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Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Pearly Gates
wow what a great chapter.... and I know the calm before the storm meanns that a twist is coming in other words the sh## it about to hit the fan. I can not wait to see what the next chapter will bring. I am beting that Jasper was the guy that kept looking @ bella after her and edward ate. please update again soon I love this story
Author's Response: Yes, cover up because its going to be a ton of shit... haha!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Pearly Gates
Whoo hoo--that was amazing! Yes I have heard of the calm before the storm.....
Author's Response: Brace yourself :)
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Unspoken Apology
Very interesting.
Author's Response: haha :) in a good way?
Reviewer: Marli-chan (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Pearly Gates
I don't mean for this to sound like a flame.. because it is not ment to be, but why keep Bella and Alice together when clearly they are starting to look elswhere.
Why do they have to cheat on the other? even if they love each other Bella should have called it quits as soon as she started have more feelings for Edward or at least be upfront about the getting pregnant circumstances.
anyway I really don't mean this in a negatief way and I will keep reading because I'm curious about how the story is going to go.
Author's Response: I dont take this as a flame at all. It just happens to be the storyline. Bella didnt realize she was looking elsewhere until after she started messing around, and the damage was already done. Frankly she has gotten in over her head and just has no clue how to fix anything, if its even possible. So she took the weenie way out, and just kept her mouth shut. Alice is not a cheater. She kissed Jasper, but will not do that again or anything else.
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Pearly Gates
i think that we should have A/BPOV in the next chapter. there is a talk that is needed me thinks! i really liked this chapter; i'm surprised that alice forgave bella so quickly.
interesting that she saw japser at the dinner and didn't even know! i'll bet he know somethings up!
i love the tender and sexy as hell moments between bella and edward. they really love eachother and that is so clear! the little weekend retreat was a great idea! it sounded beautiful and romantic; a very edward thing to do!
can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Oh yes, a major talk. Alice forgave her for over reacting. I guess its how I would react. I would have forgiven for that.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Flesh For the Win
HOT!
Author's Response: Burning up!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Pearly Gates
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Bella's Decision
i wonder how Alice will react when she gets the details.
It sounds athough Edward is seducing our little Bella.
GREAT CHAPTER!
Author's Response: Alice get details? Not for some time :)
Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Pearly Gates
oh how i want s peek in jasper's head as he watches bella with edward at the diner ... his head must be spinning spinning spinning.
damn damn damn damn!!! (i mean this in the best possible way.)
and is "is bella home yet?" all jasper's text said?
calm before the storm indeed!
it took me some time to try "it was only his baby" --- meh, i don't generally like slash particularly. but i had heard great things, sooo i decided to give it a try. very glad i did. terrific story!!!
Author's Response: We dont know yet how much Jasper saw, but soon we will! Yes, that was all Jasper's text said. I like to think he was checking whether she went home with Edward or not.
Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Pearly Gates
you know, to be perfectly honenst, i was worried about this story.. i didn't want to read it because i'm on of those "strictly B/E" people...but i took a chance mainly because i was looking for some good smut because it seems eveything i read rigt now is all angst! But, i quickly fell in love with this story.
Keep up the amazing work so far!
Author's Response: I am thrilled you gave my story a chance! And now your hooked, and that just pleases me to no end :) Thank you!
Reviewer: YourNameHere (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Pearly Gates
I always enjoy your chapters, bb! Seriously. *sigh* I ned to try the pearly gates ;-) It sounds amazing haha. I cannot WAIT for the storm, so to speak ;-) lol will she tell her, will she, will she?!?
Author's Response: Um... yeah. Pearly gates and me haven't met yet, but any day now LOL! The shit storm is brewing, hard, next chapter will be a ton but chatper 12... well ... brace yourself!
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Pearly Gates
Hot as always...
Feeling bad for everyone involved...it's a sad thing...
Looking forward to the next update
Author's Response: Yes, it's a tough storyline. But these things happen irl and after a while, most people can heal.
Reviewer: Louisa Williams (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Pearly Gates
Love me some Jasper! Bring it on!
Author's Response: Thanks for your vote! xoxo
Reviewer: shelly8721 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Pearly Gates
Very hot!! Loving the lemons.
I do wish that Bella would just get it over with and be honest with Alice. I really don't want either of them hurting. But I know that's not real great for the storyline though, so I'll be patient.
Author's Response: I aim to please lol! Regardless, they will hurt. Its just the matter at hand that forces that.
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Pearly Gates
I am very happy that Edward told Bella how hypocritical she was being with Alice. It was great that she listened, was motivated to apologize and remembered her friendship. Bella deciding after this weekend to admit the truth to Alice was the best news out of this chapter, but I have this feeling she won't get that opportunity. It looks like that was Jasper who was at the cafe and he may have seen enough to claim Alice for himself by giving her that piece of the puzzle that she was not aware of. I think I get your meaning by this chapter being the calm before the storm. Cannot wait. Toodles.
Author's Response: Edward is just trying to keep it real. I'm glad Bella's decision was the best news. There's not any easy way to correct the wrong they have done to Alice, but she will try to ease the pain the best she can.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Pearly Gates
I'm all for sticking to A/B pov
Thanks for the update! :-)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Pearly Gates
Her and Alice really do need to talk. As good as they are together, they need their soul mates.
Looks like Bella and Edward had a great weekend together... did Alice spend any time with Jasper (or are we going to see that)? Bella's going to need that great memory for the fight she's about to go against.
Author's Response: You'll find out next chapter what Alice spent her weekend doing. Yes, there will be intense moments coming up... to say the least.
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Pearly Gates
I would love to read Jasper's POV.
Author's Response: Thanks for you vote!
Reviewer: elw (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Pearly Gates
I want Alice and Jasper to hurry up and hook up, do B & A can finish this. I like Alice's POV and Jaspers would be good too.
I kept thinking Alice would have followed Edward and Bella and was going to catch them.
Author's Response: It will take time if A/J ever hook up. Alice just isnt a cheater. Not that Bella set out to be a cheater, just happened that way.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:40 AM · On: I have a favor...
AWESOME!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Pearly Gates
This was a fine chapter especially Edward and Bella's weekend (pant). I also liked the part in the diner. Edward is so patient and in love with Bella but she does indeed need to "shit or get off the pot". That was one of my mother's favorite sayings. :) I haven't thought of that since she died 15 years ago. I would feel really bad for Alice if she didn't have Jasper waiting in the wings. I think I would like to read a JPOV about what he saw at the diner that night. So I take it that it's going to hit the fan very soon. I hope Alice is more angry than hurt - lthough I know that is inevitable. After all, she had her chance with Jasper but remained faithful. So far. I love Bella and Edward together in this but Bella should have been honest from the beginning. I hate cheaters and Alice did not deserve this.
Author's Response: Hehe, so glad I got you panting... that is my goal! Edward is patient, and wants to show her that he loves her unconditionally.
Reviewer: kumari (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Pearly Gates
As always excellent job. I loved E&B's romantic get away and loved that you made her sea sick. LMAO. It's a pet peeve of mine that people who don't normally boat have no problems the first time. Not saying every does get seasick, but I've boated enough and had guests enought to know it's more frequent then not. (I know I'm sick for enjoying that)
Anyway, I am assuming the blond haired man in the diner was Jasper? Hmmmmm............ will be intersting. Also keep up your Edward's side of the story too! I love that just as much!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much Robin! I had to make her seasick, I just couldnt imagine going out on a boat in the ocean and everyone making it out ok lol! And yes, that was Jasper in the diner. I will keep Edward's side going. I'm feeling bad that he is so far behind in chapters tho!
Reviewer: nessap (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Pearly Gates
I LIKE ONLY B/E POV'S. WHO CARES WHAT JASPER OR ALICE THINKS. THERE BORING. LOL. I THINK ITS TIME BELLA TELLS ALICE EVERYTHING. CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.
Author's Response: LOL, your funny :) Alot of my readers care, but I do appreciate your opinion!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Pearly Gates
Alice asked Bella if she has ever done anything to make her not trust her. Alice may be more innocent than Bella but Alice did kiss Jasper then lie to Bella and say it was another woman.
Moving on lol. I love that Jasper saw Bella and Edward, that is so going to come back and bite them.
Why does it still bother me to hear about that night with Angela? I have read thousands of manwhore Edward stories but for some reason that one bothers me. I think it's because I love your sweet Edward that just broke my heart how you described Bellas feelings. Definitely looking forward to more. Jaspers POV would be awesome. I really LOVE EPOV on the other story too! :) MORE PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: Your right, she did kiss Jasper and told her it was a woman. And for that Alice is guilty. Yep, its going to bite Bella in the ass... you'll see to what degree next chapter! xoxo
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Pearly Gates
maybe jpov of the dinner and once he figures out what is going on how he is going to tell alice. hmmm did they forget protection at the cabin?
Author's Response: As far as protection at the cabin, this will be addressed in a future chapter :) Thank you!
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