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Reviews For Never Come Home
Reviewer: Its_Twilight (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Painful Confusion

so...um....
that was mean.
you better update soon or I might never forgive you. =)

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Painful Confusion

I knew it was too good to be true!! you are evil! please don't make us wait too long!

Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Painful Confusion

Oh why couldn't she just tell Daniel to take a hike?  She has Edward back!  He doesn't know that they buried a body they thought was him.  Will one of the Cullen's explain to him that they thought he was dead?  Poor Edward!

Okay, you are going to have to explain to me why Bella had to leave with Daniel?  Why couldn't she stay with Edward and explain to Edward who Daniel was, and all three can go back to Charlie's together?  Will Charlie give her Edward's ring back now?  Please, please don't let there be like chapters and chapters of confusion and miscommunications between them... you know with Edward thinking she doesn't love him and him lashing out at her, instead of talking about what is really going on.... Please!!!! I'm not above begging here!  I love this story so much, but it would really suck if they lost time together after being apart for so long!

Great update, and so sad... I'm nervous for what you will write that makes you cry just thinking about it (did that make any sense?) :)

-Kari



Author's Response:

That made perfect sense, even though my chapter didn't. It will all make sense soon, I promise, in fact, I'm thinking about making the next chapter extra long so I can fit more in more quickly, just so people don't abandon it! Or, I'll probably write 2 chapters at once and update really quickly. Seriously, it's making more sense to me now why Bella did what she did
(the characters have free reign, I seriously don't have much of a say in what they do. I just try to portray the meaning behind it all as best I can lol.) Hang in there, its all going to clear up pretty soon.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Fallen Angel

squee it wasn't him burned...  Thank the heavens LOL

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:08 PM · On: The Way Home

Oh my...sniffle...thats all I can say at moment I must read on..

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Forgive me.

OMG just found your story looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: kriscullen2 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 06:06 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

Acck!!!!! I'm like obsessively checking this story to see when it will update *jams refresh button*

;D



Author's Response:

Sorry babe, the next chapters proving God damned hard to write! Edward has far too much to say for his own good!

Reviewer: kriscullen2 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 09:19 AM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

OK first of all sorry hon that I didnt review right when you posted.  RL and applying for med school has been kicking butt :) okay now review time

OMG.....

*Crickets*

*Sobs*

happy tears lol

This chapter was just..was just in all honsety a whirlwind of emotions.  I felt sadness for Bella and what she would have had to endure if he didnt come back to her.  And I felt utter elation to the point that i was crying at the fact that Edward and Bella were reunited near the end.  The title was perfect for this chappie and was definitely had the most perfect wording in conjunction to Bella's thoughts about him.  In this moment couples being reunited tend to be so attuned to eachother and you did an excellent job of capturing that with AND without words.  Gosh what a ride *chuckles nervously*  I now wonder what you have in store for us next with that evil laugh and all.  but despite that I trust you and I know that whatever it is that you decide to do will steer your story and your characters in the right direction....

WHICH...brings me to one in particular. :)

Daniel.  As I've mentioned previously in my other review he has really grown on me.  And although hes not our lovely Edward,  please don't hurt him too much.  I think as a character he is molded and written perfectly.  And I applaud you on that.  He's just Gah..like Edward runner up.  It takes a lot of time and effort to put soo much of your heart into loving someone that you know will never love you with that capacity that their capable of, because they have given everything to someone else who isnt (well now is) coming back.  I admire him so much for that, and it just shows me how selfless he is and how he is willing to be labeled the second best man in his lovers' eyes and continue to love them with everything he has and more. Like I said I trust you, but please be gentle with him when the time comes to call off the engagement and the whole 'I love you but its not enough' conversation.

Outtakes are a really good idea BTW.  Um, maybe you can do some outtakes for some of the soldiers that were stationed with Edward before,during or after he dissappeared. Ya know to understand a little more about whats happening on his mission and about the war that he is fighting.  Another idea can be Daniel.  I would really like to see he motivations for pursuing Bella and how he feels he can handle her and attempting to mend her heart.  while another one from him when they're waiting on the docks for Edward to come home...his thoughts maybe reflecting how hes going to mend her if E isnt on that ship and how hes going to either let her go or fight for her if E did come back.  Another would have to definitely be Alice.  Maybe when she handed Bella the letter,at the funeral, or my favorite from her POV... when Bella announced her engagement to Daniel.  But personally the top 2 of all the ones i listed above would be Edward's Soldier friends and Daniel at the docks.

I can't tell how excited I am for Edwards point of view.  I'm all jittery lol

Fantastic Chapter.  I love you hon,  can't wait for the next chappie.  Oh, and if you have any questions about my POV ramble feel free to ask me kay.  I kind of just typed whatever came to mind so it might not make sense lol.

Reviewer: kimmysunshine (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 10:46 AM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

what's going to happen now ??
she's engaged to daniel *that bastard*
hurry up hon

love, kimmy xoxo

Reviewer: beachcutie99 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:44 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

the song choice was spectacular, and that is exactly how i imagined their reunion to be. FANTASTIC job!!

while i was reading this, i was listening to the song and the timing was amazing. right when they saw each other for the first time it was on the part "You,appear just like a dream to me . Just like cyledoscope colors..."

and when they kissed, the song was on the part "When the waves are flooding the shore And I cant find my way home anymore Thats when I, I look at you..."

it fit perfectly with my emotions and this time, for once, my eyes were watering with tears of joy:D

Reviewer: beachcutie99 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Notice On The Red Brick

you've done your job again. this chapter was so thrilling. and i bet the next chapter will be even more so.

im glad i can finally understand rosalie hale. and as for jasper, i've never really been a jasper fan or team jasper but your story makes me love him more and more(:

another tear-jerker..im starting to wonder how many of ur chapters will make me cry, i should start counting.

can't wait to read the next chapter..greatfully, its already written:D

Reviewer: beachcutie99 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:05 PM · On: All For My Own Misery

WHAT DO I THINK?!

i think that was absolutely SORROWFUL!! she's going to marry daniel *sob sob*

sorry i'm a little behind in the reading but im back on the job and spending my sunday reading all of ur new chappies(:

Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Forever Vacant

Beautiful!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 05:34 AM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

Thanks for the update :-)

Reviewer: DGK611 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 02:22 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

Make sure that Daniel does something to get punched by Edward....hehehehehe! ; )

Reviewer: bleachgirl4 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 01:47 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

Yay! He's back. Now I wonder what's going to happen with Daniel. This is really good and very interesting. PLEASE update again soon.

Reviewer: zmom (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 07:30 AM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

I love it.  I am glad he was there.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: geminitwins (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 06:48 AM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

omg....i am sooo happy, this is so great, i have tears in my eyes, its about time they got back to each other!!!!  go away daniel...lol   please dont tear them apart...sniff sniff it was sooo beautiful

Reviewer: Silm3ria (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:52 AM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

Awwwwwwww YAY!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ladyb25 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 09:37 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

oh geez you made me cry like a little baby! i was so excited to see that this chapter finally came and that he's back. i cant wait for the next chapter! im loving this story. 

Reviewer: Brie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 06:27 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

yay!! finally(: what about daniel?

Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 06:08 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

WOW.. DAMN... TOO BAD FOR DANIEL.. I MEAN SHE HAS TO BREAK IT OFF WITH HIM ITS JUST NOT FAIR TO ANYONE

Reviewer: poptart76227 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 05:56 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

YAY!!!  Loving it! 

Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 04:44 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

I loved that she told Daniel to let her be alone and that she wouldn't take his jacket!  I was cringing when Charlie told her that Daniel would be by later that day, I want to scream and shout at Charlie and I want to shake Bella.  Then when he did show up and tried to 'mark' her as his, I wasn't above hitting my laptop...I didn't but I wasn't above it!

I am so glad that Edward is back, but he is going to be heartbroken that Bella is engaged to another man.  Even though I know she is going to break it off, I wonder if Edward is going to forgive her for 'moving on' (even though we know she didn't really move on).  I am glad also that Bella was the only one that was there to meet Edward, that is going to strengthen her story that they all believed that he was buried and gone.  Ohhh your evil laugh scared me.....

Great chapter! Not at all too rushed or anything! :) -Kari

Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 03:55 PM · On: In Plea. In Promise. In Vow.

Very sweet. I'm surprised, I didn't think he was coming back.

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