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Reviewer: shiny silver grl (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 11:46 PM · On: All Over Me

lol...ouch.  Pretty much the worst way they could've been caught!  I'm glad for Alice's point of view in this chapter, though.  It's so easy to get caught up in Edward and Bella's blossoming romance - especially since most of us have a hard time accepting any other ships than the canon ones - that I don't want to forget how they're cheating on Alice!  It's not fair to her, and it's good that she caught them.

Reviewer: precioustandi (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 10:55 PM · On: All Over Me

oh man, the proverbial SHIT is about to hit the FAN!!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 10:07 PM · On: All Over Me

I was supposed to get off the computer and start my work several minutes ago, but I stayed on the computer (tsk, tsk) and read the latest chapter of your story, and it's still completely fabulous, stunning, and has the same magic that it had when I read the first chapter!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Rhyadawn (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:58 PM · On: All Over Me

OHSH*T! not good sitc at all....

great update!

Reviewer: alexisjayde (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:55 PM · On: All Over Me

SHIT

Reviewer: Waldinando (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:49 PM · On: All Over Me

Hah, oh boy...that was a shitty way for Alice to catch them.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:42 PM · On: All Over Me

Holy Hell my dear...you going to give me a heartattack!! Granted this needed to happen but...*tries to slow down a rapidly beating heart* Damn! this was brilliant and the the showdown has now began! This is just to exciting. I will definatly wait anxiously for the next update...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:42 PM · On: All Over Me

Holy Hell my dear...you going to give me a heartattack!! Granted this needed to happen but...*tries to slow down a rapidly beating heart* Damn! this was brilliant and the the showdown has now began! This is just to exciting. I will definatly wait anxiously for the next update...

Reviewer: KellansBBR (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:41 PM · On: All Over Me

How could you do that!? Never leave something like that on a cliff...please continue....

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:40 PM · On: All Over Me

can't wait to see next chapter, the hurricane is here !

Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:37 PM · On: All Over Me

If Alice didn't have a thought as to what was going on I am sure that she now does and Bella is right the Shit is going to hit the fan in a big way!!!

Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 09:07 PM · On: All Over Me

OMG!!  What a way for Alice to find out for sure!!

Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:23 PM · On: All Over Me

Holy fuck! Well played. Didn't expect that kind of 'catch'.

Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 08:07 PM · On: I have a favor...

This is an awesome premise. I love it!

Reviewer: YourNameHere (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:41 PM · On: All Over Me

GIRLY so glad I have a computer tonight and got to read this!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, ah!!!! Loved it!

Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:39 PM · On: All Over Me

Damn.....the shit is bout to hit the fan and I can' t wait. LOL

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:33 PM · On: All Over Me

Whoa.  Talk about getting caught with your pants down.  I do feel bad for Alice, but I'm a sucker for Bella and Edward.  I love the conflict you've got going on here and can't wait to see what comes next!

Reviewer: Dropdeadfredward (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:27 PM · On: All Over Me

Oh fuck! I thought you would do some sneaky shit like have Alice find out before Bella could tell her! NICE. Lol. Cant wait for the next ch.

Reviewer: shopgirl7000 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:12 PM · On: All Over Me

WOW - great ending to the chapter.  You bet your butt I'm dying to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: prettykisses (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 07:11 PM · On: All Over Me

AH!  HOLY SHIT!

Shit is definitely hitting the god damn fan!

Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:56 PM · On: All Over Me

that was hilarious ... not really butit was .... i dont know ... goodness gracious. when is alice going to realize that bella is doing her a favour. ali is meant to be with jaz and once she figures that out everything will be better ... update asap! :)

Reviewer: twilight0507 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:53 PM · On: All Over Me

WOW>>>>>Alice is gonna freak! Awesome chapter! cant wait!

Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:53 PM · On: All Over Me

LMAO!!

Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:49 PM · On: All Over Me

OH. MY. FUCKING. GAWD!!! I have no words, Beck. I seriously don't. I'm just like....Gah! Okay, I can't wait for that next chapter, bb!!!

Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 06:38 PM · On: All Over Me

oh wow alice caught them! now she better apollogize to Jasper

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