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Reviewer: nolie02 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 11

Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rate and review!

Reviewer: bmccall2068 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 11

I hope Edward isn't a prude in this story and makes them wait til they get married



Author's Response:

Even if he is, my Bella likely won't take no for an answer. haha. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 11

i love it. please give us more. great chapter. please make bella a bit harder to forgive. it happened too quickly in the NM. She needs to give him some grief.



Author's Response:

I agree that she forgave him too quickly in new moon, so she will give him a hard time (even if it seems like she won't at first). Thanks for the rate and review!

Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 11

This story is so good. Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 11

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ur an amazeing writter and i hate u 4 it crying my eyes out here! i need more!! please please PLEASE hurry with the next chapter!!! ur totally awesome and rock and all sortsa nice things! lol def dnt deserve a beating! LOVE IT!!



Author's Response:

haha, sorry for making you cry? Thanks for the compliments, though! Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for the rate and review. Next chapter will hopefully be up quickly!

Reviewer: Vampire Wizard (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well this sounds very promising!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 11

I think their interaction was perfect. Clearly Bella isn' the same girl anymore so how could there be fluffy bunnies everywhere. I'm interested in how she's going to handle that Edward caused that horrible memory. Should be interesting. It didn't suprise me one bit that Edward pushed her away. Update soon. Wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the awesome review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter and liked how things worked out!

Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 11

i like this bella; she's real, considering her life up until this  point. ;) and i can't wait for an update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: elw (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 11

Oh, it was great!  Loved it.  SO SO SO enjoy strong Bella.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: Littlevic (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 11

AWWWWWW Eddie is a shy little virgin, hehehehe too cute. I'm really glad that you didn't go the way of the fluff, that would not of been true to your portrayal of Bella (who rocks by the way)  I think Bella needs to king hit Edward in the next chapter for this -

 “Yes, I know what left you like that.” His voice was shaky and broke three times. “I left you like that.”

 Send him flying off upside down into the woods somewhere, they can make up later. Somewhere someones Bella needs to beat that boys ass so bad for doing what he did.



Author's Response:

Haha. There will be an ass kicking, I promise, but it won't be right away. Thanks for the rate and review!

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 11

WOW - BELLA GOING TO KICK HER ASS!



Author's Response:

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: feebee70 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 11

loving this story. also love the gorgeous banner, the image of bella is perfect. can't wait to see if emmett works out that pigs will get drunk if you give them a trough full of beer.... :)



Author's Response:

Haha. Not giving away any huge secrets to say that Emmett will be experimenting with alcohol and it will be good for a laugh or two. ;)Thanks for the review! Glad you are enjoying the story. And I agree about the banner(s). Props go to readergood and teletubby 101 for those.

Reviewer: kyndria15221 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 11

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 11

ok please - i want her to hear everything out for edward the whole story - you know - not freak out like a crazy human and go running off like a scared deer lol - i had to say human lol



Author's Response:

haha. Don't worry. Edward won't run away. Thanks for the rate and review!

Reviewer: Carbear724 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 11

I find myself wishing for more! the story is amazing and the characters are very much on point with how they should be if this happened this way (in my opinion) with that said please keep writing i wish to know how she will react to that little tid bit of info =)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Glad to hear that I'm not completely off the wall with things. :)

Reviewer: z stupid lamb (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 11

Omg. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! haha edward is still the prude as always but love it! he wants something special with bella and thats understandable. i just hope bella will accept him back into her life after he told her the truth of how she ended up in the forest by herself...



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Edward will always be a prude. haha.

Reviewer: Bellababe76 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 11

OMG!!!!!.......I love your story........well except for the Bella/Demetri part but the rest was fantastic



Author's Response:

Yeah, most people cringe at the bella/demetri thing, but it was necessary. Glad you enjoy the rest of the story though! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 5

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE so good!  I am cloudy!  Ha ha!



Author's Response:

haha, thanks for the rate and review!

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 11

aww! update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 11

Can't wait for the drama to really unfold!

Keep up the fantastic work!

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: drednomad (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 11

i really wish that i didn't start reading this story until later cause you have totally sucked me in. now i'll have to anxiously check for updates every night. ahhh....the wait is going to kill me.

Author's Response:

Haha. Sorry in advance about any delays between chapters. Glad you are enjoying it, though. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Olirin (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh yes!  You did it right!  I was actually really sad about the exchange student.  I can't wait to read on.  I am favoriting this!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the rate and review! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 6

oh that was so funny.. the whole fanny pack thing... rolling on the floor here



Author's Response:

I love fanny packs. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter!

I had a feeling that things wouldn't be perfect between Edward and Bella...Hopefully it will get better though.

Looking forward to your next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rate and review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: MMonraz (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 11

love it! CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

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