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Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 14

yey for edward! finally. love itt! is she going to tell him how many guys she's been with. i see her listing off mnen and edward getting sicker with each name, lol



Author's Response:

Haha. That conversation may come up, but not for awhile. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 14

Poor Edward, he is so befudeled by this different Bella.



Author's Response:

I think Edward was pretty lucky in this chapter. Haha. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 14

I'm excited to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 14

This was amazing.  I thoroughly enjoyed their happy time!  Poor Edward.  She was his before he left, only his.  And she would have only ever had sexual experiences with him if he has stayed with her.  THat would be incredibly difficult to deal with.  Why DID Bella turn her shield back on when she did?  I would like to know what she was thinking at that moment....   great chapter!



Author's Response:

Poor Edward, indeed, but it is his own fault. Bella didn't consciously turn her shield back on, it just kind of happened when she started controlling Edward and then stayed on. She wasn't really aware that it was ever off. Anyways, thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm glad it's not fluffiness right off the bat.  It's perfect.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rate and review(s)! Glad you are enjoying the story!!!

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 14

Looks like you'll be hitting 600 reviews soon!

Keep up the awesome work!

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

600 is crazy! I am amazed it has even been read 600 times. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kbaby (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 14

Very nice!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait till the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rate and review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 5

I can't wait to push the next button!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 14

wow amazing ome was that hot lol
can't wait for the next chapter
well until next time

Author's Response:

Thanks for the rate and review! Glad you enjoyed it pants-free-ness!

Reviewer: Debra Fox (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 14

Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 14

go bella!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 14

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 1

So it seems she killed one of Edward's relatives.

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 14

Holy hell - this chapter was worth the wait - I cant wait for more!

Tammy



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 14

What an bubbling idiot.  “Bella? Do you want me… Am I supposed to…reciprocate?”

I'm using that line on my husband tonight. Just so I can watch his face when the question finally gets through. Just to see his reaction.

Off to laugh some more. Thanks for the update. I greatly enjoyed it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I like to make fun of Edward's inexperience and insecurities. ;) I hope your husband's reaction is amusing! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 14

Wonderful chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 14

Damn, that was hot!  And you know what, it sucks Eddie, but yeah she's got experience, too bad!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rate and review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: duckindistress (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 13

loving the story, you have the humour and emotions in perfect balance.

You are right, edward always looked like he had something shoved up his ass when ever he was in pain, I always imagined it to be a cucumber, you picked a sledgehammer, thats pretty big .... and I imagine pretty fucking painful  lol

Looking forward to the next chapter, especially imagining how you ar going to get edward out of his pants, will they be destroyed in a bambi wrestling incident in the meadow?  one can only dream.

Would a threat make you post quicker?  Its worth a try.....  I just need to find that sledgehammer...now where did I leave it... hmmm



Author's Response:

haha...sledgehammer is not needed. Thanks for the rate and reviews. Glad you found the story and are enjoying it! The next chap has been in the queue about a week, so hopefully will be posted soon. And, while Edward did not get completely out of his pants, the important parts did in a very nice little way. ;)

Reviewer: duckindistress (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 8

oh my god, i have never laughed so much at a fan fic, bella just tunred a baby dear, its like some sick version of bambi, is she gonna turn thumper next too, just you know, to see what happens, in fact while we are at it, i'm sure there is a little house in the forest full of 7 dwarves, that would be interestesting, bella could start her own guard, Bella, Bambi, thumper and the 7 dwarves.  It's like tim burtons take on remastering a disney classic, he he he he he he he lol

Anyways, loving the story, just found it and am going through the chapters quicker than edward up a tree, Sara xx

Reviewer: kbaby (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 13

very good, please finish soon

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 13

Hello again,

 

Just checking in and re-reading.  Missing this story. (I know you warned us it would be awhile, but I just thought I would tell you)

 

If I didn't tell you before, I am glad she finally let the Cullens know what happened to her after they left. They should chew on that for a while!

 

Looking forward to the out-take, as well. ;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks! It's nice to be missed. :) The one shot will hopefully be up soon, and I will post the next chapter straight away. It's a doozy, too. The longest yet so hopefully it'll make up for the delay. :) Thanks again!

Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 13

This is a really good story! I love this Bella! Can't wait for the next chapter!

~Jazz~

(PS, I think it would be really cool if Bella arm-wrestled Emmett and used her mind control thing to win. Before they find out about it. Just a random idea.)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I'll have to think about the arm wrestling thing. :)

Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 13

Wow! I'm so glad she punched him, but I wish it was because he left her and she had remembered. Such is life. Can't wait for the other chapter nine.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! There will be more punches thrown in the future, don't worry. :)

Reviewer: passionmama (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 13

Ahhh very intriging.  This Bella can't seem to deal with her feelings without running, girl must have fantastic legs! Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

This Bella isn't used to having feelings. She's discovering how scary they can be. haha. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2010 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 13

Excellent chapter.  I hope Bella starts to remember soon.  Poor Edward is in Hell.  He is being tortured by his past decisions.  I hate to see him in so much pain!



Author's Response:

Ah, Edward deserves it a little. But Bella will have some good memories next chapter, and he will be there for it, so there is a reprieve from his misery. :) Thanks for the review!

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