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Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Just Feel
that was awesome. this is hot. all of it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Twisted4Jasper (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Just Feel
I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Just Feel
Wow! That was so fucking hot and my favorite chapter thus far. And not just because of the lemon, things are finally starting to happenn besides dialogue! Yeah! And I know Edward and Bella can't just skip down the yellow brick road yet but as long as there are lemons like that one. And Bella made progress, she initiated!
This Alice and Jasper thing... hmm... I wonder how long and if it's innocent now or will it be revealed that Alice visited the other team firsts?
Can't wait til you're back, but have fun!
Author's Response: I hope the next chapter lives up to this one as your fave!
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Just Feel
OMG I can tel edward loved her wayyyyyyyyyy b4 this story started and now bella is starten to feel it!!!!
Wat in the world is alice doing with jasper.....I hope its not wat i think it is!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh yes he did love her for a long time!
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Bella's Decision
Okay, right away you can tell there are some unresolved issues between them. WHy didn't she tell Alice? WHy didn't she ask him- why he wanted to impregnate her the traditional way? HMMMM??!!(shes says w/her index finger tapping her chin).
Author's Response: She didnt tell Alice because she is so confused herself. And she should have asked him why, but perhaps she was too wrapped up in her shock to ask at the time!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Just Feel
girl, if this gets any hotterme and the rest of your readers(i bet0 will need to go to the hospital! and i know that you said not to jump to conclusions, but is alice cheating on bella ?
Author's Response: I like to think Alice is not cheating on Bella. But you'll have to wait to find out for sure!
Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Just Feel
oh me! bella's got a taste it seems and can't stop herself, but who could when its edward! ;P
anyhoo well done and keep up the amazing work!
=) x
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Just Feel
alrighty, so alice is now off to see "friend" jasper, while bella and edward are off hookin up in the woods. is it just me or is something a little fishy here???
Author's Response: Nope, its not just you!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 05:30 AM · On: Just Feel
err I don't know if my desk chair can handle the lemons being hotter :$
I'm more than a little curious where you're taking B&A given that Jasper is now a part of the picture as well, but I know I'll have to wait a few chapters to see it all unfold a little more :)
Author's Response: I bet your chair can handle hotter, it's probably loving it lol!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Just Feel
that was HOT!! but uh oh --- i sense trouble ahead. is alice cheating on bella just as bella is cheating on alice?? enjoying the story so much - please please update soon!
Author's Response: TONS of trouble! Update is in the que, sorry for the wait!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Just Feel
Amazing!
I was thinking that it would be great if any of the following happened:
a. bella and alice remain together, edward is paired with someone random (maybe jasper?)
b. bella gets together with edward, and alice gets together with jasper
c. some other situation that your creative mind can think of!
Author's Response: I promise you at least C!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Just Feel
great chapter! i cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Just Feel
I feel so brain fucked right now. agh! I'm not sure who to feel sorry for and who to root for. I'm so confused.
But the was really hot ! :)
Author's Response: Oh I'm so sorry I brain fucked you. But was it as good for you as it was for me??
Reviewer: hijaydee909 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Just Feel
love it! alice and Bella are cute but her and Edward are just meant to be.
this is getting super exciting! can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Just Feel
Dios Mio! My god! Wow you really know how to make some lemonade!
I think I am as confused as Bella right now! Do I want B&E or do I want B&A????
Or will all this shit get so effed up that we don't get any thing???
I know we have to wait a long time for an update but it is for a good thing.
Say hi to Mickey for me!
Maybe you get some kinky ideas for a B&A rendevous at the happiest place on earth... just don't desecrate It's a Small World. My kid loves that ride.
Author's Response: Oh I promise it wont get too effed up that there wont be any closure! And It's a Small World is still safe for you kiddo, promise!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Just Feel
it was so weird... i was thinking is jasper going to be in the story... because i always feel weird when main characters are left out and certian ones are in like if alice is in a story jasper has to be too same with rose and emmett and bella and edward.. i feel bad for them in a way when they not included... so when i read like 3 lines i saw his name i thought ok ne is not left out... is he going to cause so drama with alice?? like edward is causing bella drama?? this is getting really good!!
Author's Response: i hadnt originally planned on bringing Jasper to the picture, but your right, he felt left out. So he got his moments with Alice.
Reviewer: indiainksky (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Just Feel
OOh, la la...I do love E/B lemons. Their apparent love for each other is beautiful. And an email from Jasper? Dun, dun, dun...
Author's Response: Dun dun dun is right! But you find out all about it next chapter!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Just Feel
First off....Have a GREAT vacation!!!!! You deserve it!
Secondly...Don't jump to conclusions! Sheesh woman! How can you write this and then say that? Of course I'm going to jump to conclusions. hehe Hmmm...Alice & Jasper? Bella and Edward, again. Um...I'm so confunded I don't even know what my conclusions are. (I love it!)
Can't wait for more...who knows what kind of smutty cliffhanger filled inspiration will be granted upon you by the wishfulfillers at Disney. (That is such a wrong thought...oh well...can't take it back now. hehe)
Author's Response: Thank you, I did have a great vacation!
I know I said dont jump to conclusions, but sure as hell know most of my readers did LOL!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Just Feel
Oh My Fucking God. Ladies Drop your panties and if you have them use you batteries if not just be creative. Shit that was good
Author's Response: ROFL, thank you so much!
Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Just Feel
*fanning myself* Hot damn LOL... This is starting to get complicated. Good job on the lemon :) I wonder what naughty Alice is up to with Mr. Whitlock. I'm happy with the story so far. I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope with practice my lemons get better. And lets just say I plan on having alot of practice time hehe!
Reviewer: KristenCullen (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Just Feel
omg i knew jasper would come in there somewhere, having something to do with Alice.....
cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh god yes, Jasper HAD to make an appearance!
Reviewer: Karah5406 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Just Feel
YES! I so wanted that to happen! Poor Alice....although i have feeling she isn't exactly alone at the moment herself. ;) Anyways, I love this story so far and can't wait to see what you have for us next!
Author's Response: yay! I wrote what you wanted, and thats a good thing! I feel bad for Alice too. She has alot on her plate right now and doesnt even know it!
Reviewer: Dropdeadfredward (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Just Feel
Im gonna jump to conclusions anyway! Im gonna assume Alice is cheating with Jasper! And that the girls split up for DUDES! Sorry, had to do it.
Author's Response: Your fogiven LOL!
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Just Feel
Loved the chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Just Feel
Wow Bella and Edward camping.....HOT!! Enjoy your vacation! Love your writing! More E/B Please!!!!!!
Author's Response: Next chapter is focused on Alice, but I promise more BxE right after that!
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