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Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 7
so the hunt begins
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh I can't wait for Edward, Alice and Jasper to find her. I just hope they do before the Volturi do. Love this story!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 7
well it was good but it was kind of boring
well until next time
Reviewer: etoesha (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 6
love this chapter LMAO at the Cullen's. You did such a great job I loved it. I sooooo love this story way to go.
Reviewer: madamkrust (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 7
I cant wait till all is revealed, I loved this chapter so didnt see them coming to find her straight away.
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 7
Wow I can't wait to read more! Update soon please!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 7
You're doing a great job! I am so interested in what the Cullens were doing and poor Bella, having to be a regular vampire all of these years. I hope Edward can rattle her memory a bit and see what happens. She may rip his head off for leaving her! Rut Roh... ; )
Loved it!
Joan
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 7
I'm glad to see what Edward was thinking, but I am glad to be back in BPOV! This Bella is awesome. Oh, here's a question Do you believe in happy endings? Either way it doesn't matter, but it will help if I'm a little prepared... you know, I am a softy at heart!
Reviewer: StarsRefuseToShine (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 7
I really like this latest chapter; Emmett and de DVD is hilarious; and you made me snicker at Alice for not even wanting to pack and the reaction rosalie has; it's genius! ;-)
Can't wait for your next update; keep up the good work!!
Reviewer: LMCullen (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
Please do update
Reviewer: BlueDiamond (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 7
Hope this has you motivated and over your writer's block. Can't wait for more. Please.
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 7
nice
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 7
I'm glad that Edward is facing reality and looking at things realistically. He knows better to expect Bella to be a vegetarian at this point, so that's good.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 7
PLEASE UPDATE SOON - I WANT THEM TO FIND HER ASAP
Reviewer: z stupid lamb (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 7
great chapter!!! love this! plz hurry with an update- cant wait to knows what happens next!! :) great story!
Reviewer: Littlevic (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
OMG this is fantastic.......can't wait for more
Reviewer: Lizababy (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 7
Your story is amusing! =) Love our carefree drunken Bella. She's difinitely spunky. I feel like your story is not just angst, fluffs, happiness, lemons, bunnies, etc. It's a combo of different feelings and sometimes I'm just not sure where you're going with the story, but it makes for fun and interesting reading. I like it like that because I don't get so overly emotional, like sad,hurt, anger, or using a whole box of tissue just to read a chapter.LOL Your story has some of everything and makes for balanced emotions.
I know we won't have an updates soon, but, please update ASAP!
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter actually shouldn't be too long. It is almost done and I just submit it in a couple days.
Reviewer: Elalonna (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh shit I was laughing so hard about the dvd and Emmett :P
I thought Edward would beat himself up harder about the situation but I guess that some sort of hope and happiness still overshadows that and other stuff (like not going too much into Edwards character and what he has been thinking and doing, I get that).
Still my favourite part of this chapter was the dvd and Emmett (I'm still laughing about it) So funny...
Oh and also I can't wait to see how Alice will react to meeting Bella again and how that will go.
Author's Response: Thank you. I loved writing the Emmett part. I didn't want to make Edward too overly upset because 1) He is focused on finding Bella and 2) he wasn't thinking she was alive and well and became a vampire. He though she died at 18, but found out she is 'alive' and well, so it is a good thing at the end of it. He had already been through worse. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Marykate 113 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 7
I liked this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: gidgets evil twin (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 6
ok...i am in LURVE with this story....it pwns me...and im gonna put it in a rec to some of my friends!!! cant wait to continue with it
ps....this is my fave demetri and bella
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: gidgets evil twin (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 6
ok...i am in LURVE with this story....it pwns me...and im gonna put it in a rec to some of my friends!!! cant wait to continue with it
ps....this is my fave demetri and bella
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 7
post soon
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 7
Glad you're able to keep Edward from wallowing in self loathing. Maybe if he is busy hunting Bella he can stay focused. I love that Alice didn't need to pack. It speaks to how important it is to her and now Rose is going crazy..... Love it.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 7
love this story. That says a lot because I don't read stories where Edward or Bella have slept with others - it hurts me lol. But, I do like this one.
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 7
Awesome chapter!
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