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Reviewer: Wondabug (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Strategery
Interesting story so far, I think. I'm excited to find out what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is on it's way soon.
Reviewer: Wondabug (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
Nice :)
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Strategery
Can't wait to see where this is going.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm so glad you're intrigued!
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Strategery
so some hard time's coming. edward's a monster, who doesn't care about bella, only her blood... please update soon - can't wait for the story to develop and please, please make it longer!
Author's Response: Never fear, lucyv, the Cullens have a plan!! You'll get to find out about it next. And no worries, the following chapters will be longer, but there's just so much that I can't give away yet!! So glad you like it!!
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
I like it so far!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Strategery
Well, well, how is Edward going to "savor" her? I guess we'll see.......
Author's Response: LOL!! You'll just have to wait and see. I'm so glad you like it!!
Reviewer: isastar (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Strategery
I`m very curious how the Cullens will react, maybe they`ll show up too? ANd Edward?Will he really try to kill Bella, or turn her, maybe accidental? Questions over questions and only you can give the answers, so keep going and update soon
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're intrigued!! You'll find out the Cullen's plan next, but you'll have to wait a little longer than that to see what Edward will do. All your burning questions WILL be answered though! Thank you so much for the review!!
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Strategery
Like the idea of vigilant Edward! Did he have a specific reason to do it?
Author's Response: Thank you!! The reasons for hunting killers specifically is the same as in the book, but his reasons to leave is family are different, and you'll find them out soon! So glad you're curious!! :)
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
Well done! Wow... Edward is deliberatly hunting Bella... very different from all the other stories... I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I know, I can't believe it hasn't really been done. Glad you like it!!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Strategery
I like it! It's kinda scary/sexy so far!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad to hear is kinda sexy; I was hoping to convey an underlying sensual tone, so I'm glad it came across. :)
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Strategery
Great chapter!!!! Edward is freaky lol...you know I love it!
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you're enjoying him. :D More is on the way soon!!
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Strategery
And the plot thickens! Great update, dear... I'm curious about Carlisle and the rest and what they're planning for intervention.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! You'll find out about their intervention next, so not too long to wait! So glad you enjoyed it!!
Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Strategery
This is good - I can't wait for Edward and Bella's encounter.
Author's Response: Thank you! There's still a ways to go before they have another encounter, but there's some fun stuff that'll happen along the way. Stay tuned for more!!
Reviewer: JessCullen_215 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
This story is heading for a great start, and i'm excited to see where it's going to go. I'm really excited to read more so please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you're excited for more! The next chapter is currently being beta'ed, so hopefully it won't be too much longer!
Reviewer: mac (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
Yep, this makes a little more sense now after reading the prologue! Hah!
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for reading!! Glad things are clearer. :)
Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
Yeah, actually intrigued. I'd like to hear BellaPOV on the incident too. The start seems quite good. I wonder whether it'll develop in a good story:)
Author's Response: Thank you!! You'll get the BPOV in the next chapter. Glad you enjoyed the start of it!!
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
I like it! It will definitely be full of Stalkward....
Author's Response: LMAO! Thank you!! You have no idea how full of Stalkward it will be. :D
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
This is incredibly interesting! However short it is, you have my curiosity piqued and I want to read more, definitely. Please keep going... though I hope in later chapters the details will be more fleshed out. You wrote Bella true to her form, it would be just like her to still be rooted in the spot and watching Edward kill the serial rapist. :) Please continue soon! Thank you for sharing...
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! This is one of the best reviews I've gotten yet. Yes, this was quite a short chapter, but I promise the rest will be much more lengthy, with plenty of insight into both Bella and Edwad's characters. I'm glad you thought my choice to have Bella stand there and watch was in character; that gives me confidence that I'm heading in the right direction with her. Thanks again for the awesome review!!
Reviewer: isastar (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 12:45 AM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
This is more than alright, the beginning is really good! i hope you`ll update soon, I want to know Edward`s next steps!! Keep going
Author's Response: Thank you!! The next chapter is in the queue, so hopefully you won't have to wait long! :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
I'd like to hear more......I guess since he knows where she lives,he won't be able to stay away!!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!! You definitely guessed it, although I'm not gonna spill just how he doesn't stay away. The next chapter should be up soon!!
Reviewer: Antonia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
I would love to see how this story unveils.
Author's Response: Thank you!! Another chapter is already in the works!
Reviewer: edwardsmine (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
Keep at it. I am intrigued.
Author's Response: Thanks! I shall. Glad you're intrigued!!
Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
This is really good!
Edward is so a creeper!!! lol I love it. Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! LOL, if you think he's one now, just you wait! There's another chapter in the queue right now!!
Reviewer: wingd writer (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
Cool
Vampire role playing material.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I hadn't ever considered that possibility, but you're totally right!! :)
Reviewer: Roosickle (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Prologue: Vigilante
I'm dieing to see how this continues. Please keep going : )
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'll definitely keep going. Glad you're intrigued!!
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