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Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 8
lol this is funny......... BUT I WANT CULLEN ACTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: It's coming, it's coming. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: cass (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 8
i always wondered what would happen if vampires 'changed' animals..
great chapter, can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: caperves1979 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 8
Yikes! A vampire deer. I can't imagine how fast that is going to be. There is no way she'll be able to catch it.
I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Haha. Vampire bambi is fast, but remember I spiced up Bella's powers and she can 'control' movements of others. It comes in handy (and will provide for a humorous scene in the next chapter or two). Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 8
“That….was….not food….That was….hell. They serve that in hell.” Bella's inner dialog is hilarious. I can't believe she created a vampire deer. She may not be able to catch it one it changes.
Author's Response: Bambi will be a fast lil sucker. Glad you enoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: laughingspider (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 8
ok, vampire Bambi? Twisted, yet funny in a "Bambi vs. Godzilla" kind of way. :-)
Author's Response: I know it's a little odd, but I think its funny, too. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 8
*dies laughing* I loved her reaction to the drinking of animal blood. that was a hoot!
Vampire Bambi... *snickers* Is Bella going to have a pet?
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. I wouldn't say pet so much as a possible running mate. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lollydot (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 8
REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the storys got a good thing goin, but can u pleeeeeeeeeease have bella reunite with edward soon? even if she hates him?
and wats with 'vampire bambi'? please dont tell me he becums her pet.
Author's Response: I'm not sure what is going to happen with Bambi. I wasn't planning on that at all, and then when I thought of it, I couldn't not write it. haha. We will have to see if he sticks around. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Littlevic (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
Although i can't wait for Bella to meet the Cullens again, I agree that this chapter needed to be here. The epiphanies were good in establishing Bellas' conscience and the last sentance made me spit my coffee all over my screen ;-) loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you understand why this chapter was important. Hope your computer screen survived!
Reviewer: Indiegurl20 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 8
omg please keep writing. im so interested in the story.
Author's Response: I will. Next chapter is on it's way! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 8
What!!?!!
Author's Response: ...is that a good 'what' or a bad 'what'??? haha.
Reviewer: lollydot (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
good... but did she really have to run out of the airport naked?
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 8
THIS WAS SAD AT FIRST THEN SOOOOO FUNY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter (even though it was a little sad in some parts)
Reviewer: ImCurious (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 8
love the quirks, great to have a story that's not always so serious. Vampire Bambi is something I'm interested in seeing - love it.
Author's Response: I'm a very un-serious person. haha. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lollydot (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 1
good beginning.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
that was priceless. great imagination.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Twi-love (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great chap-- yes I am panting for the "meeting"but I swear this was great -- Bella's weird attachment to the hideous pink fanny pack (this will drive Alice crazy) and vampire Bambi --- this can only get better!
I am curious as to what Bella's reaction will be to meeting Ed, Al, and Jazz -- she knows but doesn't know them?? And I swear their reaction to vampire Bambi -- haha!
Looking forward to your next update (please, please sooon, please :))..!
Author's Response: The fanny pack isn't going anywhere. Ever. Bella actually hasn't remembered anything about Alice and Jasper yet (or Rosalie and Emmett, for that matter) so the only one she 'knows' is Edward. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 8
OMFC! Bella is just ...retarded! Hehe. She is freakin' hilarious. Vampire bambi? This is gonna be fun. You damn near killed me with the cape scene, I could totally picture her doin' that.
Author's Response: hee hee. thanks!
Reviewer: byakuya (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 7
more please!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
Excellent. I really enjoyed Edward's POV in this chapter. I liked that his is realizing all that Bella has had to endure, the loneliness, the rejection... So, does Bella remember anything at all about Edward??? I am so excited to read more of this story. WOnderful update.
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
Really exciting story!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
"We would not be able to live with someone who fed off of humans, not even if it was Bella. I could, possibly, for her. But I would not put my family through that."
Well, aren't you special, Edward Cullen? You'll TOLERATE Bella since it's YOUR fault in the first place that she was changed and abandoned?
Author's Response: Awww, easy now. It's not a moral thing, it's because it will be too tempting to them. It puts them at risk to 'break' and hunt humans as well. Edward's not that mean. :)
Reviewer: Twi-love (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 7
This is awesome... I love Bella Bad-ass Vampire Extraordinaire. It certainly is a departure from the SM's Bellla but I see that "softer" Bella is there in some form -- I can't wait for the Cullens and Bella to cross paths so I am truly looking forward to your next installment -- soon I hope! :)
Reviewer: byakuya (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 7
ahhh what a tease
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 7
so the hunt begins
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh I can't wait for Edward, Alice and Jasper to find her. I just hope they do before the Volturi do. Love this story!
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