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Reviewer: rosita (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Just Feel

keep,keep writing, and we are waiting...

Have fun on your vacation!!



Author's Response:

I'm writing, promise! Thank you!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Just Feel

Bloody Hell...I think my screen is on fire! Damn I feel the need to take a hiking trip...LOL

Jasper huh? I think Alice will be in a bit of a pickle if she hangs around with him...*snicker* we all know how Jasper could even make a gal go straight for awhile.

Have fun on your vacation and I'll patiently await your next update ;)



Author's Response:

Chapter 6 is in the que waiting validation, and I dont think you will be disappointed!

 

 

Reviewer: lovely_e (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Just Feel

Loved it! I love Edward x Bella lemons! Sooo ... Jasper's in this story? That might make things messy, right? I don't know which way this is gonna go, but it seems like there is a lot of heartfail to come. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I wrote this because I love fluff. So dont expect too much heartfail unless my beta convinces me otherwise since she LOVES angst!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Just Feel

Well, holy shit....this is a fine kettle of fish she's tossed them all into!!  I'm gonna make a wild guess here - Alice will run off with Jasper, Bella will get preggers and stay with Edward?

Are there any REAL lesbians in this story?? haha!!

Thanks for the update....luuuuurve me some campfire booty with Edward!!!



Author's Response:

I like to think of my girls as Bi-sexual. So there you have it :)

 

As for your guesses, well you know I can't really answer you lol!

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Just Feel

wow... the chemistry is sooo there .. I dunno the thing with Alice seems forced. loving it!



Author's Response:

TONS of chemistry! Thank you for reviewing! (sorry for the late reply somehow i missed your review!)

Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Just Feel

Hehe, its more fun when Alice has some mischief going on as well!



Author's Response:

So glad its more fun!

Reviewer: mrscullen17 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Just Feel

i loved this chappie and i can't wait til the next. im especially curious about jasper and alice...



Author's Response:

Next chapter is ALL JxA. I'm just saying...

Reviewer: cooker87 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Just Feel

Wow,that was hot...Kinda rooting to B/E. I just read about that legend in a book I started reading called "The Shack"..



Author's Response:

I haven't read the book, but the falls that the legend comes from is Multnomah Falls in Oregon.


And you can root for whoever you want, I know I do!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Just Feel

Jasper,eh? Alice might have explaining to do. That email was very interesting as was her incensed reaction to Bella seeing it. I can't wait to hear Alice's POV in the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Where there is an Alice, there is a Jasper lol! APOV is already in the que!

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Just Feel

holy hell.... she is definitely making things worse for herself.... but you can't argue the chemistry. 

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Yes, things can only get worse before better right? And their chemistry is years in the making!

Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Just Feel

i am loving this! nd i have to say i love your edward=] he is so hot! nd i love bella and edwards banter even tho its so obvious they have such underlying chemistry x

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you love my Edward! I have to say I have a crush on him myself :)

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Just Feel

My Gawd, Becky!! That was HOT! Loved it!!!

Author's Response:

Coming from the queen of lemons, I take that as a HUGE compliment hehe! 

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Just Feel

OMG  that was so effing hot!!!!!!  I really love this story and you are doing great with it.  I know they are going to find their way to each other but the sex in the mean time effing hot.  Can't wait for the next chapter and have fun at disneyland.



Author's Response:

I had loads of fun in disneyland, but my god did my feet hurt! I hope that with practice the lemons get hotter! mwahaha!

Reviewer: ebonyeyez1 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Just Feel

Excellent chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: MilleVang (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Just Feel

This is so twisted - but it's twisted in a good way, keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Well if anything is twisted, I am so pleased its in a good way lol!

Reviewer: envy (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Just Feel

Well, That was hott!!! and I'll try not to jump to conclusions. Lol



Author's Response:

I was hoping it would be hot! hehehehe!

Reviewer: danqat (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Unspoken Apology

This is quickly becoming one of my 'must read' stories.  I cannot WAIT to see what happens next.  I also liked the one you wrote from Edward's POV.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoy it! I will try to get more EPOV, but the man is quiet!

Reviewer: EllaBittenByCullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Unspoken Apology

love it and cant wait for your update



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Unspoken Apology

great chapter!! i cant wait for chapter 5!!!



Author's Response:

I am so late replying to reviews that chapter 5 is already out and 6 is in que!

Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Unspoken Apology

Great Chapter! Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

More coming very soon!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Unspoken Apology

I look forward to next chapter!

I'm hoping that this will end up a Bella/Edward story, but I guess it would be fine as a Bella/Alice story. This is the first story in a while that keeps me on the edge of my seat!

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

So glad your enjoying!

Reviewer: Plain_J (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Unspoken Apology

Being bisexual myself, and Edward and alice being my favorite characters, I'm REALLY enjoying this story! PLEASE post next chapter ASAP!!!



Author's Response:

I'm with you in more ways than one :) next chapter has been submitted!

Reviewer: Moo jones (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Unspoken Apology

I am sticking with it i promis, because lets face am hooked and now i have to know what happens.

Really good story am loving it

 

xoxo

moo



Author's Response:

So glad your with me till the end!

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Unspoken Apology

this is probably the most original story I've ever read. I generally don't read slash but I am enjoying every chapter and I'm really scared of the impending heartache ahead. I'm  hardcore B/E fan, and even if I hope they end up together in the end it would be unfair to Alice, im curious to see where you'll take this and obviously very excited!!

 

this is awesomeness! :D



Author's Response:

There will be heartache, but I also promise you closure in the end. Thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: babylou23 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Unspoken Apology

really hope bella and edward get togther, really can't picture bella and alice no matter how much i read and try



Author's Response:

Lol, well I hope your happy with the ending no matter which way it goes :)

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