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Reviews For Falling For You
Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2015 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 50

Terrific story. I'm so happy I read it. :-)

Reviewer: Starma (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2014 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 12

Yeah, it's a bit corny of a fic.  It just sounds like a high school love story ... Bella checks out the gossip rags, wants to walk the mall with her new handsome boyfriend, she can deal with anything with him by her side.  It's clear that she is 23, as you said, because she isn't taking the right things seriously.  It's still a fun read overall.

Reviewer: Starma (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2014 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 10

I'm late in saying this, but as much as I want to love this fic, there is too much that I don't feel.  I don't feel the love between them, no matter how much they say "I love you."  With IC, you developed the connection so the audience can believe the bond.  Here it feels too rushed.  It's a fun read, but the Edward-Bella love just isn't here.   But still reading!

Reviewer: ouat324 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2014 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 33

I love this story! The best fanfic I've ever read by far!

Reviewer: Awkwardtwilightlover (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2014 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 50

If they could see Miley Cyrus now.....

sweet story,it showed that love can over come anything! I really enjoyed it

Reviewer: Countrygirl2015 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 2

Great Story

Reviewer: SherryJo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2014 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

No matter what,  this is my favorite story ever.  Please a thousand times please pretty please put it back on ff . Plus IC ,,, 

Reviewer: SherryJo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2014 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 1

No matter what,  this is my favorite story ever.  Please a thousand times please pretty please put it back on ff . Plus IC ,,, 

Reviewer: WiseOldSoul (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2014 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 10

i am enjoying this romance b/t edward and bella, and i am certainly

enjoying your fic and your skilled writing...


i am having difficulties liking this bella...

she is too naive, innocent? yes, but almost stupid naive and way too timid,

yes, she is very nice...but you don't have to be a complete pushover to

be nice and she sees everything through her rosie glasses...certainly, we

are innocent and think everything in the world is wonderful and nice...when

we are young..

but by adulthood, i hope we have developed some defense mechanism and some self worth  against

the true evils of realities and stop living in the world of fantasies...

i just feel like this bella is too much of a softie for the realities of the world.

i realize this is a fic and not real, but wish that this bella has some real qualities

instead of all made up of world of fantasies of too much sugar and not

enough spice...


Reviewer: WiseOldSoul (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2014 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 2

i love how edward let bella know how interested he was/is in her...


the fics with this characterization of bella is almost difficult to read,

bella who has such a low self esteem who can't believe someone like edward can be

interested in her, bella who has no backbone to tell a cheating jerk of an ex

to f--- off too afrad to stand up for herself, bella who most likely will be

belittled by Tanya in the near future who wants edward back and bella being

who she is is going to back off and push edward away

thinking tanya is the type of woman who

would fit with edward better and doesn't want to stand in the way of edward and his daughters becoming a family again with their mother tanya, bella who continues to sabatage her own life/relationships by over-thinking and over-reacting abnormally

to everything in her life esp when it has to do with edward....

i don't like an over confident, aggressive angry bella either, but i do like bella who is

confident in herself and her looks and abilities who is assertive enough to tell others off when in necessary....

will see what type of bella this is as i continue to read...need a certain type of mind

frame to take the weak wimpering mouse of a bella ;)

Reviewer: BigGlo (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2014 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 8

Bella is such a cry baby. Geez, get some backbone.

Reviewer: reneewilliams14 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2013 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 5

and some of these chapters I find that she's too shy and 2 Incomfortable in her own skin but so far I do love the story

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2013 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 50

Fabulous reading it second time around. Thank you abk

Reviewer: Openskies123 (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2013 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 9

Omg....thought it would be James 

Reviewer: Cherry2013 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2013 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 50

This was the sweetest family story that I've read... I love it!!!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2013 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 1

Bella and Jasper as siblings is different but believable.  I love Liz already - I remember raising daughters with bad attitudes - poor Edward.  Bella's friends are mean and juvenile; they remind me of adolescent boys (I grew up the only girl with three brothers; it was like living with a pack of wolves).

Reviewer: ayelet27 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 50

Best story ever!!

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2012 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 50

Reading this story again still fabulous. Thanks abk

Reviewer: ShilahB (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2012 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 50

Awww!! I love this story! I started reading it a while ago on Fanfiction but then it disappeared; it goes without saying that I'm glad that was remedied! This story was the only reason I signed up for this website, and I wasn't disappointed. Good job and I'm excited to see your other stories!

Reviewer: edward-is-mine (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love this story. This is my thrid time reading it!!!!!

Reviewer: dianmaxx1 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 6


Reviewer: Dutchie La Rue (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 50

This is one epic adventure that had me laughing, crying, cringing, giggling, smiling, and mad as hell throughout!!!  I loved every minute of reading this 50 chapter novel and never wanted it to end!!!  You are an amazing talent!!  Thank you for sharing this epic love story with this Edward and Bella!!!!

Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2012 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 44

so good, I love this story more every time I read it.

Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2012 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 2

I've read this before,it is a great story

Reviewer: Caldupuy (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2012 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 50

So beautiful!!  Love this story!

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