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Reviewer: rugger (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Protection
oh man I really can't wait until you udpate again!!!
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Protection
More complications are coming--I can feel it. I'm seriously addicted to this compelling story.
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Protection
Umm...gah! That was hot as hell, Becky. I'm definitely Team Edward here. Alice needs to be with Jasper. Let the fuckery continue with Bella and Edward. lol.
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Semi Truths
I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job, I really love this story
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Inspiration
Interesting to get Alice's take on things. Great job!!
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Just Feel
Sorry to spam after every chapter, but this is amazing!
And this thing w/ Jasper? Hmmm. The plot thickens.
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
Hmmm. Thinking about Edward in order to finish. Interesting. Well done!
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Flesh For the Win
Lemon was great! Hot, descriptive, well done.
Great job!
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Bella's Decision
Wow .. so she's not going to tell Alice about his condition?
I'm intrigued ... I'm glad I'm reading this when you've already gotten a few chapters down so I can move ahead. Great job!
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2009 12:31 AM · On: I have a favor...
Oooh, this is SOOOO good! I'm listening to Nikkipattinson and she is right. Wow! I love this!
I am on to the next chapter. Great job bb! Great premise!
Reviewer: YourNameHere (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Semi Truths
Oooooooooooooh Bella, Bella, Bella....and Alice, Alice, Alice while we're on the subject. Just be honest, allow each other to get a good dickin' and then...go back to lovin' each other! :) OR...Bella, go be with Edward bc though I hate to admit it, I'm a sucker for the two of'em! LOVE it!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Semi Truths
this is great only proving you cant help who you love love your plot line love it when i cant figure out whats comming up next cant wait till your next posting
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Semi Truths
This story stays with me, i find myself thinking about it at random times, i get so excited to see a new chapter.
Reviewer: meadow11 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Semi Truths
woah- i randomly came across your story and i am so glad i did- i couldn't stop reading and now i can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Semi Truths
can't wait for more
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Semi Truths
I would like to see Alice meet up with Jasper and let that evolve. Just as it's rapidly evolving for E&B. I really like your story- it has such a different story line. I find that I am enjoying reading it a lot.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Semi Truths
Well, Edward and Bella.........Jasper and Alice......they are both meant to be... The heart wants what the heart wants!!
Author's Response: Indeed, the heart wants what the heart wants.
Reviewer: Rgwmnks (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Semi Truths
Again you leave me anxious for more. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Update will be here next week! Promise. In the meantime, EPOV will be posted early next week.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Semi Truths
I hope Alice is going to go over to snoop and figure out what's going on!!
Author's Response: You'll find out, very soon!
Reviewer: Crayford (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Flesh For the Win
I do love me some UST! and the awkwardly brilliantly situation you set up, makes the scene really hot!
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping for hot, and apparently I made it!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 04:28 PM · On: I have a favor...
Gotta ask, but almost afraid to know: what is lesbian bed death?
Otherwise, good so far :)
Author's Response: Let me google it for you. Here it is, straight from wikipedia:
Lesbian bed death is a term invented by University of Washington sociologist Pepper Schwartz in her 1983 book American Couples.[1] According to Schwartz, lesbians have less sex than any other type of couple, and they generally experience less sexual intimacy the longer the relationship lasts.
Reviewer: ale_ap (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Semi Truths
I forgot to ask, what about the baby? Is bella already pregnant? or she needs more Edward's magic? :P I hope it is the last :D
Author's Response: This question will be answered chapter 8!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Semi Truths
Another amazing chapter.
I definitely think there needs to be some truth revealed.
There is nothing wrong with Bella wanting to be with Edward or Alice wanting to be with Jasper, but it IS wrong that they're lying to each other.I love them individually as characters, and I love them together should they choose it, but what they're doing to each other isn't ok.
Needless to say, I'm hooked.
Author's Response: The truth will come out, eventually. But it will take some time. It is wrong they are lying to each other, but thats just the way this story goes. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Browns (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Semi Truths
Update soon this is getting good.
Author's Response: Next week, I promise :)
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Semi Truths
Jasper needs to make his move
Author's Response: Damn right he does! But will he get the chance?
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