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Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 12:25 PM · On: All Over Me
OHHHHHH MYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!! That is the extent of my thesaurus right now, you stunned me speechless, i new alice would find out, but i was not expecting to be this way, damn! the shit hit the fan indeed. i would not like to be bella right now :o
Reviewer: Marianne_Northman_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 11:50 AM · On: All Over Me
That's a massive oups!
I think u are right All I need should be out after the end of this one!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 10:53 PM · On: All Over Me
dun dun dun
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 10:34 PM · On: All Over Me
Holy shit, Alice knows! You are correct the shit is about to hit the fan! Great writing job, Alice and her super slueth ways.
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 07:07 PM · On: All Over Me
Ohh..the shit is going to hit the fan, what a way to find out about your lover cheating on you! Great chapter and I much as I love lemons I really love angst. I will miss Edwards POV because I really enjoyed it (but I do tend to always favor everything about him) so I will wait patiently till you are ready to type his words!!! Good luck in nursing school! I know its tough because I finished 16 years ago and I can't imagine it getting any easier but it is a bery rewarding job!
Reviewer: Moo jones (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 05:08 PM · On: All Over Me
Am loving it, cant wait for the shit mist, like a shit storm but has been cut up by the afore mentiones fan.
Lovin it
Moo
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Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 03:43 PM · On: All Over Me
yay! I'm actually really glad that Alice saw that. I mean, I know it totally sucks because the shit is going to hit the fan, but hey it had to happen sometime! I know it's going to hurt Alice and Bella but it was necessary because now Alice can run to Jasper for comfort and Bella can run to Edward (and probably be pregnant by accident) and then that's how it is supposed to be. I love this!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 03:36 PM · On: All Over Me
oooops! Busted! can't wait for next chapter!!!! Good luck with school!
Reviewer: amra (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 03:33 PM · On: All Over Me
What a chapter! Alice was amazing; although, I felt bad for Bella, as it was her intention to come clean as soon as she got home... too late!!
(Actually, I thought you were a bit hard on Alice; she really shouldn't have had to find out so graphically!!! A bit of an extra slap in the face wouldn't you say?)
That being said, I'm sure your way makes for a more exciting story-line. (I tend to like everything happy, which is way I generally only read completed stories - I'm just too impatient to find out what happens.)
BTW... I'm really sad about All I Need. I've been enjoying EPOV immensely, even more than Bella's! I enjoy reading these types of stories simultaneously... First Bella's POV, then Edward's chapter by chapter!
Reviewer: amra (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Pearly Gates
I apologize, I thought that I had already reviewed this chapter. This is one of those fics that I anxiously look for an update, and then read immediately!
I know what you mean about all of the angst lately!!! Great chapter... Edward was great helping Bella to come to terms with their situation, and then what a perfect weekend!
Interesting Jasper twist... Just for the record, I always appreciate hearing from his POV.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 02:36 PM · On: All Over Me
Wow. Awesome as always!
Reviewer: UR_PERSONAL_HEROIN (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 02:13 PM · On: All Over Me
wow!!! great chapter. but a suck ass way of being caught. lol!! but maybe now bella and edward can be together.
Reviewer: jhrbrown (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:50 PM · On: All Over Me
Oh jeez. This is gonna get ugly....Me likey!!!!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:38 PM · On: All Over Me
holyfuckingshit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! talk about a COCKblock!!
I really feel for Alice. I was gonna bitch Bella out before she was caught, but this is just too much. No way she can convince Alice she was trying to get pregnant by bringing sperm in THAT orifice!!!! lol..
I get that Bella and Edward are all in love, and that things have faded with Alice suddenly. But....that gives her no license to cheat on Alice and lie to her, about everything! Fess up, ho, and move on, so Alice can too, and won't feel that her best friend, and another good friend (Ed) deceived her in the WORST possible way.
Poor Alice. :( Yes, she kissed Jasper, but that is waaay down on the severity scale compared to Bella, AND she confessed a kiss, AND she's made it clear to Jasper that it's just friends, and has stuck to that.
Bella is a bitch for sure! Alice deserves better, and I hope Jasper can provide it. :)
Please update soon! I wanna see ALice go all spidermonkey on their asses! (and exposed genitalia, in Ed's case.)
This is an EEEEEEEEEEVIL cliffie, you know that?? ;)
Reviewer: Treya (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 11:28 AM · On: All Over Me
Oh shit she is sooo busted, it had to happen though.
Reviewer: Treya (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 11:28 AM · On: All Over Me
Oh shit she is sooo busted, it had to happen though.
Reviewer: spicynoodle (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 10:55 AM · On: All Over Me
What a way to be busted! Yeah... there's no excuses to explain away what Alice saw. "Oh, Alice. Edward was just airing out his penis, and you know how hygenic I am! I couldn't resist cleaning his whistle."
I know that both Alice and Bella have done wrong with the other men in their lives, but in this scenario as much as I love E/B together, Alice is clearly the wronged party. I can't wait until the confrontation.
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 10:36 AM · On: All Over Me
Wow, really need an update. =)
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 10:31 AM · On: All Over Me
wow! what a way to get busted!
Reviewer: AshLove (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 10:20 AM · On: All Over Me
Holy crap, the shit is definitely about to hit the fan. Call me a masochist, but I can't wait! I'm glad you found some time to write durring your crazy new schedule. I hope everything is going well for you. Until next time, I will anxiously be awaiting the shit-hits-the-fan-chapter,
~Ash
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 09:58 AM · On: All Over Me
oh my goodness!! caught in the act, there is now going back now for Bella and Edward. I feel really horrible for Alice, she is so hurt :(
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:19 AM · On: All Over Me
oh my...nothing like getting caught with your hand in the cookie jar...or would that be mouth in the lemon jar? :D
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 05:55 AM · On: All Over Me
holy crap.... can't wait for more
Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:03 AM · On: All Over Me
I liked it all! The whole chapter was briliant!
Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:50 AM · On: All Over Me
ummm...I'm not certain I can read the next chapter...I'm kind of too afraid of what's going to happen...
this sucks...I feel bad for everyone...but, poor Alice...she really tried...
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