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Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh I keep forgetting to mention that I found your story on The Twilight Muses. :)
Woo hoo so Edward got his first blow job, lucky boy.... I am glad Bella's going back to the house and looking forward to having her remember more even if it's not pretty. :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
Pants free??? wooo hooo!!!!!! man poor Bella. I feel for her and everything she is learning and poor Edward it must have tore him apart to watch her leave again. I am really loving your story a lot. The pace is great not too fast or slow just believable :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 12
My heart is breaking for Edward. I can't even imagine what the poor guy is going through. I loved how you showed how they still had chemistry but then let her see through the window at how broken he was it just shows all the emotions in that one small moment.
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ohhh I really loved the chapter. You did a great job of electric chemistry and pain very believable. I mean if you had gone all right into fluff it wouldn't have seemed real. There is a lot of pain still left there and lonelyness they need to work out. :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow reading your notes I can't believe how long it takes for things to go up. Crazy. So Yay they meet and Bella kicked some serious ass. I really like how Edward went all crazy on Demetri and killed his ass that was a really nice touch. okay on with the show! :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 9
Awww poor Bambi :( But Bella is better off without him. Yay Jasper is just sexy and confident love me some Jasper and I really like how you kept his hight and size in line with Jackson. Okay we're off to meet Edward! yipppeeee :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 8
Bella made a bambi vampire?? cool :))))))
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ohhh so she isn't going to be at the forks house. I hope they are seperated for too long. I love how all the crazy thoughts are running through Edward's mind and Bellas :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 6
Man I am still loving drunk Bella. Poor Edward man it did really look like Bella remembered them and that just doesn't look good to them. Okay lets hope they find each other soon so all that drama can begin :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
OMG I love drunk Thursdays! What a great idea! I love this Bella she's funny and more secure and just funny :) Oh man Carlisle must be freaking out! Okay must read on :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
haha I loved your "no cable" comment. Wow so Bella saw Jasper but no one else was there. I wonder what he was doing flying solo in a bar and if he recognized Bella's sent at all. Really looking forward to seeing what the Cullen's have been up to and how much more Bella is going to freak before she finds them and then how much more once she does :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
I am really loving how things are going. The little memories the little bits she is finding it is all fiting so well together. Really looking forward to reading on :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 2
Ohhhhh, I love it Bella a misfit and "playing" with Demitri nice.... Looking forward to her finding out her past and her reactions to everything. :)
Reviewer: Nicoconsd (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh very interesting. I am thinking poor Bradley is a decendent of Edward. Looking forward to reading where you take this. :)
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 18
I hope to read a new chapter soon ^^ I realy like your story ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for all the rates and reviews! Ch 19 is being submitted tonite, so hopefully it will be up in a few days!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 17
Lmao about alice coming out of the closet XD
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 7
Your story is amazing ^^ I'm up for more
Reviewer: laurachristen (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 18
Can't wait to see what happens, great chapter :)
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
oh chastity belts are way kinky in my opinion, think of all the teasing that can happen and all that sexual tension. Oh and the anticipation. Definitely kinky in my book!
Author's Response: It sounds like some tormented hell dimension. That area doesn't need to be locked up. hahaha. I understand where you are coming from, though. ;)
Reviewer: EdwardCullensBella (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 18
I am sooo in love with this story!!! Please hurry and finish it. I can't wait to see how this ends!!! Bravo!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Glad you are enjoying the story so much!
Reviewer: pbear (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 18
Ooh more! I love how you modified Bella's character, and I love how you made her transition into vampirism difficult. I read all 18 chapters on my couch this evening. Please post more! Soon! How long do you think you're going to make it?
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! Glad you enjoyed it so much you read it all at once! I'm not sure how long it will be yet, but at the least it'll probably be around 30 chapters. Most likely more, though. Thanks again!
Reviewer: eeyore501 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 18
Please keep writing. U doing such a good job. Can't wait till next chapter. Thanx
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review!
Reviewer: itsshellyshell (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 18
OH MY GOSH SOO GOOD LOVE IT
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 18
You do realize that either Bela or Edward could break a chasity belt with the strength in either of thier pinkies? I'm just saying... Anyways, I loved the chapter. So great to see E and B back together again.
Author's Response: Well damn. You got me there. I never even considered that. Oh well, I guess they'll just have to screw each others brains out. haha. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 18
chastity belt? hmmm now that is way kinky!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating and review! I've always seen chastity belts as non-kinky, with that whole no-sex part of it, but to each her own. haha. Thanks again!
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