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Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 11
Edward, Edward, Edward... You're in trouble...
How will Bella react to the knowledge that he was the one who left her like that in the woods? And Edward, please, if you don't want to have sex with someone you really don't have to literary send her flying ;)
Love that Bella got a bit pissed off when Edward started to get protective!
I know that it is a lot for Edward to take in and adjust to but sometimes he just drives me crazy! Still love him though...
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 10
That was intense! Wow, she is powerful! I love that!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 9
Love that it was Jasper who found her. He is probably the one most likely to stay calm and not overwhelm her.
Have to quickly head on to the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
Holy crap, that was the most hilarious chapter! I laughed so much that my husband actually came to check up on me!
Vampire Bambi *rofl*
No, I’m a freaking vampire I do not need a gun, for Pete’s sake.
What was I, Saint Bella?
There are so many other extremely funny lines but those were the ones that stuck out!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
Nooo! Don't send Bella away to Phoenix now!! You're evil!
So, Aro knew all the time about Bella's connection with the Cullen's? Sneaky bastard!
Favorite line:
"My entire family gaped at her as if winged bunnies just sprang from her mouth."
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 6
Love EPOV!
This was a painful chapter. It feels like my heart is breaking and I'm having a difficult time fighting the tears. Better keep reading to see what will happen.
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 5
Carlisle!?!?!?! I think it's really him. If so, he's had quite a shock. Bella is alive, she's a vampire and she's drunk =)
Thirsty Thursday - ingenious and hysterical!!!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 4
That's quite the interesting power Bella has!
She saw Jasper! So close....
Poor Demetri... blue balls???
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
This is so sad!
I loved her reasoning about the fact that the beautiful vampire and her couldn't be mate due to fact that he had not changed her. He couldn't have kept her weak and unequal if he truly loved her and wanted a real relationship with her...
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
Keeps getting more interesting! Love your writing style!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start!
"I wasn’t really in the mood for French, but I would take what I could get." - quite casual and absolutely hilarious!
Reviewer: DingoesAteMyBaby (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 15
I really like this. Of course it was a bit ground breaking or whatever to read such an "evil" bella, but I like how you're slowly starting to mend things. There's probably a long way to go, but still, I like it.
I have a feeling that Jacob isn't gone yet...something about phasing could make one live forever right? stuck as a twenty five year old or something...I don't know, I like this story a lot, but I just can't get Charlie's grief out of my head. He's dead and poor him never got the truth, thinking his only child was eaten by a bear or something along those lines - poor man.
In case you haven't noticed - I love charlie hehe.
Now, stop reading and get writing so i can get the next chapter hehe.
Happy writing
d. mai
Author's Response: haha, thanks for the awesome review! I honestly don't know about Jake, but it is possible for him to make an appearence and still be young. Yeah, it sucks about Charlie, but that's the way the cookie crumbles. Next chapter should be posted in a few days. Thanks again!
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 15
Well goodness, that was quite the memory! Great chapter, cannot wait for the next!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: syaoran7 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 15
Love this story! I just stumbled upon it, and it was the best thing all day!! Love!!
Author's Response: Glad you found the story and are enjoying it! Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: AlexandraK (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great story!!!!
Update soon please, can't wait :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you are enjoying!
Reviewer: Nadiea (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 15
Story is doing well! I love Drunk Bella! She is soo freakin' funny!
Author's Response: Small insight: drunk Bella is based off of drunk me. haha. Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: sprazinko (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 15
This is really good cant wait to see what happens when aro comes to visit
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying the story! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 15
I just read your stort. I like it.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you are enjoying the story!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 15
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 15
Oh....I just love this Bella. She puts Edward in his place and doesn't allow him to be all brooding. Love this story.
Author's Response: haha, go Bella! Thanks for the review! Glad you are enjoying the story!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 15
loved the fluff- i can twait for more
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 15
Great work!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chap.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 15
awesome
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 15
omg did u hear that SM made a 5th book to the TWILIGHT SAGA it bree's pov in eclipse and they put it in the movie
o.... and loved it was amzing i love how bella is falling for himand she doesn't even know it
so love the story so far
can't wait for next chapter
well until next time
Author's Response: I did hear that. I'm excited to read (and see) it! Glad you are enjoying the story so much! Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 15
break through!! yay!!
Author's Response: haha. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: haha. Thanks for the review!
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