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Reviewer: devil4eva_666 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 18
LEMONS!!!!
good job
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: jbkb951 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 18
Awesome story. Please keep writing. And maybe, just maybe, Bella can start remembering some happy memories of her and Edward. Maybe the lullaby he made for her?
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Haha....everyone wants happy memories. I guess the ones full of death and destruction aren't quite cutting it. She'll remember better things, I promise.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 18
Well, I must admit, I DO love me a pantless Edward. I was thrilled that Bella was able to figure out that she wants to be with Edward. Well, that she needs to be with him, at least. They still have so much to talk about. They are in the midst of chaos and it is so hard to find some down time simply to reconnect. Hopefully, they will get snippets of that soon. Great update!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! There will be time carved out for them to chat soon! (And for them to be nakie.)
Reviewer: MackinacMaiden (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 18
NO PANTS NO PANTS LOL =)
Seriously though, please update?
-Mack
Author's Response: haha...we are almost to the magic no pants number of reviews. I have faith it'll happen. Next update won't be till next week, though. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: ToTouchTheseInnocentLips (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 18
These were a great couple of chapters! Sorry it took me so long to read and review, but I've been really busy! Great job, though! It was a nice break to have the tough, Votluri Bella back for a bit, but I'm glad it didn't last too long! Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Jazz~
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter(s)!
Reviewer: honey swan (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 18
yay
and i want an EPOV on this!!!!! just love his depressing thoughts O:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! A few people have asked for EPOV on this chapter, but I did not plan on including one. It is tempting, though. Maybe I can do an outtake.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 18
PEOPLE REVIEW!!!! We love a pantless Edward. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for yelling at people to review. It is always appreciated. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 18
He stared at me for a second before rushing to me and wrapping his arms around me. I stood still, but returned his embrace fully..... “You came back, though.” Sweet reunion.
Idle threats; you could no longer stand Bella in a chastity belt than we could. lol. The chapter was definitely review worthy anyway.
Author's Response: Haha, that is true. I would never follow through on that threat. Thanks for the review! Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: pickle123 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 18
Love this story! just wonderful :) Can't wait for your next post!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Fiddle (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 17
'Alice came out of the closet.'
hehehheheheehehe....
great read. I look forward to the updates
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 18
Oh no, Aro in the states and vowing to drag her back kicking and screaming! I'm on pins and needles!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: drednomad (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 18
yeah! Another post! Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 18
A chastity belt? Gross! Seriously... I'm glad she returned. Although I would like to see Edward's side of their reunion.
Author's Response: The 'gross' comment made me laugh out loud. 10 pts. to you! There may be some flashbacks to the reunion next chap that is EPOV, but I'm not going to rewrite their separation and reunion from edward's view. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: way2old4this (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 18
I was so happy to see this updated! Love the story. I would, however, prefer some pantsless Jasper.
Just sayin'.
Author's Response: Mmmm...pantless Jasper. I like the sound of that. Not sure if it would work in this story, though. I'll have to save that one for my next story. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Rie (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 18
I'm loving Bellas' attitude! I'd love to see Edward a little more aggressive...not so mopey. But i really like this story!
Author's Response: I'm not sure if Edward can help being mopey. It's part of his brooding charm. haha. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 18
Yeah! Bella is back with the cullens and rose is being a bitch! I cant wait for more
Author's Response: haha. I love this review. Thanks!
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 18
I love Rosalie! LOL doesn't begin to describe my reaction to this line:
"So, this is nice and all, but Aro and his minions are still running rampant..."
OH, my gosh. I'm crying from laughing, I swear! I don't know why, but that was so unexpectedly hilarious in the middle of that touching reunion.
On a more serious note, I'm glad Bella's back, glad to know there won't be a Vambi part deux, and glad to see she may have some reason to stay with the Cullens beyond running away from the Volturi. I also wanted to say kuddos to you for keeping Bella a vampire in the traditional sense up until now. Most stories (not that I've read many like this exactly) but most of the time when Bella is a vampire without the Cullens, she is suddenly taking to vegetarianism as if it's the easiest thing in the world. Obviously, it shouldn't be that way and so I'm glad that you chose this path with Bella. One roadblock at a time you know?
Great stuff, keep at it! Ginnie
Author's Response: Haha, I love making Rosalie interrupt tender moments. :) Thanks for the awesome review! Glad you are enjoying the story!
Reviewer: lbtucker (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 18
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: littlemonstercpb (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 18
I definitely like the direction you've taken with e and b's relationship. I can't wait for more (pantless or not).
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 18
I'm enjoying this and all, but I'm kind of confused as to why the Cullens, to include Bella, would be concerned about the Volturi. There is no Alec - no Jane - and Bella was able to incapacitate them all pretty easily during her last confrontation. Why she didn't destroy them confused me, given Aro said he would never stop hunting for her.
Anyway, thanks for writing and I look forward to MORE! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! The Volturi are still very large and very strong, even without some of their key players. And also, who knows what kind of minions they have in hiding. haha. As to why Bella didn't kill them all in the forest, a few people asked about that. A) there had to be a bigger battle scene down the road somewhere and B) she had nothing to set them on fire with. Don't worry, that day will come. Thanks again!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 18
Oh no! Not the chastity belt!! Ugh! *g* I'm so glad Bella was coming back to Edward, of course but Aro is a tough Vamp to escape from so how on earth are they going to do that?? You have your hands full now! LOL Bella can't remember any of her human life?? A glimpse now and then might be helpful but you are doing fantastic work here so give us more Edward and Bella! Edward needs more! LOL And Bella needs a little softening up. Go Edward!
*hugs*
Joan
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Bella is softening, slowly but surely. She will still be bad-ass enough to beat Aro, though! Thanks again!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 18
naked time
Author's Response: hahaha...this is literally the best review ever. Simple and to the point. Thanks!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 18
we can't damn bella to chastity for eternity what would be the fun in that?? Oh dear Aro and his minions..hmm...bonfire??
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! We'll have to see about the bonfire...
Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 18
Glad she came back!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
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