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Reviewer: kkroonie (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
I took that SAT on October 8, 2005, haha. I was a senior in high school for the 2005-2006 year as well and I totally remember Uggs/skirt combo being a hot fashion trend (though now I definitely am not sure as to what I could've possibly been thinking wearing that in public, haha).
Anyways, I'm loving the story so far, and I can't wait to read more! I'm loving how you made Bella a realistic girl going through a tough break-up. Yes, she is a bit depressed at times, but it doesn't run her entire life. I like how she is starting to be independent, and I hope she completely blows Edward away next time he sees her. I will eagerly be awaiting an update!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for your review. I admit it I wear uggs in the wintertime to class tucked into jeans. Bella is not going to magically recover it is a long bouncy road for her to travel on. I try to bring in as much humor as I can to balance out the angst.
Reviewer: VampFan (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
Lovin your story..can't wait for more chapters. Keep em coming.
Author's Response: Chapter 5 is being Beta'd and should be up soon. Thanks you so much for your review.
Reviewer: EllaBittenByCullen (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
Great Update -Look forward to the next one!! YAY! PARTY FOR BELLA!
XOXO ~ Ella
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Next chapter is currently being Beta'd and should be posted in the next few days.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
I love that you do your research. :)
Author's Response: Google and I have a very intimate relationship. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: kaydub (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
i like bella making friends with lauren and jessica. i agree with lauren though, i don't want her to turn into one of those crying drunk girls.
keep it up. can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I cannot make any promises about Bella though. She's a bit unpredicatable when she drinks!
Reviewer: HPsharpie123 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 4: Under Pressure
Uhm, one question: Does Lauren become a meany-face afterwards?
Author's Response: I have almost 13 chapters done. So far Lauren has not been a bitch, that is not to say she will not have some teenage girl drama moments with her friends. So far she has not.
Reviewer: EllaBittenByCullen (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: Gone
HAHA LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 3: Hopelessly Devoted
I wasn't sure about this story, but I am really really liking it so far. I've reinvented myself times without number, only to find that my real self stayed safe all along. It just needed to venture out in different outfits on occasion.
And I completely enjoyed her astonishment about aspects of Grease. *grin* It surprised me too, the first time I "listened" carefully.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I know that the Edward leaving bit has been done a lot, but I am really trying to put a new spin on it. It will be angsty in parts but I will try to make up for it with lemons.
Reviewer: Frzr71186 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 3: Hopelessly Devoted
I'm loving seeing a different side of Lauren and Jessica (especially Lauren!) What those girls are doing sounds like pretty much every post-breakup girl party I ever with my girlfriends in high school.
Author's Response: I am glad you are enjoying the story. I am drawing upon a lot of my own teenage experiences. Thank you so much for your review.
Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 3: Hopelessly Devoted
LOL at getting over one guy by getting under another. I LOL because that shit works and it was my mantra between my ex-fiancee and my husband. ;p
Author's Response: It was definitely my mantra too back in the day before I met my husband. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Allure-and-Insanity (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 2: Cry
I would like to see edward meet the new bella when she comes into her own
Author's Response: All in good time, Bella's recovery is like landing a plane in bad weather - there will have to be several rocky approaches for her to make it safely on the ground.
Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Luckyirish (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 1: Gone
I love it!!! It's great how her friends are actually there for her and help her. It's nice to see a different side to Lauren too. I'm liking where this is going...can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. More of Lauren's backstory is coming up.
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: Gone
hello fellow PTB author lol i totally love the idea that Jessica, LAuren, and Angela are there for Bella. I think Charlie had a point when Edward had come back and she became a zombie because her whole life was Edward. Hopefully she will get some backbone in tis experience. Great Job and can't wait for the next update
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Bella will definitely grow from this experience.
Reviewer: islandgirl (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Gone
LEave Edward the hell alone - he made a mistake...
I hope him and Bella can work it out
Author's Response: I believe in happy endings, but I also believe in character growth too.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: Gone
What a wonderful idea. I hope Bella blows Edward out of the water. Stupid prude.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Stay tuned for updates.
Reviewer: Isabel Grace (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Gone
I'm so glad that the Twilighted readers are finally going to get to read your debut masterpiece! Readers: you're in for a good one!! :)
Author's Response: Guess who is going to be taken out for drinks? We so need to celebrate. You have been to MIA lately and I miss you!
Reviewer: amylouwho (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: Gone
I like the direction your story is headed. I've never read one with this after- Edward -leaves twist. Looking forward to see where you take us!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Hopefully more chapters will be posted soon. I have 12 completed and awaiting review.
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