Loved it, Becky. This story is getting even more amazing with every chapter. I can't wait for the next one. It seems like things are about to come out.

Wow!  This was a good chapter.  Leave it to Bella to notice a hand print.

Can't wait for your next installment.

wow ok I loved the phone sex with edward and bella this chapterwas really great. and I do not blam bella @ all for leaving alice and going to edward I can not wait to see what the weekend has to bring for them.

Uh oh, trouble in paradise I see.  I can't wait to see Edward and Bella's weekend alone.  And I have a feeling that Bella running off is going to push Alice further towards Jasper.

~Ash

I love it. I so want Bella to finally fess up and leave Alice for good.

NOW THAT IS WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!!!!

 

I'm going to add this to my favorites so I can continue reading- regretably I have to work tomorrow :(  

 

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OMG! Frenchward owns me!, and my lady parts, but shhh, don't tell my husband, lol...I'm sorry, but bella is a mayor hypocrite., yeah, i know she's confused, she wants edward, but the way she is handling things with alice is not right. at least alice is not shagging jasper, yes she has feelings for him, but so does bella for edward.

Great Chapter!! I can't wait to read more!

You did very well- I'm impressed, I know I couldn't write a lemon for the life of me, cause mine would sound really stupid and robotical...but I feel you could get even more sour with it :P - i'm terrible...hehe- Bella is going to die from guilt now....I wonder how Alice is going to handle this???

I feel so sorry for Alice. Bella gave her the fake smile and kiss before going to Eddie's. Alice practically pushed Jasper out the door trying to do the right thing, while Bella has been having sex with Edward like rabbits. Alice plans a romantic bath and meal for her gal, but Bella ends up leaving after seeing a hand print set in the pottery. Poor Alice better smell the coffee, realize Bella is getting some loving across town and call Jasper back for a delivery. Meanwhile, I gotta say that I love the Edward and Bella after sex glow talk and phone sex. I can't wait until Bella's duplicity comes to light, so that Edward and Bella can be together guilt free and figure out their relationship. I look forward to the next chapter.

My anger at Bella is increasing with each subsequent chapter. For all intent and purposes she has moved on from the relationship she has with Alice. She makes no effort to spend time with A, screws E every chance she gets. Lies, and has abandoned the process of trying to get pregnant for the time being.

Meanwhile Alice, who is also questioning he feelings, is at least trying to maintain her relationship with Bella. Yes, she is doomed to fail i'm sure but she is the only one making any effort. My heart breaks for her. Edward and Bella are in their own little bubble and showing no regard for Alice's feelings. From what i've read so far, Edward has no remorse when it comes to how their actions effect Alice. Isnt she too his friend?

All my sympathies lie with Alice in this fic. She's struggling with her attraction to Jasper and he isnt helping matters by blatantly making overtures.

I really dont like B&E right now.

I don't know how this story will end, but I feel the need to tell you that I'm all about the E/B.  I am suprised that she hasn't mentioned him popping her proveribal "cock cherry".  Oh, and I just realized that you were reading my story as well!!  The three of us (me, you, and Nikki) are fic-sisters!  Gotta love it!!

 

~Ash