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Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Unspoken Apology
still lovin' it thanx!
Author's Response: Glad your loving it!
Reviewer: miniego (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:47 PM · On: Unspoken Apology
Holy crap! :) Not at all in to slash, but Bella and Alice are hott. Anyways, this chapter makes me sad. Bella is starting to dwindle away from Alice, not only physically, but emotionally as well. Poor Alice. :( I'm all for Edward and Bella, but I do want to see Alice happy too. She is after all a innocent bystander.
Love triangles, bring out the best angst in a fic. You definetely have me on edge to what's next. BTW, awesome new banner. :)
Author's Response: glad you like the banner :) As with most cheaters from what I understand they do pull away from their partners. I think it might have something to do with guilt.
Reviewer: ECullen23 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Unspoken Apology
This is so good!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lindseyfair (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Unspoken Apology
Edwaed is such a good mab. Poor Alice, we all know she's getting the raw end of the deal.
Author's Response: She may be getting the raw end for now, but I dont think she will for long!
Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Unspoken Apology
isnt bella going to wind up hurting someone?
and that was sweet of eddiiiiie!!
Author's Response: The way I see it, there is no way to not hurt someone here. But I suppose we'll have to wait and see how it all plays out!
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Unspoken Apology
love your story
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Unspoken Apology
wow, i love it. bella loves alice, but lusts for edward. my cousin once told me to write a fanfiction where bella and alice were lesbians, but since i suck at writting i didnt. im glad about that now, cause i would be soo ashamed when i read yours, since its so good.update soon, please. lol
Author's Response: Who doesnt lust for Edward right?? I think your cousin was on to something when she told you to write about BxA as a couple. They have good chemistry together.
Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
Cold sperm out of the fridge. I would think you woulld want it warm. It swims better, I would think.
Author's Response: I could go all clinical if you wish, but that might make for a boring fic :) So lets pretend i wrote that she held it in her hands and got it body temp from her warm hands :)
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
I'm so glad he realized on his own how it affected her negatively. Now will it be hard for them to be around each other without stripping?
Author's Response: LOL, loved the second half of your review. And yes, he feels bad for hugting her. He didnt realize how bad it would affect her. Boys will be boys, right?
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
I don't think Bella and Edward realize that will not be the last time they are together...at least that is what I keep telling myself...LOL
Author's Response: LOL, I dont think they realize it either...
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
LOVED the chapter, Becky. It seems Bella is more attracted to Edward than she realized. She couldn't get off until she thought of what happened between them. This is so good, and I can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: I am so thrilled that you love this, Jess! Its a huge compliment coming from you! I plan on chapter 5 then end of the week as we leave for disneyland on Sunday. Thank you!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
Wow. Talk about a twisted web that Bella's weaving. Poor thing probably didn't have any idea it would be like this. And poor Alice, you know she'll find out at some point and she'll be hurt that Bella didn't tell her. This just gets better and better. I'm wondering if Edward and Bella can ever have a "normal" relationship again. Hmmm...guess I'll just have to wait and find out.
Author's Response: Oh god yes its twisted. And frankly, its only going to get more so. And when/if Alice finds out, I assume she'll be crushed. I think chapter 5 will help shed light on everything for you.
Reviewer: Rhyadawn (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
I feel so much for the entire situation.
Great update! I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
Nice! I was feeling kinda sad during B/E's exchange. He obviously loves her and Bella seems to have supressed feelings for him as well. I wonder what you'll do with this story when Bella gets pregnant, assuming she does. Can't help but feel bad for Alice :( Thank you for the update. Can't wait to read Ch 5!
Author's Response: I felt sad during their exchange as well. He does care for her deeply, as far as Bella we'll have to wait and see.
Reviewer: BlueHillFL (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
I feel so bad for everyone involved! Poor Alice, especially. But I am looking forward to some serious E/B. Please update soon. I love it.
Author's Response: Well hopefully next chapter will help with the pity for the characters. They are all a bit confused right now, but they wont be forever.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
I'm glad she admitted that to Edward. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: And hopefully relieved him a bit knowing she liked it too. Update soon to come!
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
I am glad that both Edward and Bella were honest about their feelings about the first baby making session. It was honorable that he offered his packaged donation this time. I felt sorry for him somehow. Her reaction and his guilt over making her cheat on Alice seemed to throw him for a loop. Bella really needs to be honest with Ali. She was obviously concerned.
I think that I might be attaching myself to Alice more than intended and losing rooting value for Bella as a person. I just think that you might want to know that reaction.
Author's Response: Yes, its good to know the reaction my story creates. I am hoping as I continue the story that you find yourself able to root for Bella more. I think she is just confused at this point, and probably a bit naive. I know she should really tell Alice, but its just too scary of a thought for her right now.
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
Awesome update! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: So happy your enjoying my story!
Reviewer: Alvina_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
Awesome chapter :)
Quick question, is this story gonna end with B/E? Or will it stay as B/A?
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! As for the end, I just can't answer right now. I know how it is going to end, but announcing it to everyone might ruin the story :)
Reviewer: Tweetiebird86 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:56 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
For some reason im not surprised. I mean think about it. She had never been with a man before hand, so she didnt know what she was missing. Does it negate her love for Alice? Absolutely not, but at the same time, i believe there will be a time when she will have to make a choice. Alice or Edward because it seems to me that right now she is confused. In all fairness, i dont really think she should continue with trying to bring a baby into this, seeing as she is confused. Once the baby is here, then what? What happens then? Great concept and cant wait to see what you have planned for this story.
Author's Response: Your right, she is terribly confused. She has no idea what's going on with her. She thought she knew who she was, and now she isnt so sure. As far as bringing a baby in the picture, your right. But she is so busy trying to do what she thinks she supposed to do.
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
Okay, first of all, this is my first Twilight slash. I don't read non-canon pairings, and avoid all things slash, but for some reason when I saw this story in the Most Recent page, it really caught my attention. And I like it. :) Although, to be honest I skip the Alice/Bella lemons... I just skim through the words in case I miss anything important. :P But anyway, I'm beginning to like the story more and more and I hope you update as soon as possible.
Author's Response: I'm so glad your enjoying this! And I'm not hurt at all that you skim the A/B love scenes. I will be updating later this week in prep for a vacation next week. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: YourNameHere (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
I loved it! Does she getpreggers? DUN DUN DUN!!!! Edward is truly sweet.
Author's Response: I think we have a couple chapters until we know about preggers or not hehehe! Edward is my hero
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
I like that Bella is freaking and Edward is sweet.
Author's Response: Yeah, she is a bit of a wreck right now. I think Edward showed how much he cares for her when he apologized and gave her his love juice anyways.
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
Great chapter. Very emotional.
Still channeling QAF for me. That is if Brian were straight. ( I loved him)
Author's Response: I love that I'm channeling QAF, its one of my favorite shows. And broke my heart when the end came! Oh, and Brian can be my Edward any day...
Reviewer: envy (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
So does that mean Bella is not really a lesbian? I mean for one she enjoyed the sex with edward, and now she can't even orgasam properly with her girl..
Author's Response: I think bi is more the term for our dear Bella. But she isnt quite sure of it at this point. I think DENIAL is the word for her at the moment. As far as not orgasming, well she just has a lot of shit going on in her head right now. Shit that is throwing her off kilter.
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