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Reviewer: Victoria Maundrell (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Bella's Decision
Awww how cool, looks like he avlways loved her.
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Pearly Gates
Excellent chapter. So, did Jasper recognize Bella just from a picture? Hmmm...
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Pearly Gates
Amazing job! I like this story more with every chapter!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Pearly Gates
Man I'm sure the storm is coming. It was Jasper at the coffee shop, and he noticed Bella from Alice's pictures of her. Wonder what Alice was up to while Bella was gone? Can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Pearly Gates
I adore this story, but Bella is right. It's time to get off the pot =[ But I am heartbroken that this will end their friendship.
Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Pearly Gates
Oh my gosh! Love, love, love this story! Who is Bella going to choose? I hope this isn't a story where in the end they all share each other and are one big couple? As much as I like the idea of Bella and Alice, Bella and Edward are just so right, just like Alice and Jasper are. They obviously are starting to realize that they have feelings for other people, other sexes in general, and they need to talk this out. Is Bella going to get pregnant any time soon?
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Bed of Roses
That was so hot! Wow. :D
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Pearly Gates
that was so HOT !!! ;))
Reviewer: ale_ap (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Pearly Gates
ay ay ay Dios mio! I didn't know your Edward is such a sex god! really! He takes my breath away! I'm happy cause Bella finally made her mind about Edward, but I can feel something big (and not good at all) is coming =/ . Sorry for my late review u.u . Thanks for update :D loved it as always.
Reviewer: HelplesslyHoping (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Pearly Gates
Wow bb! I know that was Jasper in the diner.....the shit os sooooooo gonna hit the fan now! I wouldn't mind seeing a JPOV- I think it would add to the story....
You are doing FANTASTIC!! Keep it up bb- I love it!!!
Reviewer: esmie3 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Pearly Gates
Hahaha! I'm sure that was Jazzy at the coffee shop. Tsk tsk. Bella got caught and I'm sure his little snitch ass is going to tell Ali what he saw before she gets a chance to confess. Hot lemon. Thanks! Oh and I'm an angst lover, so don't worry about throwing some of it out :)
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Pearly Gates
Dang i was hoping she would get around to confessing to Alice before she found out the hard way. I guess Jasper will have to comfort her! She deserves it.
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Pearly Gates
I can describe u only as just plain evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Pearly Gates
Wow- thanks for the website :P - My husband will be excited! Good chapter so far...I'm really thinking that Alice is going to catch Edward and Bella....
Reviewer: Rhyadawn (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Pearly Gates
I have no idea what to think except that the **** is about to hit the fan! Jasper saw them! and I'm sure he's going to tell Alice! Oh dear.....
so good!
Author's Response: Yes, it's about to get rough! But we will make it though it together!
Reviewer: Ladyrose (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Pearly Gates
Awww I enjoyed this chapter, sweet. But am i the only one who thinks thats was Jasper looking at bella? dun dun dun!
Keep up the good work, im enjoying this :)
Author's Response: Yes, that was Jasper. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Pearly Gates
You are making me anxious girl!!!!!! and I think that Alice didn;t only talked to Jas but sth more....
Author's Response: Sorry, dont mean to make you anxious hehe! Save your worry for next chapter. Wait, did that just make you even more anxious??
Reviewer: nicoleyoo (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Pearly Gates
fucking amazing !
i waant jaspers POV,
keep it coming !
much love,
Author's Response: It's coming! I swear!
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Pearly Gates
whew. i hope edward and bella be together forever... hmm but im scared for alice.
Author's Response: Don't be scared, it will all come together in the end xoxo
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Pearly Gates
Wow, that was hot, sexy, I love, love, love your Edward! Will Bella tell Alice I hope so but......I think someone (Jasper) might beat her to it. I think a little of Jaspers POV would be ok as long as you promise to keep Edward pov in your other story going cause you know how I feel about that story! You are truly an amazing writer! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: I loe my Edward too! Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Moo jones (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Pearly Gates
can reviews be cookies i'm loving on the cookies at the moment so i'll personally bake you some __________ cookies from scratch
Am so loving it, can wait for the shit storm they're my favourite kind
Xx
Moo
Author's Response: Yes, I'll take cookies! I'll provide the milk. I'll take oatmeal chocolate chip... yummmmm
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Pearly Gates
jasper POV!!! yayayayayyyy!
By the way, this story is fantastic. I always get so overjoyed when I see there's an update. It's so fun to read how Bella's betraying Alice but still feels betrayed by Alice as well. It's a very real feeling, not one that many people recognize let alone put in a story. it's just really well done.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you see this story for what it is. I feel its fairly realistic. How often does a cheater run home and tell right away? Often, i believe, they are caught before the truth comes out.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Pearly Gates
im so excited for the next chapter now! update soon please!
Author's Response: Next week! Promise! I have a EPOV to have done first!
Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Pearly Gates
ack!!!! omg!
Author's Response: I know right?
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Pearly Gates
That move was hot as hell! The whole weekend was so sweet and did I MENTION HOT...
Wonder if Alice already knows...I think she does...and may suspect Jasper is encouraged to try his hand with Alice after seeing Bella and Edward together.
I feel for what Bella has to do but it is necessary
Author's Response: Yes, you may have mentioned hot lol! Good, I was trying for as hot as I could pump out (take that any way you want... hehe)
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