complete if you want to check it out on FF. I'm Holly1980 over there!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 25- New Orleans Lady
I have missed this story!
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2010 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
Ahh, loved the wedding, and what a surprise guest... very Rosalie! and what an awful woman her mother is definitely the mother in law from hell!! Looking forward to Edward and Bella's special day next, hopefully he won't have to worry about a hair dresser in pink pants lol. xx
Author's Response: lol, no hair dresser in pink pants. and thank you so much! I'm sorry I haven't responded sooner. I had no idea I had reviews over here! The story is complete if you want to check it out on FF. I'm Holly1980 over there!
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 21- Hot Child in the City
I can't imagine what Edward would have seen in Tanya if thats how she is....can't wait for breakfast in the morning lol!!!
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 11- With a Little Help from my Friends
*sob* that was so sad... loved the reunion x
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 6- Keep on Loving You
This chapter had me laughing out loud, you gotta love Emmett... and that message!! i'm sure Edward will love it. x
Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Prologue/Chapter 1- Juicy
Great first chapter...Love the Edward knickers!
Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
Wow. Beautiful chapter! I was in tears throughout the entire thing! I can't wait for the next part! And Beyonce sing Etta James was PERFECT!
Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm sorry I haven't responded sooner. I had no idea I had reviews over here! The story is complete if you want to check it out on FF. I'm Holly1980 over there!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
Fantastically well written ,wedding scenes can be rather awkward ,either overly sweet or just not enough !
Well the Cullen/Hale family are fantastic to write and you do it so well !
Loved the girly night ,the men typically getting drunk !
Can't wait for part 2 and then Edward and Bellas wedding too !
x x x
Author's Response: thank you! I'm so sorry I didn't respond sooner! I had no idea I had reviews over here! The story is complete if you want to head over to FF and read it. I'm Holly1980 over there!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
I loved their wedding! I think adding Beyonce was a good choice. I could actually imagine the whole scene as I read it. It was such a beautiful wedding and You added the right amount of fluff to it. You rock!
Author's Response: awe, thank you so much! If you want to read the completed story, it's all done on FF.net. :) thank you again!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 20- Your Song
Personally, I felt like I was walking through Tiffany's with Edward and Bella so I was pretty happy. :) Really am enjoying this!! Joan
Author's Response: I've only been to one Tiffany's and that in the Galaria in Dallas. I had to research the store in New York to get all the details right. Tiffany's isn't a place to be taken lightly- lol
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
Great wedding and all things leading up to the wedding!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! If you want to read the whole story, it's now complete on FF.
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 18- In Your Eyes
Loved the chapter. :) I'm very glad Bella finally had a chance to show off Alice's little b'day gift and best that it was for Edward. I'm wondering who Jacob is going to show up with at the Gala. It wouldn't be Tanya, would it? ugh... Maybe a little Indian girl from the Rez? Fun!!
Author's Response: lol thank you! Oh Jacob will be at the Gala but with whom.... It won't be Tanya but we still haven't seen the last of her yet!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 17- Your Winter
I agree. I was glad the Edward fired back BUT!!! He never did tell Bella (or us) about Mz Tanya. ;) Nice evasive move there, Edward. Other than that? I loved it too. I was glad Edward didn't back down and let Bella cream him with guilt over the length of time. Really, they were pretty dumb. *hehe* I'm glad they found their way back to each other. Pining over time lost is just more time lost. They have to move on and enjoy time present. Great writing! I know I'm late but still, this really is a great story. :) Joan
Author's Response: oh Mz. Tanya will get her scene... that's all I'm saying. Thank you so much! Emmett is my voice of reason ya know? I lurve him. And hey, better late than never! I'm enjoying that you have found this and reviews make me totally happy!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 26 - At Last
Holly ~
This chapter was so much fun to read. Mrs Hale sure was the brides mother from hell! And how could I not laugh with the girls and their girl time. It's been a long time but it took me back to my own day of as everyone got ready. And don't you know I loved Esme in this chapter. I guess what they say all's well that ends well is true, huh? The wedding was perfect. Beyonce certainly added an unexpected touch.
And now that this wedding is over I sigh as preparations begin for the moment we have all been waiting for.
Sandra
Thanx for the heads up that this story is complete on FF. I was gone for 6 weeks this last time and i am here to say it is taking longer and longer to settle back. Hoping to get over there soon!
Author's Response: Sandra!!! I loved writing Esme in this chapter. Her at the window with the girls is probably one of my favorite scenes in this whole story. I could see that so clearly in my head. I understand how it can be getting back in the groove of things. You must have a ton of updates to catch up on! Well, if you need a rec for a story that is owning me right now, check out For the Summer. It's on FF and it's wonderful! Like, makes me happy every Friday when she updates!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 16 Silent Lucidity
I loved your take on Lauran! Or muffnbutter's take (love that name) too funny! I can't imagine Bella and Edward could let that conversation go for too long. I can't believe they went 11 yr and never got together, never had sex with anyone else and yet, still went oral with others and nothing more! Crazy! But it makes for interesting fan fiction. *g* So we'll see what happens when Edward and Bella go to this Gala in NO. Fun, I can just feel it in my bones. :) Great writing Joan
Author's Response: lol thank you! When I read her take on Lauren I thought, this makes perfect sense. lol
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 15- Breathe
So it was Jacob Black that was in the driveway!! Oh! Wow... It's good that he knows now and everything is out in the open. Edward is a strange bird. Why didn't he ever go to see Bella in the 11 yr they had been apart? That's too weird. still... LOVE THIS! ;) Great writing to make us all ponder such things.
Joan
Author's Response: totally Jacob in the driveway! Edward is just scared and stubborn and well scared. But now that he has back what he's always wanted, don't think he's ever going to give it back up!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 14- Hear You Me
So who was it that drove up the Cullen's driveway? I thought it might be some secret that Edward was keeping. ;) Hopefully not tho. Sad chapter. Great Job!
Joan
Author's Response: well, per your other review, you know it's Jacob! BTW, on FF I have an outtake from Jacob's POV you might want to check out.
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