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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love the direction this story is taking. I am so intrigued already!!
Reviewer: madwen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
i like this story so far...i cant wait to find out what happend next...
Reviewer: Sylvia Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 2
Yay!! 2nd chapter. I see Bella can't remember her i cant wait to see her journey progress.
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 2
I like your start. I've read a few of these "if Bella became a vamp anyway" stories and a lot of them have her being a veggie vamp from the start. I think this is more realistic. I know Carlisle did it but he was supposed to be the only one ever to have done that. This makes more sense. The not being a virgin makes sense too.
How much do you have written and when do you think the next update will be posted?
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 2
great chapter!! i cant wait for the cullens to come into the story! update soon!
Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 2
cool story looking forward to more!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 1
great chapter!! i wonder how he is related to edward! edward will be in this story right?
Reviewer: Lemmings (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 2
That was a really good chapter! update soon please!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 2
Looks like this story is going to get interesting. Can't wait to read of Bella finding Edward and the rest of the Cullens (or vice versa).
Next chapter soon please!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
Good start. Eager to fill in the blanks..
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
Great start. I am definitely intrigued by this storyline. I can't wait to read how it develops!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
its very nice! update soon, please
Reviewer: edwardsbabe (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 1
very good for a 1st chapter so in this story is edward a vamp? or just her was this dude his brouther cant weight to see what eles happends good work thow
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Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
whoops :-p Keep going!
Reviewer: Stelle (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Looks good! Edward's distant descendants should be so lucky as to inherit the hair. I hope you update soon...
Reviewer: Stelle (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Looks good! Edward's distant descendants should be so lucky as to inherit the hair. I hope you update soon...
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very intriguing, but such a small tid bit. I love the idea for the story and am anxious to see how it all plays out. I hope you have more to come soon. Well written--- I will keep reading.
Reviewer: jaguarsolaris (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
interesting. would like to see how this plays out.
Reviewer: roze (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
it was good short but good
Reviewer: Veritas Found (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great start here, hun; I love the idea behind it. Also, I love the human memories you had her keep - nice touch there. And I'm curious, but was Bradley's family name/looks just a memory-pulling plot device or does he hold significance later? (I'm just wondering if you intended for him to be a descendent or if it was just coincidence. xD)
Also: I absolutely adore how you have her feeding from humans. So many authors of memory loss fics like this have the vegetarianism something that's deeply ingrained in her mind and something she's unable to forget, so it's incredibly refreshing to see you write her snacking on the human's yummybloods.
Love what you have so far, and I can't wait to see where you take it. C=
Reviewer: cassullivan247 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
this is good
and has lots of potential
keep it up(:
Reviewer: escapebe (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
This looks to be a really interesting start.
I'm really excited and hopeful to see where you take the story. I really liked the explanation as to why Bella doesn't remember much from her human life. It's a good tie besides "we'll they just eventually fade."
Reviewer: Ambra (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmm, interesting. You have a good style of writing and setting up your plot. Looking forward to your updates.
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, God, that is awful. She just killed a descendant of Edward's? Assuming he was a descendant. How? Poor Bella when she does realize. And poor Edward.
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, God, that is awful. She just killed a descendant of Edward's? Assuming he was a descendant. How? Poor Bella when she does realize. And poor Edward.
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