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Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 27
I am sorry, but I don't like this Brian person.
It is 5:00 am and I have been reading all night. The last time I did this was with Need to Escape! At least I am on vacation...
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 26
I thought Nick would have understood how things looked to Rob, once he realized how he had enabled Rebecca. Rob was not in a state to analyse every move he made. I am curious as to what is going on with Rebecca.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 25
You explained Rob and Kristen being at the hotel together rather neatly. Well done.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 24
I am proud of Nick. I am worried about Rob. I want to shake Revecca, but then I think Nick did it for me.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 23
I don't know what to think. I certainly understand where Rob is coming from. Maybe it is Rebecca that I got all wrong. I just don't know what to think, but I know that you are the only one who does know what is going on. So, I won't hunt you down. lol:)
You definately keep it interesting.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 22
Hmmm...have I misunderstood Nick?
Rob and Rebecca's reunion was quite nice.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 21
So, she is a Rebecca clone? Interesting. I thought there were a lot of similarities. It was interesting to see Rob with his castmates.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 20
I think Nick is great! He is a great, loyal friend and takes his job so seriously. He just needs a life of his own, now that he knows Rebecca is in good hands. I am glad Nick and Rob are back to normal.
That pap deserves so much more...but that is a good start!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 19
This must have drained you, but you did a great job. Going through this kind of loss cannot be rushed. There are so many stages of grief. I hope they make it through all of them.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 18
This must have been so hard to write. I am glad that they are not alone. Her parents are wonderful. I feel sorry for Nick, but proud of Rob.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 17
Oh, my heart is broken for them.
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Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 16
OMG! Is she pregnant? You have me on the edge of my seat!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 15
I love how clearly you described how each of them felt about Rob coming 'home' and that they ended up in that old chair. That was so sweet.
I also loved the basket Rebecca put together for Rob. Home, indeed!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 14
This was a great chapter! What were you worried about?
I just hope Rebecca does not regret falling for Rob. He is worth it!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh my goodness! That was beautiful.
I am glad you went back to Rob's evening with Rebecca's dad. That was funny.
I love this story!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 12
So, she was still hung up on Nick being the one to take care of her. Had it not occured to her that she could turn to the man she said she loved? I guess old habits die hard.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 11
Poor Rebecca! I hope she can get used to it. I hope she cares about Rob the same way he cares about her.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 10
I was nervous along with them. At least they had a nice breakfast and made it back safely. It was a start.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 9
They are so sweet together. I hope her parents like him.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 8
Began with angst, ended as it should! Very satisfying, indeed. I love it!
So much of her confusion was in not really knowing exactly what she was dealing with. Hearing how Rob felt must have put so many things in place for her.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 7
That was quite a jump! It surprised me. I am glad Rob wants to be there for her, but she did not seem to feel the same way. I kind of feel like I missed something.
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow! What a lovely evening...and it is not over!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 5
This chapter was too funny. I love this story! I think Lizzy did very well, under the circumstances!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 4
I love how smoothly you tell the back story. Now I see why she was so ready when her parents offered her the bookstore. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great introduction to Rob. I have not read anything like this before. I liked seeing Stephanie and Nick with him. I love it!
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