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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Inspiration
Damn! Alice has finally found her Jasper...it's funny to see both girls feel for a man...have a feeling guilt will be ever present until both admit thier feelings to themselves and to those men. What relief they will feel when they finally do. I wonder when the showdown will occur and how it will affect Bella and the possible pregnancy...
Author's Response: You know guilt and cheating go hand in hand if you ask me! I promise to address pregnancy talk very soon. No worries!
Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Inspiration
oooooohhhhhhhhhh...this goes to my favourites right about now!
Author's Response: So glad your enjoying! Makes my heart happy to know I'm doing my job ;)
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Flesh For the Win
Whew! That was intense good job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: YourNameHere (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Inspiration
Great chapter beebs! You write Jasper smoothly and sexy...though I must admit the name Jasper never allows me to fully think he's THAT sexy. ;-) I an't wait to find out about the pregnancy!!!
Author's Response: Poor jasper, his name alone kinda screws him out of his full potential sexiness. Chapter 8 discusses baby making, and may throw you off a bit. But stick with me k?
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Inspiration
so cute......
Author's Response: thanks :)
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Bella's Decision
Wow, this could be a problem. She should have told Alice. Now, send me my Edward!
Author's Response: I sent Edward, did you get him??
We all know she should have told Alice, but that's just not in the cards quite yet ;)
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:09 AM · On: I have a favor...
Awesome plot! So different. I can't wait for the drama of this story to unfold!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Inspiration
Of course Jasper was more than just a colleague. I mean he's Jasper for goodness sake. It looks like Bella and Alice decided to have a baby at a difficult time. I wonder how that's going to work. Alice's dream was hot and I think the reality will be better.
Author's Response: I promise the baby making will be addressed in chapter 8, at least a little.
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Inspiration
Alright Jasper! Loved this chapter I was wondering what was up with Alice, I guess now we know. he he he
Author's Response: Jasper sees what he wants and goes for it! Can't blame the man, right?
Reviewer: skimbo06 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Inspiration
OMG this is massive...AHHHHHH!
Author's Response: LOL, thank you!
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Inspiration
Is it bad that I'm happy that Alice is feeling something for Jasper? Because I really want Bella to be with Edward, and Alice with Jasper. Yeah. Anyway, I like this chapter, because at least you were able to show us what Alice's thoughts were. And I am excited for the next chapter. :P
Author's Response: Not bad at all! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Inspiration
Well, all be damned. Alice wants Jasper. LMAO. This is really getting interesting now, girly! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I can't speak for Alice, but there is def a connection there whether she wants to believe it or not lol! Things are getting pretty messy really soon, hold on for a bumpy ride ;)
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Inspiration
I know that all the lebians are probably mad at you for making them be with men. ( No offense to lesbians ) I have always thought that you want to be with who you want to be with, regardless of gender or labels. I am glad that you have them open to other options. :)
Author's Response: Yes, I think some might be mad at me. But I try not to label these girls. They are who they are, labels aside. And I'm grateful you understand that!
Reviewer: shyhorse (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Inspiration
oooh - the plot thickens... i like this story a lot!
Author's Response: And it's only getting thicker!
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Inspiration
I love this! Nicely written.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much!
Reviewer: Jennifer Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Inspiration
haha i like the reference to taylor swifts song :) great work!
Author's Response: Totally my beta's doing with the song, I'm not usually a country listener. So I can't take credit for that ;) Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Inspiration
Well I used to feel bad for Alice.. but not anymore.. LOL she seems a bit selfish.. I mean, of course Bella is as well, but its a lot more noticable with Alice.
Whereas Bella kinda tried to stay away from Alice, she on the other hand encouraged Jasper.
Now that we have an insight into both of them, I feel like they're not really meant for each other.. and its gonna be painful for them to find that out..
can't wait for the next chapter =D
Author's Response: Good, I dont want you to feel bad for any of these guys. Alice didnt mean to encourage Jasper, it just kind of happened.
Reviewer: danqat (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Just Feel
Please please please put up a new chapter!!!! I miss this story a lot!
Author's Response: Chapter will be up soon, promise! There is a teaser on the thread in the forums!
Reviewer: danqat (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Just Feel
Please please please put up a new chapter!!!! I miss this story a lot!
Author's Response: The chapter is submitted! Sorry for the wait, but was away from my computer for over a week!
Reviewer: M Logan (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Just Feel
Whoa! So hot! I actually was holding my breath and didn' t even know it! More of E/B please!
Author's Response: Lol, Breathe! Next is Alice, but I promise more ExB heat shortly thereafter!
Reviewer: chloeswan (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Just Feel
i am just gonna say i really want edward and bella to get together in this!
i dont know why but i just really do it seems like they work well together!!!!
Author's Response: I hope I dont disappoint! Thank you!
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Just Feel
i read the 5 chapters the other day but I didn't have time to review until now. I quite like this story. I mean, Bella's kinda cheating on Alice, and who knows Alice might be cheating on Bella too with Jasper, but i don't get the feeling that this story is going to have an unhappy ending. Couldn't tell you why, but I get that feeling. It's really well done!
Author's Response: I'm glad you get the feeling that I wont give a unhappy ending. And your right, there is no way I could screw these characters like that! Although, I will screw them in other fashions....
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Just Feel
This was great. Jasper, huh? Boy did she get pissed at Bella for reading her email. FIshy?! Anywho, I'd like to see some EdwardPOV. Just to know what goes thru his mind. as always intriguing.!
Author's Response: I will work on EPOV and see what he has to say. There is one chapter of his POV, but more will come.
Reviewer: YourNameHere (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Just Feel
Awwwwwwwwwww I love this story bb! I can't wait to see where this is going, and see who Jasper is...*evil laugh* it'd be too easy if he was her lover, right? Gah! Update soon!
Author's Response: Yes, it would be way to easy! Update is coming very soon!
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Just Feel
Hmm I want to go camping with edward, he he he. So when is she going to find out more about alice cheating with Jasper the naughty little pixie. Oh I hope Bella realizes she loves Edward.
Author's Response: I want to camp with him as well! And he can be naked the whole time hehehe! As far as Alice and Jasper, what did I say about jumping to conclusion? hmm hmm? lol
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