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Reviewer: xXHiddenSecretXx (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Chapter Five
I like it. Update soon
Secret
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for your review! :) I'm glad you like the story!
xo Cassie
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Chapter Five
Wow, really like this story. Cant wait for an update, and please can we have longer chapters? Thanks.
Author's Response: :) i'm really glad you like the story! I'm not sure when the next update will be, but i'll do my best to get it out soon. Regarding chapter length - i do my best to make them rather long, but i hope to have longer ones in the future. I let the chapter come to me, and then i do my best to keep it at a good length, but sometimes i just have to stop. :)
xo Cassie
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter Five
I am happy that Bella and Jasper are finally reunited :)
I Hope he and Bella will be able to hang out
Thanks for the update : ) Look forward to your next chapter
Author's Response: :) i'm so glad you liked the reunion... I really hope they hang out too :P haha.
You know - you're one of the first people to thank me for updating. :) it really made my day. So thank you!
xo Cassie
Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter Five
Aww that was a good reunion. Buutttttttt...let's get rid of Maria. lol. I really want Bella to meet the Cullens and Brandons!
Author's Response: :) i'm glad you liked the reunion. Alas, Maria had to come into the picture, and ruin it! lol
Don't worry - Bella will be Meeting the Cullen's & Brandon's soon enough!
xo Cassie
Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter Five
haha I hope Jasper takes this opportunity to tell Maria to go away for good :)
Author's Response: :) I think we all want Maria gone haha :P she runied the reunion, and that's just not acceptable :P Thank's a heap for your review :)
xo Cassie
Reviewer: xxlilmiztrublexx (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter Five
next chapter! next chapter! please!!! why did maria have to come and ruin the moment! ugh! i dont like her already...lol
Author's Response: haha i'll do my best to get the next chapter out as soon as i can. I should have quite a bit of writing time - as im stuck with a severely strained foot atleast.. at the moment.. it's probably broken lol. :(
Maria just totally ruined it all i know! lol.
Thanks for your review!
xo Cassie
Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter Five
very nice story :) can't wait for an update
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like the story! I'm going to hopefully get started on chapter six soon. :)
xo Cassie
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter Five
I felt her fear and pain as she saw him that first time. Wow. I so can't wait for more.
Author's Response: :) i'm glad you felt that from the wording. it makes me feel like a good writer! lol :P
Chapter 6 should be getting written soon, so hopefully it wont be too long of a wait on the upload. :)
xo Cassie
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter Four
Uh I need more please. OMG!!!! BTW I love the pairng of Ali and Edward... Love it. Need more please! NOW!
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Prologue
This was a very nice start. I can't wait to see what happems next.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Prologue
Me likey!!!! Yeah I love Jasper and Bella pairings. You can feel the love they have for each other just from the way it is written... or at least I can.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Prologue
Me likey!!!! Yeah I love Jasper and Bella pairings.
Reviewer: JASPERS SEX KITTEN (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Prologue
Me likey!!!! Yeah I love Jasper and Bella pairings.
Reviewer: Edwardseyes (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter Four
I am loving this so far. Jasper/Bella pairings are some of my favorite fan fictions. I hope to see more of this posted very soon.. It is hard to only have little bits at a time...I want to jump head dfirst into the story.. :) Can't wait for the next update
Reviewer: leslo (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter Four
OMG! she just......! okay (deep breathes) all will be explianed for in next chapter....RIGHT?!?!?!? lol i love you for posting this, thanks so much :)
Reviewer: jazzvamp90 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter Four
omj! great chapter!! please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens!!!
Reviewer: pommedeterre (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter Four
ew ew ew ew ew Edward and Alice!!!! haha
I'm curious to find out why Bella didn't talk to Jasper :) Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: geminitwins (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter Four
oh my!! i loved this update....update soon....i want to see them "meet" again.......i love this story
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter Four
ooo i'm so hooked!!! I'm adding htis to my favoruites!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter Four
i love it. wonderful story. hope you update soon.
Reviewer: lillalilaprick (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter Four
I'm soooo happy you're updating this story now! :D:D:D
Reviewer: illtakeemmett (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter Four
you are right I hate u!!! just kidding!
loving your story:) I can't wait 4 B/J to finally talk
Reviewer: angelmastr7 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter Four
hate you... hate you is putting it mildly for leaving me hanging like that. I just gotta know why Bella would come home to be with this fine boy she loves just to turn around and walk away from him... I would think she would drop evrything and run into his waiting arms, and kiss them HOT lips, lol. Well, just so you know, I love this story and I really hope that she gets her chance and that Maria takes a hike.
Reviewer: Poisonvamp (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter Four
I'm so happy you decided to do Jasper's POV. This chapter was a little short, I hope your next will be longer. I'm looking forward to the next update to find out why Bella didn't go to Jasper.
Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter Four
Ohh my God!! What the hell, Bella?? She serisouly needed to run to him and jump in his arms and hug him like a life line!
Ahhhhh!!!
More soon :]
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