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Reviewer: open_arms (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
loving the story just read all 17 chapters and I feel proud but am now dying for mooooreee please. SO much good stuff I have to say the waynes world nod made me giggle (excuse me? Baking pwder?) now bella stop being so stubborn and get back to edward and have nookie. now. hehehe :)
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 17
Whay and th ehell is B so damn stubborn? She will never forget Edward and she acts like a frickin idiot all the time!
Author's Response: Yes, yes she does. But her idiocy makes her more endearing (sometimes). She'll smarten up soon. Thanks for the rate and review!
Reviewer: xxladytroublezxx (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 17
More please :)
Author's Response: more is coming! thanks for the rate and review!
Reviewer: youdazzleme (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 17
I just started reading your story and I love it. I really enjoy reading stories with Bad-Ass Vampire Bella. They are so much fun.
I do have one comment though- the cell phone. It would be programed to Edward's time zone, not wherever Bella was. If Bella checked the phone and it was 8pm, that would mean it was 8pm where Edward was but not necessarily where Bella was if she was in a different time zone.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you found the story and are enjoying it! The time zone thing: I'm not sure. My phone always adjusts itself when I travel. Maybe my phone is just a loser, though. haha. Thanks again!
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 17
Bribary for reviews, nice! LOL I thought it was good info. Short, yes. Bad, no. Your last line may make some ladies very happy too. ;-)
Ginnie
Author's Response: haha, that is true about pleasing the ladies! thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 17
she better come home...humph
Author's Response: She will, i promise. Don't fret. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Eddieluv (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 17
Great chapter!!
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 17
Poor Edward, that phone is going to become his lifeline.
Author's Response: yep, he is going to live with that phone indefinitely. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kbaby (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 17
Very good cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! will bella come back?????
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Yes, she will eventually make it back!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 17
I was kind of heart broken when Bella tossed the phone and took off to Russia. I do wish Edward was a bit tougher but oh well... Can't wait to see what brings Bella back to the Cullens. Will it be Edward or just a weird sense of belonging that she's fighting tooth and nail? Guess I'll have to wait and see! Good writing!!
Joan
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Guess you'll have to wait and see what drives Bella back to the Cullens!
Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 17
I am having trouble believing that Bella truly ran AGAIN. But hey I could be wrong. I just noticed an interesting choice of words for the desposal of the phone. Everything was in the future, it didn't actually say weather or not she went through with it or not.
Anyways you did a good job on the chapter and I look forward to reading more of this great story soon. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review. Don't worry, Bella won't be gone long at all!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 17
can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 17
yes go hide wat the bloody fuckin hell wat that she better not run forever
well here is my review so u can do that can u
it was ok i donn't bella to run come she is far from jane
well until next time
Author's Response: haha, I am hiding. She won't run forever. She'll get her wits about her and head back to the Cullens, I promise. Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 17
Tee hee. "Alice came out of the closet.". I love it. More. Feed me, seymour, feed me. :)
Author's Response: haha, thanks for the review! More is on the way!
Reviewer: 19Nina83 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 17
I like how this story is turning out and can't wait to see what happens before edward and bella are reunited permanently.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gredelina1 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 17
This chapter was not boring at all! It was really interesting to read Bella's reasoning about her feelings for Edward and herself. Poor Edward is just coming apart without Bella now! Talk about being lost! Love Rosalie telling Edward off! I love Alice hiding in the closet like a pouty, spoiled child!
"I had not planned for this when I was planning my unplanned-sounding interaction with her." - lol!!! Brilliant!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: honey swan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 17
I like the way you are going =)
Author's Response: I think you're the only one, haha. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 17
Poor Edward. He is so lost without her. I feel so badly for hime. He was trying to protect her and ended up ruining both of their lives.... I hope she remembers him. I can't wait for her to return to him!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, he has the short end of the stick right now. It'll work out eventually for them, though. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 17
Ahhhh I love it :]
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: Debra Fox (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 17
I am holding on to my faith that Bella will return to Edward because she wants him. I am excited for the showdown in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! She will return...eventually *haha*
Reviewer: twilightnewborn (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 17
Although Bella is really bothering me right now, I am sticking with this story and hoping she gets back to her regular self soon. Great writing and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I know, Bella is such an idiot. haha. All will end well, though, I promise. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: silviababy (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 17
this chapter was awsome can we gett bella some more bonding time with the cullens espicially alice i know she not regular bella but if she friends with alcie its perfect so please and i luve the story plse update more
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! There will be some more bonding time down the road (with Alice, too)!
Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 16
I can't wait to see what happens when the volturri come, and for when Bella comes back!
Reviewer: vegevamp7 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 16
Ahhhh you need to write more quickly! Please? :]
Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
Okay...
I love vampire Bambi...genious!
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