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Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 21

I can't believe that Bella let Rose hit her.

Author's Response:

Its only because Bella felt like hitting herself at that point. Thanks for the rating and review!

Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 21

AH, it's been way too long.  Missed you and this little tale!!  I hope you'll be updating oftenand soon!  Hugs, Ginnie



Author's Response:

I know, it's taken forever to update. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 21

This was a great chapter - Bella's inner self was a hoot



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!!!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 21

 still loving this story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you are loving it!

Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 21

Wonderful chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 21

alice needs a beat down every now and then



Author's Response:

Alice better watch out...there are a lot of angry readers. haha. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 21

o yes alice is i mean wtf did she not hear them talking or breathing before hand i mean really
pls update faster loved this chapter lol
well until next time

Author's Response:

Poor Alice...somehow she seems be the getting the bad-luck shaft in this story, and I'm not sure why because I love Alice. haha. Thanks for the rating and review! I'll try to update faster.

Reviewer: cbzoo813 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 21

thanks for the update, keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review!

Reviewer: Dozey212 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 21

i do a happy dance every time this story updates! i adore it! thanks for writing!



Author's Response:

I love happy dances. I do many of them myself. :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 21

Awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review!

Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 20

Pleeeease come with the next chapter soon! I can't wait to see what happens!! :-) LOVE this story. Just wishing that Bella wasn't such a bitch all the time, and snapped back into some of her 'old' personality. I miss her.



Author's Response:

I know, I'm being obnoxiously slow with these updates. Sorry. Next chapter should be validated soon! And Bella starts turning around in the next chap, so hopefully you'll enjoy that! Thanks for the rating and review!

Reviewer: twi-hard4ever (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 20

this was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but howcome its taking so long for the next one??!!PLZ HURRY!!!!!!!

once again AMAZING!!!!!!!!!my favourite story!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review! Next chapter should be submitted tonite, and posted in a few days hopefully. Real life has been kicking my butt lately. I am glad you are enjoying the story so much, though!

Reviewer: kbaby (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 20

Ok, I love this one. You have drama, suspence and lots of humor!!! My family looks at me like I have lost my damn mind everytime I start laughing my ass off staring at my laptop ( maybe I need to hide in my room while I am reading your stories, so I don't have to worry about them coming in with a straight jacket later??). I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review! Sorry that your family thinks your going bonkers. haha. Glad you are enjoying the story, though!

Reviewer: Nadiea (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 20

I love your version of Bella she is soo funny and they thing with bambi! Classic!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the rating and review. I love bambi!

Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 20

Okay I feel sorry for everyone right now.  When you wrote Edward did you by chance forget to give him balls?  Just wondering. He collapsed on the stairs, well I get that he's terrified that he'll lose Bella again and that's understandable but sheesh, I can't see him like that.  He's like a noodle.  lol, I wanna give him a hug.



Author's Response:

Haha, clearly Edward has balls. It would be horrifying if he didn't! Nooddle-ward. That's a new one. haha. Thanks for the review, and don't worry, he won't lose her again. Next chapter gets a million times better on that front!

Reviewer: HyphenAnn (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 20

Funny? Lol no.. I feel really bad for her. Trying to live up the a person who ur "ment" to be is pretty hard. But she loves him! Yaii =D realization sucks sometimes Xp

Author's Response:

Yeah, her situation is kinda crappy. I think the way she finds out she loves him is kinda hilarious, though. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 20

Hilarious inner monologue. "I'll be trapped with a dirty Jersey Shore loving nightmare" LMAO......I loved this chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the rating and review!

Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 20

ur a poet and u did'n know it! lol i loved this chapter def the best chapter EVER!! i love that she slapped jasper! jas def got the best line is my oppinion shit! i broke her! loved it can't wait for the nxt chapter!



Author's Response:

haha, I like rhyming. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the rating and review!

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 20

So she can't deal with the fact that he loves her whether she's good golden human Bella or people drinking vampire Bella.  Hmmmm...  She just has to wrap her head around it.  I think with a little time she'll get it.  I hope.



Author's Response:

Yeah, she'll come to terms with it all in time. She's just in shock. haha. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 20

Please update! I want Edward to hear Bella's thoughts. xxx



Author's Response:

What would Edward do if he could actually hear the crazy things that go through Bella's mind? haha. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 20

aww poor bella...i feel sorry for her, i love japser's line.."shit..i think i broke her!"



Author's Response:

I love Jasper in general. ;). Things will be looking up for Bella soon, don't worry. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 20

Wow this story just amazes me. Just when you think you've got her all figured out she changes. Awesome chapter. Keep up the great writing. HAHA Edward is a 200 year old Virgin LOL!



Author's Response:

Haha, hopefully he won't be a virgin too much longer. Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 20

Loved it - poor Bella!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed!

Reviewer: Dozey212 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 20

hey, yeah, i think its hella funny too. i love bella in this .... "maybe im emotionally retarded" ... LOL. poor bella. im sorts hating edward, but i know he cant just ditch human bella since that'd never happen and just picked up this new ass kicking, emotionally retarded bella...



Author's Response:

haha, unfortunately Edward can't forget about human Bella. Thanks for the review! Glad you are enjoying the story!

Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 20

I started this story a long time ago and just found it again, and I'm glad that I did.  i remembered the part about Bella flying into the wall (several chaps ago) and remembered laughing about it then too. 

I like how different this is and how Bella is slowly coming to terms with everything.  And, of course, she still has her insecurities!  Can't wait to see where you're headed with this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you found the story again. Yeah, the wall slam was one of Bella's finer moments. haha.

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