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Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
another wonderful chapter. i just love this story.
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
Why is edward going to kill her? I guess he thought Carlisle was talking about Victoria?It's good, post soon
Reviewer: misha2607 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 6
Can't wait to see what you do with this story!
Reviewer: TheBlackCrow (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 6
wow... this looks good... really REALLY good!
I like how bella's mind is described... because even though it IS different from what most people are used too... so is her; she was turned into a vampire, so now her thoughts are normal for one of such kind.... specially one who spent all of her vampiric life working for the volturi.
This last chapter was simply amazing. I loved the insight on Edward's mind during the funeral, and I particularly liked the pack's reactions. It's good to know not everyone depicts them as entirely vampire-hateful creatures; so my applause to that ;)
Another thing that really amazed me (in a heartbreakingly beautiful way) was Alice reaction to "Bella's death"... simply beautiful.
I must admit I AM a little put out by Bella's and Demetri's (physical) relationship... even though I completely ADORE the guy. I guess I'm a softy when it comes to Edward -shrugs-
Now, Bella drunk... pure genious! I'm honestly asking for permission to use the quote "I'm not a bird, I need a tree!" on my daily rutine... please?!? xD
So, yeah, I'm quite desperate now to know how things develop from here ;D
Can't wait to read more! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! I give you permission to use the 'I'm not a bird I need a tree' line whenever you see fit. :)
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
I cant wait for them to figure out that shes part of the voturi. And has a thing with demittri
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 6
update soon please
Reviewer: misha2607 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 6
I would LOVE to see a drunk Bella and Edward seen....just saying :)
Author's Response: I don't think it's giving too much away to say I am planning on making that happen somehow when they are reunited. I think it would be fun as well.
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh wow, Edward found a way to turn it around and make it all his fault. So now he has, what, quadrupley abandoned Bella? This should be good for say, another 50 years of guilt? Love that Bella has found Cullen folks. I wonder if she will remember when she sobers up. The Cullens are pretty modern, but I wonder how they will take the new age Vamp that is Bella.
Reviewer: skymykel (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 6
AWESOME!!!! Can't wait for more! :)
Reviewer: StarsRefuseToShine (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Love your story so far... the whole bird-flying-smacking-into-a-wall had me laughing out loud, so good!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 6
OMGT! that was GREAT!
the anguish, the anger that edward (and Alice) felt! so well written.
loved the family commentary (especially em and rose's)
i especially like the last when edward couldn't finish...
oh- please update soon! can't wait!@
i hope there's a reunion soon, although it sounds like you are being very cryptic about them finding bella...
oh so good!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am nervous about getting everyone's feelings and emotions right in the story. So, thank you again. A reunion will happen sooner or later. ;)
Reviewer: shishishi (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 6
poor, poor Edward!
Reviewer: AngelAbrielle (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 6
great chapter
update soon.
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
Man, Carlisle didn't even want to AVENGE Bella? That's cold.
O-K. Vamps can get drunk? Boy, the Volturi must be cleaning up after a LOT of careless vampires.
Author's Response: The Volturi are kinda like a fraternity in that way. haha. Carlisle is too peaceful. He doesn't want to avenge anyone. :)
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
it was wow
little time
until next time
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 6
Oh I think we should definately stay in Edward's mind for now. Can't wait for them to meet up.
Reviewer: Vampgurl20 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 6
man this is a bad ass story i love it
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 6
This is the best story I've come across in a while, and I'm picky, so you should be proud. PLEAAAASE update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter was submitted a few days ago and should be up soon!
Reviewer: madamkrust (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 6
I love it. I like this bella shes so much fun I eally want her to rock the cullens world, im looking forward to more
Reviewer: Noelani (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 6
wow that was great. i loved every minute of it except the demetri parts. horrid vampire but he was there for bella so i can't hate him fully. well can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Yeah, everyone hates Demetri. I get it. I hate him a little myself. haha.
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 6
Wow. A compelling approach. I look forward to more!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 6
This was a great chapter.
As much as I love the Cullens, I do want them all to feel bad for leaving her.
You must update soon! This is one of the best stories on the board.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am flattered you think that about my little story.
Reviewer: piratehannelore (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 6
Love Alice's reaction to the damn fanny pack. I hated those things growing up and recently I saw in a magazine that there coming back. Some celebrity had a giant yellow leather one on. *shudders* scary. Can't wait to read more as I'm truly addicted to this story. :D
Author's Response: I'm not going to lie, I used to wear fanny packs, but I never will again. Ever. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 6
OMG! I am so glad they know!!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 6
Wow, great chapter!! Hopefully the next one comes soon! You had me at the beginning; I was thinking he knew it was Bella Carlisle had found and that he was going to tear her to pieces! Update soon please!
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