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Reviewer: cat5050 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: Outside
Sweet--you're so cute. Yep, really loving this stuff. Funny, Edward KNOWS he's an idiot. Thank God for Alice...save the day in the end? Glad Esme and Carlisle seem to care, what? even Rose? Hmmm?
Reviewer: cat5050 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 3: Hopelessly Devoted
God, I LOVE Grease! I want Sandy's makeover. Really, Newton is strange--even his movie character. Your comment about the need for bad cheesy music because its all Bella has is too funny, and it so fits this
Author's Response: This is my only angsty story. I try to write more comedy stories. This is the only one on twilighted the others are on that other site, ff.net. Thanks again for the reviews.
Reviewer: cat5050 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cry
Geez--I wanted to just hurry on to the next but your comment stopped me. I had to review if they are better for you than RP dreams? You write this very well--I figure that haircut is I AM WOMAN badass! Ok, I'm outta here--carry on
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. RP dreams are the best.
Reviewer: cat5050 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Gone
Wow--this is different! Just discovered this. I'll just head on to do some catch up reading. Make-over, party, slumber party--without the Cullens--hmmm...
Is it completed?
Author's Response: Story is not completed - but I have an outline should be around 30 chapters. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: cupcakechampion (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
this is an excellent story.
I am really enjoying it!
Please keep going.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying this story. The next chapter is in the queue and should be posted shortly. Thanks again for all of your reviews.
Reviewer: rosiedee (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 6: Splendor in the Grass
YESSSSS!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing.
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
Wow! Things have moved fast, Edward's back! And good for Bella taking some time to figure it out! (Looking forward to more Lauren)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. Next chapter is in the queue and should be posted soon. Lauren will be back next chapter.
Reviewer: ttcub (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
Wow very good I just about cried when Edward wraped his amrs around Bella. i just hope she can forgive him, he only lied to her because he thought that was what she needed. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing - I am so glad you liked it. Next chapter is in the queue and should be posted soon. Lots more reunion times to come...
Reviewer: marini03 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
OH EM GEE! I'M EXCITED!!! LAUREN HAS TO COME DOWN AND VISIT BELLA SOON!!! AND IF NOT LAUREN, THEN JESSICA, ANGELA, JAKE, OR JOSH!!! :D THAT WOULD BE AN AWESOME REUNION!!! SOMEBODY has to visit within the next few weeks or at least before they start college! :) Do you have any of the next chapter written yet at all? I'll do anything for you to update in the next week or 2 instead of every month or 2... I'm absolutely obsessed with this story!
Author's Response: Hi - Thank you so much for your awesome review. Next chapter is in the queue and Lauren is definitely in the chapter. It should be posted soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
I'm so happy that they are reunited again! I had a big stupid smile on my face the entire time, even if it wasn't all sunshine and rainbows :-).
Author's Response: Thanks Elise - I have several chapters of your story to catch up on RL has been kicking my but. Thanks again for reviewing.
Reviewer: BellaPlusCandyGivesAlice (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
OMG I can't wait for the next chapter!
Luv Bella :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing - the next chapter is in the queue and should be posted shortly.
Reviewer: beautifulleyess (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
When i first started reading this story i wasnt sure about it.. but i soon fell in love with it..i would had reviewed earlier but i couldnt stop reading it... sorry.. i cant wait til the next chapter.. especially since i feel like ive been left on a cliffhanger..LOl.. Loving the work. Keep going... :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for sticking with this story. The next chapter is in the queue and should be posted soon. Thank you so much again for reading and taking the time to review.
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
I just started reading your story yesterday evening and just now finished or at least got caught up. Wow! I actually gasped when I reached then end of this chapter because I wanted to keep going. EXCELLENT STORY! It has left me wanting more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this story. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I am going to try to get updates out as soon as I can, but it is the end of the semester and things tend to be a bit crazy.
I appreciate your patience. Thanks again for reading and taking the time to review.
Reviewer: Abimaddevil17 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
Oh I so love this story! Its probably the best AU new moon i've ever read and I've read tons of them!! I need to read more like now!! so please please please update soon!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. I am trying to update this story as quickly as I can, but I graduate from grad school in a few weeks and until that is done - I'm not sure how much I will be able to get out.
So glad you like my story (you are welcome to pimp it out). Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review. (Btw I post teasers on pictease.blogspot.com and thecfictionators.com too)
Reviewer: VampireNits (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
wow! while reading twilight, lauren had never really caught my eye or intrest, only the fact that she was worse than jessica but reading this and knowing the impact she has had on bella's altered life, i want to give her charecter another chance. thank you for writing this and giving lauren another chance. i wonder if bella tells edward about lauren and he blows up and bella becomes defending or whatever. anyway, nice job making bella not to weak in front of him, except for the part where she says "alice, i think i'm seeing things". anyway, she expresses her pain and doesn't look weak. dats good cuz i hate it when she is shown weak, no matter how much i hate her for taking away the only perfect guy i have heard of, though i really dont like edward either, actually, i dont like rob (no offense to rob, ed, or bell fans)
Author's Response: That was an awesome review! Bella will not be weak. Lauren is a fun character to write since we do not know too much about her besides what we hear from Bella's POV in the books. There is always a reason why someone is not nice to another person even if it is stupid. I wanted to explore the what if Lauren hated Bella because she was jealous of what Bella and Edward had, because of her own heartache?
Glad you are enjoying this story. I hope I don't t disappoint, but if I do let me know.
Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to share your thoughts with me.
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
wow...sooo intense. sooooo wanna see these two and their HEA. story is amazing and so is your writing
Author's Response: Aww thanks for the review. I really appreciate it. Story has definitely veered off from my original outline. I will try to update as quickly as I can.
Thanks for being such a loyal reader and reviewer and sticking by this story.
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
Great story - and I really enjoyed this chapter. The reunion was exactly as it should be! :) Can't wait to hear what Lauren has to say.
Author's Response: So glad you liked this chapter. I didn't want a reunion that was perfect - I wanted it to be overwhelming and for Bella to be unsure of herself. Trying to update as quickly as I can, but RL is kicking my behind.
Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
She should NOT have let Alice off the hook that easily. I hope she lets them have it eventually, even if she does forgive them.
Author's Response: Bella is not done with Alice. She is still overwhelmed by even seeing the Cullens. I am not a "love means never having to say you're sorry kind of girl."
Thanks for reading and for reviewing with your thoughts - I love hearing them!
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
I love conflicted Bella, please allow her to get a little angry at him. I love him, but that was always my issue with the book.
Great Job!!
Author's Response: Bella is not going to be all "love means never having to say you're sorry." Heck no. She is more of a Madonna - "Justify Your Love" kind of girl (sorry that Glee Madonna episode is stuck in my head). Trying to get updates out as quickly as I can.
Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: devil4eva_666 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
sneaky sneaky sneaky! love it!
Author's Response: Yup, Alice knew all along. Alice knows all. Damn I wish I had that kind of talent. Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: folm (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
Great chapter! I'm glad she didn't just give in to Edward. I'm even happier that Lauren's still in the story. I love her!
Author's Response: I was going to end the Lauren part, but that bitch yelled at me and kept telling me she would write mean things on my forehead with a sharpie marker while I slept. Bella will not be shrugging and forgiving Edward that easily. Nothing is ever that easy.
Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for sticking with me and for always reviewing. You are awesome!
Reviewer: calemzoe (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
Yay yay yay! Glad Ed and Bella finally came together, albeit briefly. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the reunion scene. There is a lot more Bella and Edward to come. Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 23: When I Call Your Name
Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for reviewing. Glad you liked this chapter. Hoping to get the next chapter up in the next two weeks. RL is kicking my butt at the moment.
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 22: Black/Hard to Live in the City
Oo I love the story so far. The plotline is really original. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted to do something a little different and Lauren is a fun character to work with.
Glad you are enjoying it and thanks again for reading and for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 22: Black/Hard to Live in the City
I LOVE this story!
I cannot wait for the next update and am SO happy to be up-to-date since I am a late comer.
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying this story. I try to update it as quickly as I can churn out chapters, but being the end of the school year the next few weeks are a bit crunched. I try to post teasers on pictease.blogspot.com and thefictionators.com
Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to review.
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