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Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be posted soon. I'm sorry for the delay, but I have been on a mini-hiatus because I have a new puppy. Only a few chapters left!
Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
Yep, you are one of THOSE.
- those that hate the idea of Edward and Bella having child. And to kill any discussion, not only Edward is unable to have kids, but Bella as well.
Author's Response: No, actually I am not. i love stories when Edward and Bella become parents. I prefer to write from experience as much as I possibly can. Since, I have yet to be pregnant, I decided to leave it out of this story. Thank you for reading and I hope you continue to read.
Reviewer: gr8fulmom (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 11: Sour Cherry
I wonder if Alice "saw" them crossing pahts at this east coast college?
You story is super! It's just lemony enought but not too much :)
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
So... finally! Thank heavens! It was really sweet, too. Loved Alice's prediction over the colour! Brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you I love to weave a little comedy into all of this drama. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be posted soon. I'm sorry for the delay, but I have been on a mini-hiatus because I have a new puppy. Only a few chapters left!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 26: TastiD
I snickered all the way through this chapter! Loved the confidant Bella, suggestively teasing Edward. And the ehm... alternative human moment!
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 20: Hanging On Too Long
Damn Bella! Get a clue! Gosh.
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 13: Lucid Dreams
OH come on. That is fine. We need to get Emo Bella done for. She went with her hormones, so she is going to make mistakes. I mean, she's 18 and wants to experiment! I, for one, would love to see Bella get out of the Edward shell and live for herself a little. But that is me.
Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 5: Return of the Mack
It doesn't surprise me that she was THAT girl. Hey, I think Lauren, Jessica, and Ange deserve some props. I mean, they really are stepping up to help her. And it is nice to get POV's other than Bella's. I like knowing what is going on with Lauren. We don't hear much about her in the original books, so it is nice to have a story where Lauren isn't all the bad girl.
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
Well FINALLY! It's about time! I hope you have Lauren, Jess, and Angela visit before the change! I think it'd be fun for them to party with the Cullens. Like if they all went to one of Bella's college parties. (Minus Carlisle and Esme, of course) Great job, please update again soon!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: They both really needed that! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be posted soon. I'm sorry for the delay, but I have been on a mini-hiatus because I have a new puppy. Only a few chapters left!
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
Wow that was so hot and good. And yes they have finally made love. And I am glad Bella is still wanting to be turned. They really needed the time apart in you book and even SM. I know it was hard but it made them see what they really had. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be posted soon. I'm sorry for the delay, but I have been on a mini-hiatus because I have a new puppy. Only a few chapters left!
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
Finally. I think they might have combusted if it hadn't happened soon. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hahaha Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be posted soon. I'm sorry for the delay, but I have been on a mini-hiatus because I have a new puppy. Only a few chapters left!
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
I so enjoy this story, I hope it is not winding down. I hope that it continues past her change.
Author's Response: Yes, this story is winding down, but I have another story out on FFn and a few other ideas in the works (All AH). Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be posted soon. I'm sorry for the delay, but I have been on a mini-hiatus because I have a new puppy.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
Hooray!!! Finally! :) Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Next chapter will be posted soon. I'm sorry for the delay, but I have been on a mini-hiatus because I have a new puppy. Only a few chapters left!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
Ahhh...yes. So glad to see this again! I have missed this.
Good to see Edward's working on their relationship as much if not more than Bella is. He is adjusting to her being more grown up and more...everything. It must be hard, but he's working on it.
And their coming together was nicely done. Rosepetals are SO Edward. :)
Author's Response: Awwh. Thank you. Next chapter will be posted soon. I'm sorry for the delay, but I have been on a mini-hiatus because I have a new puppy. Only a few chapters left!
Reviewer: Isabel Grace (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 27: I Wanna
I just went back and read chapter 1 and then read this - your writing has come such a long way! Like, I'm jealous you're this good! MWAH!
Author's Response: <3 you update coming soon!
Reviewer: Isabel Grace (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: TastiD
Freaking hysterical - but you already know what I think! Love u!
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 26: TastiD
Haha, oh no, poor Bella! That's awful! Great chapter, please update again soon!
~Jazz~
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 26: TastiD
Ewww!! Thanks for writing! :)
Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 26: TastiD
o...kay? i found that chapter pretty awkward, short, sweet, but awkwardly weird. update.
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: TastiD
Funny! hehe :)
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 26: TastiD
Damn I loved it. I just about fell out of my chaire with the last part. Can't waite for more.
Reviewer: xtashax_123 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 25: Take Me Home Tonight
LOVE IT! xD Update sooon? Please? You'll be my favourite... :)
Author's Response: Update (it's a side/outtake that takes place between chapter 25 & 26) should be posted shortly with 26, following. Thanks for reading and for reviewing!
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 25: Take Me Home Tonight
Ah, this chapter was really cute! I hope there's more than three or four more chapters, but please update again soon, regardless!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Fluffy chapters are a nice change from all of the angst, right? The next update is a side-take/outtake that takes between chapters 25 and 26. I will queue up chapter 26 immediately following. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
I'm actually happy that Lauren's coming back into this story. Huh. Who'da thought?
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 22: Black/Hard to Live in the City
This story is so great! I started readin it the other day, but I've made the most progress today. Alice has been planning this all along, right?! I've thought so ever since Bella decided to apply to NYU. I would've reviewed earlier, but I couldn't stop reading long enough to do so! I'm off to finish the rest! Great job!
~Jazz~
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