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Reviewer: way2old4this (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 20
OMG. I laughed all the way through that! I'm loving this story & SO glad you updated. Thanks for the little bit of Jasper time! Luv me some Jasper!
~Mary
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I love Jasper, too!
Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 20
I think the situation is pretty funny too! You must really not like jersey shore. :)
Author's Response: I'm actually pretty ambivalent about it, but when I tried to think of an inane show, that was the first thing that popped in my head. haha. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 20
Poor Edward. He is really being put through the emotional ringer... Bella needs to relax a little. I know she is going against years of programming but part of her must feel safe and loved with the Cullens. Her old self is buried in there somewhere and she must be dying to break through. This was a wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Don't worry, Bella will get her head outta her ass soon. haha.
Reviewer: destiny4eva (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 20
As nice as dat chapter was plz make da nxt 1 EPOV :-)
Author's Response: Next chapter will be BPOV again because of what happens in it, but the one after that will probably be EPOV. I know it's been awhile. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 20
yay she loves him!! haha It was cute how she had to use Jasper to decipher her feelings. Cant wait to see how it goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 20
But what if he turned into some ass. What if he let himself go and stopped bathing or something? Oh, God. What if he also enjoyed Jersey Shore?
HaHa. I love the way Bella's mind works.
Please don't make her run away again.
Reviewer: songii (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 19
loved it!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: VampFan (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 20
Sorry for the vague review. Really do like this story and how you characterize Bella. She's fun and funny. Thanks for the story.
Author's Response: Oh no worries. I thought it was funny (and true). Emo Bella won't last long, though. Thanks for the (2nd) review!
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 20
I LOVE how she reacted to that knowledge!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! The slap was my favorite part of the chapter (by far).
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 20
Thanks ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 20
Oh well you know how much I love EPOV! :)
Poor Jasper, he seemed terrified of her and then when she gave that look that was just classic! I love how she just dropped the shield and Jasper got slapped that was awesome! And the whole Jersey Shore thing! that was soooooo funny I might even have to kill them for liking that show, and I actually do love the Jersey Shore, just not the area where that show is filmed, hehe
Bella's freaking out but I really can't say I blame her she has some valid concerns but we all know she is one lucky she devil to have Edward :) Can't wait for Edward's pov! :)
Author's Response: Poor Jasper indeed. haha. Can't say I'm a Jersey Shore fan, but I like when they make fun of it on The Soup! EPOV won't be next chapter, but there will be one coming soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 20
Bella needs to just accept it for what it is. *g* She loves Edward, like it or not. Great writing! Loved Bella running to Jasper to figure things out for her and the smack him for it!! How typically female! :) And proud of it! Really nice!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter so much (especially the smack- that was my favorite part). Bella will get her shit together soon, I promise.
Reviewer: winterraine (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 12
This is great! I meant to review after every chapter but here I am...I'm completely absorbed in your story:)
Thank you for sharing it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Glad you are enjoying the story!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 20
ugh
Author's Response: haha....that doesn't sound like a good response. Don't worry, next chapter will (almost) do a 180. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 20
Oh, Bella! She just needs to relax and go with the flow! Edward is obviously crazy about her and devoted, she needs to enjoy.
Author's Response: Bella doesn't know what 'relax' means. haha. Don't worry, she'll stop being so assinine soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 20
Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 20
it does rhyme lol
neways this kinda comical but id get why bella can't realize she loves edward and why she has all these worries about him and the cullens
i totally get why she doesn't trust edward and doesn't feel good enough for him and that is because of when she was human she has her old feeling coming back up
until next time
Author's Response: Yeah, Bella is all messed up about what is going on, but something will happen next chapter to set her on her feet again. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and found it somewhat amusing! Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 19
that was lemontastic!! good compromise..
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 18
haha back to the sex bribes lol
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 20
yeah... funny how bella and edward seemed to have switch rolls on who is better and who is the monster...lol
Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it was fitting. But the emo-depressed Bella won't be around for too long. She'll start kicking butt again soon! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 17
first you bribed you readers with sex then you turned to threats? aw where's the love? lol no but honestly Im really feeling for Edward poor boy.
Author's Response: I thoroughly enjoy bribes and threats (especially threats). Thanks for all the reviews!
Reviewer: iliketoread2 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 20
if i review can you not give Epov. i really like when a chapter moves forward and not repeats the last. but a short recap would be ok
This chapter was really good it's funny how E&B has switched roles from her human time. Very funny. Jasper was good can't wait for you to update
Author's Response: Haha. I'm the same way, so when I do different points of view, I keep moving forward from where the last chapter ended and just have the different character flash back to anything that was really important. Anywho, I purposefully kinda made Bella's self-deprication in this chapter similar to Edward's in Twilight (or midnight sun, rather). Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 15
oh you understand your readers needs with the sex bribes . lol smart girl.
Reviewer: fanficaholic (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 14
wow nice lemons.. molested ha cute.
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 20
i like what you're doing with the characters. bella needed to be independant in my opinion. now she just has to learn to be independant at the same time as dependant on others. can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Bella will learn to mesh her independence with her new ties to the Cullens. (eventually...haha).
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