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Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Jacob

Wonder what it is!

Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Bella

Good chapter

Reviewer: shizzle (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Jacob

Great start and story. I am team edward all the way - BUT- it is a nice change to see Jacob get the girl for a change.  Can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: shizzle (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Jacob

Great start and story. I am team edward all the way - BUT- it is a nice change to see Jacob get the girl for a change.  Can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Jacob

Good chapter!  I like how they were having the same dream!  Can't wait to see what scared her so bad!

Reviewer: Becky2288 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Juliet and Paris - Bella

I love this I cant wait for more!

Reviewer: novelista26 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Jacob

continue continue continue

Reviewer: foreverwishing (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Control - Bella

I need to get some water, wow! If you have any visuals(I forgot to give you my email addy: barbiecanwish@yahoo.com ) Thank you for writing this! I am hooked!

Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Bella

Cute story!  The dialog gets a little stilted at times between Bella and Jacob but that will probably smooth out as the story keeps going. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Juliet and Paris - Jacob

The answer is YES!  You have a total change of voice for your different POVs and I love it.

Reviewer: kcmbrown2445 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Control - Bella

I like stories with Bella & Jacob together. This one is really good.

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Bella

I'M SO DIGGING THIS JACOB/BELLA THING AND YOU WRITE IT SO WELL!

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Control - Jacob

ITS STILL GOO KIDDO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

 

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Victory or Victoria? - Jacob

HELL YEAH!!! LET HIM RIP HER UP!!!!!!!!!

IT IS VERY GOOD STILL

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Victory or Victoria? - Bella

WOW THAT WAS A GOOD CHApter. WOULD BE NICE IF THEY WERE A LITTLE LONGER BUT EITHER WAS THEY ARE AWESOME

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Juliet and Paris - Jacob

Yes!!!! VERY GOOD. FINALLY! A STORY WHERE JACOB IMPRINTS ON BELLA. I HAVE WANTED THAT TO HAPPEN ALL ALONG

Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Juliet and Paris - Bella

I'm liking this version better. I like bella/Jacob better

Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Bella

Awesome story so far! I love how your doing both POV's! It's always nice to see things from both of them. Can't wait to read your next chapter!!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Bella

Dude! You don't do that!! Goodness! Please let it be a wolf,please let it be a wolf!!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Control - Jacob

So glad Bells took the news of imprinting so well! Jake is proably on cloud 80 by now!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Victory or Victoria? - Jacob

I'd tear her sorry butt limb from 'indestructible' limb.

Reviewer: Mrs Patohead (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Bella

I actually LOVE burnt marshmallows!!!

Reviewer: foreverwishing (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Juliet and Paris - Bella

I love it! It is almost like reading Stephanie!



Author's Response:

Wow thank you so much! That means a lot!

Reviewer: jacobwins (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Bella

wow. good job. except that i HATE cliffhangers!!! and i'm glad that your stories are different, and by that i mean not porn. i start to read some of these stories that start out great and then turn into plain nasty. don't do that please.

Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Dreams and Marshmallows - Bella

It was a wolf! I know it.

And wow, vampires and marshmallows, I never thought I'd hear that comparison.

Well, to me, it'smore like they're both so sweet and you can't wait to "take a bite" of them, if you know what I mean....

:D

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